Fire Element? Hydrogen and Oxygen, Boy!

Tomato masterpiece [send heart] The advantage of this book is that the author has arranged everything in advance and has an outline that is not abrupt. Both the protagonist and the NPC have brains, and the combat descriptions and innovations are great [like] The core is the collision of magic and scientific magic as well as the calculations between people. It can be said that it is not a normal cultivation text but a reasoning text with many calculations [exploration] There is nothing sinister about the whole process. The only thing is that this novel still has not strayed away from the male-dominated novel. Almost all the partners the protagonist meets are beauties, and the beauties will be given away for free in a more reasonable way than in other novels [Petrochemical] But overall it is hundreds of times better than other Tomato novels, and it can be given a 500-star rating in Tomato. Not all the beauties in this story have a relationship with the protagonist, they are just friends. There is only one female protagonist [laughing and crying] but the author was naughty in the end.

It is a rare Western fantasy theme in Tomato. The writing is not naive, but it is not sophisticated enough. The article is not very word-counted. The plot is not procrastinating. The final ending is expected but also reasonable. Support the author to start a new book with this ending! To be honest, the current score is low, and above 8.5 Is a normal score.

Interesting setting, not bad word count, not brainless, already exceeds 98% of online articles

It is rare to read a novel chapter by chapter. The plot and anchor points are well laid out. At least there is a desire to follow and a sense of freshness. This is rare for many novels. In many novels, even the author may not be able to bring up the passion and interest in the middle and late stages. Naturally, readers are also lack of interest. They either fast forward or skip chapters, or even read directly to the end. Although this novel is not long, it is relaxed and relaxed, and the emotional scenes are well grasped. It is not something that a fresh author can easily control. I hope to continue to work hard to write better works. In addition, I really don't think that more than 300,000 words is a short story. As long as things are explained clearly, there is a beginning and end, and the emotions are in place, 300,000 words is a long work. Otherwise, even if the entire several million words are ugly and long, it will not be able to attract readers.

The plot is rigorous but not brainless, and the protagonist uses modern knowledge to scientifically practice time travel. This is the real time travel novel! Unlike most time travel stories that only use people traveling through time as a gimmick, their cognition and thinking are still the same as in another world.

It suddenly occurred to me that the protagonist's skill power in the later stages of growth, in addition to nuclear fusion and nuclear fission, should be larger in scale and reach the Gamma ray burst level, which means it is universe-level power [laughing] [what] [thinking]

It's been many years since I've read a Western fantasy web novel in the traditional web style, and it kind of took me back to 2005. Today's novels and novels are full of the impetuous sense of getting something for nothing, such as systems and alien civilizations. On the contrary, there are very few protagonists who use their own knowledge to flexibly use it.

I changed this rating twice. The first time I got two stars, I did feel a bit uninterested at the time, but I decided to continue reading after thinking about it. Probably after chapter 20, I felt a lot better, and then I changed it to three stars. Although there are still some flaws, they are all acceptable and the writing is indeed good. It was not until the end that I decided to give it five stars. You can see that there is an outline. Overall, there are no major problems with this book. Maizi is really powerful, with high talent and strength, outstanding resourcefulness, and connections. Although it is not directly stated, based on what Maizi has done, I am afraid that her connections have at least spread all over the empire. And I think what can be considered a problem is probably the magic setting. Since it's all about science, the setting of magic is very vague, failing to allow magic to be used by science. There is also Jodi's talent. It just talks about the control element without any more detailed analysis and restrictions. To put it bluntly, it is just a failure. It is because of these unclear settings that led to some awkward and imprecise problems, which made me feel bad in the early stage. However, the flaws are not to be concealed. As long as you get used to it, the further you read, the more interesting it becomes. Although the pace of events is relatively compact, I still think this novel is relatively slow-moving, because for me, it is difficult for it to hook me. The personalities of each character are very distinct, but I don't want to say more here (because I'm tired). The final battle and ending are amazing, probably the best part in this book. The saint's plan made the plot advance quickly, and what I didn't expect was that it went directly to the decisive battle. The final battle is exciting and I won't spoil it here. Although I don't know whether there was unification in the ending, at least the internal conflicts were resolved and the empire developed tremendously.

The skin of Xihuan, the bones of Xiu Xian, but the writing is really good, especially the operation of the Maizi plan later. One person designs to kill all the current strong people. The plan is quite thorough. Everyone has their own obsession and they keep working hard for their obsession. It is quite good.

Rather innovative. And among a lot of mindless and cool articles on Tomato, such an unsystematic and thoughtful book can be said to stand out. The story is complete (except for some unfilled holes), and the ending is open-ended, leaving a lot of room for readers to reflect and think. Some philosophy and sociology content. All in all worth a look!

Very well written, author, will you take out the core?

The subject matter is novel and you can learn some chemistry knowledge while reading mindlessly.

This is what a cool article should be like, and that's it. It's just too short and doesn't have a lot of depth. But it's really fun to watch.

Give the character a name. Don't be too cliche. Give it a Western name, with a string of [snicker][snicker][snicker][smirk]

I have just read more than 20 chapters. Although reading novels is a carrot and cabbage, I personally feel that the book is definitely low at 7:00 and 8:50. It should be there: in the current era, an old man and an old lady travel through a tomato with a concubine and a group of children to spend the lean years. The Western magic theme is still refreshing, especially the relaxed content that uses science to analyze magic, but the plot is still an old routine. Keep reading~

I finally found a novel that satisfied me so much. The author has real knowledge. It shocked me several times. The novels I read before were all lacking in knowledge. After reading this novel, I felt so comfortable and relaxed.

The plot setting, structure setting and character setting are perfect. After finishing, it is recommended to add elements of technological change or mechanical elements. Elements where the protagonist organizes and builds forces to change the world can better increase the rating and make the novel more attractive, thereby reaching the top novel.

Personally, I feel that it is quite good. Although the writing style needs to be improved, the plot is quite good. It can be seen that the author is writing very carefully.

The story is interesting. The worldview is logical. There is logic in that there are foreshadowings, clues, and explanations for the advancement of events. The description of the duel scene is both neat and exciting, and the author has some skill in storyboarding.

The setting is novel and the plot is interesting. The most important thing is that it is a good article that is carefully written without clichés or routines.

Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking

It's a very good book, it's thoughtful [laughing] It's not too brainless, it's quite interesting.

Not bad. Single female lead senior. There is a female partner who is more than a lover but not a friend. Science and magic new track

Brothers, I feel that if this book is written at a later stage and coupled with popular science, it can be used as a chemistry teaching aid!

Not bad at Rotten Persimmon

It looks good. It doesn't have many tomatoes.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I'm not very good at talking, so I'll give it a five-star review. I hope the author will keep updating.

Lelelelelelelele, it kills me

Okay, okay, it's been a long time since I've seen this kind of time traveler's knowledge really useful.