My Cool Roommate's Lips Are Swollen from Kissing, and You Still Say You're Straight

The characters are three-dimensional, and it can be seen that there is a certain basis for writing. However, the plot is too bland and the pace is too slow. It is recommended to delete some repetitive and protracted plots and add a bit of dramatic conflict.

I'm looking forward to it at the end. Later, Qiaobo will find out that 1 is getting close to him because of a bet and then get angry. Will 1 come to coax him again? Or will he take the initiative to explain to Qiao Bai? I'm quite looking forward to it. It's good to be a little sadistic. 1'S purpose of getting close to Qiao Bai is indeed not simple.

It's very beautiful, Chi Yan is so funny hahahahahahaha, it's really funny [laughter][laughter cry][laughter cry][laughter cry] (ps: It's not Chi Yan's fault to fall in love with Qiao Bai, after all, who wouldn't like the beautiful Qiao Bai who is kind, loving, patient and gentle [Adore][Admiration][Admiration])

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! What the teacher wrote is great! Qiao Bai and Chi Yan are the best in the world! The people in the book are all very good babies ~ (^з^)-♡ (bushi: except Zhang Ha and the bad monitor, etc.) They will continue to be happy in the days that we can't see🥰! Pseudo-orthopaedics is He Qianlima, if so, then count me as a wise person (bushi) (ps: It doesn't matter if it's not, haha) Oh my god! I love this book so much, I must rate it!

It's a bit bland, and now that the main characters are together, it doesn't feel very sweet. But I can still read it, the language is okay, and there is nothing that offends me so far. The only thing I have to say is Chi Yan's inexplicable malice and bet towards Qiao Bo at the beginning. (The fact that I can still remember the protagonist's name shows that I have watched it for a long time [laughs])

Teacher, I'm going to chase your next book and give you a small gift! ! ! Teacher, I will always follow you! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫

The writing is very delicate, the protagonist's emotional changes are not abrupt, and the characters are full of character.

It's really sweet and beautiful. The author is also very cute. I like Qiao Bai very much 😳

Super sweet little text

It's super pretty, really. I love the character so much. Author I will always follow you 💕💕💕