After I Transmigrated into a Book, I Fell for the Heroine Who’s Supposed to Kill Me

The early stage is indeed very interesting. There is no doubt that the male and female protagonists are very full. I really don't understand why I didn't write down the sweetness of this love and insisted on writing some swords. Maybe it's because I'm not a real book fan. This book probably won't be released, but I hope the author will work hard. I still want to see the love between Sheng Sheng and Xiyan. Let me say it again, I started following the story from the first chapter and it was really unbearable to put down. It was well written and reminded me of the story of a middle school boy and a girl who was cold on the outside and hot on the inside. It reminded me of the past. I personally still don't like knives. After all, life is hard enough, and most people still want something sweet to satisfy their desires. Come on big [love] Brother, you finally continued to write, I cried to death [crying]

Overall, the plot is relatively smooth, except that the reincarnation part is not well prepared, which will make readers who do not have a summary of the previous story feel strange and stiff. The pursuit of love and falling in love can be regarded as daily romance, and the plot routines are not new. Most romance novels have scene links, such as beach vacations, swimsuits, birthdays, whispers, etc., But it does create an atmosphere of love for readers. The shy and sweetness makes people recall their youthful years in school. The farewell and goodbye chapter is a big turning point. Although the reincarnation setting can be said to be leftover from online novels, it is really useful and can make readers feel heartbroken. Xiyan and Chusheng can only live together, but the male protagonist who still loves Xiyan deeply after a hundred reincarnations will give the female protagonist hope for life and pave the way for a good future for her. This kind of love makes people linger. It's no wonder that after Xiyan learned the truth, she missed Chu Sheng like an obsession. This is very reasonable. Let's talk about the breakup plot, which really resonates with readers. The heartbreak of a person being broken up with, the humble attempt to keep the other person, the darkness of the world in their heart, the constant self-reflection, whether they would have broken up if they had done better, etc., Are true portrayals of breakups in real life. There is also the longing that rains and falls, the expectation of hoping to meet each other by chance, and the growth of each other after the breakup, it is really painful and real. At this point, I can completely understand Xi Yan's feelings, so I really feel uncomfortable with these knives. But there is a feeling that in the farewell and goodbye chapters, some chapters are very clumsy, procrastinating, and slowing down the advancement of the story, but I will not name specific chapters here. Finally, there is the current love chapter, which returns to the daily routine of love, except that the offense and defense are exchanged. From this point of view, this book is still far from being completed, because the author can completely learn from the plot of Chasing Love and Falling in Love and rewrite it with slight changes. There is too much content to write. But I still hope to advance the main plot a little under the premise of sweet love, such as the treatment of Li Nianyi and others, the treatment of Qiangwei, etc. I can't finish it, there's so much that can be written, and I haven't even introduced the character of Li Yunyun from the milk tea shop yet. In short, I hope Xi Yan and Chu Sheng can always be happy and not have to deal with it again.

It took me two days to catch up on the latest chapter. Although the description is a bit rough in some places, I don't deny that this is a very good book in terms of plot. I saw a lot of people in the comment area saying that the front and back were not smooth and could not be understood. I did have some doubts before, but after reading it, I can only say that all the previous ones are to pave the way for the reversal of the main plot, leading to the inevitable conflict between the male and female protagonists, and highlighting the centuries. The undying love of the male protagonist of Watch, pure love is invincible, and the pull and entanglement between them is really painful and resonant for those who read it. For readers who say that they can't understand, I still hope that you can be more patient and read it slowly, instead of getting entangled in those irrelevant flaws. After all, this is a novel, not reality, and I am not a sailor. I only write this out of my feelings. The story between them should be discovered by more people.

4 Stars because the first chapter to chapter 57 are all very well written. One star is missing because after chapter 75 it feels like it was written by a different author. I can't explain the feeling clearly. It clearly feels like it was not written by one person. It feels like it was put together by two people after writing. I don't know if it's my illusion. You can go and take a look for yourself. Overall it's pretty good, recommended, well, highly recommended! ! !

I just feel that the description of the heroine's character is really good and very real. Unlike some novels with single heroines that I have read before, the writing for the heroine is very thin. I fell in love with it after just a little contact. I fell in love with it and felt that the emotional drama came out of nowhere. In this book, the heroine is also very firm and gets along more naturally. The character set up by the author at the beginning for the heroine has not collapsed. It feels like she is flesh and blood, and the male protagonist has his own ideas.

It looks good, but it's too little, and there are too many characterizations and a lot of nonsense. I hope there are more details and meaningful things. The proportion of character thoughts and complaints is a bit too much. It can be reduced a little, but it is also your characteristic. I don't dislike it. I suggest you add 6,000 words a day. Hehe Judging from the current plot, I really feel sorry for Xi Yan and Chu Sheng. They love each other but can't embrace each other. One gets the light and loses it, and the other knows that he can bear it all alone.

I'll give you a five-star review and restore the male protagonist's face to its original appearance [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

Overall, it's okay. I'm very imaginative, but the only complaint I have is that there are too many chapters about knives. I can only say that it's suitable for readers who are particularly patient. Those who want to see industrial saccharin, please move on.

This novel really made me unable to put it down. From the moment you turn the first page, you will be firmly grasped by its unique narrative rhythm. The plot progresses smoothly, with exciting turns and touching foreshadowing hidden in the details. When I look back at the end of the book, I realize that those seemingly casual descriptions have already been connected into a complete emotional context. In the end, the update was too slow.

To be honest, it was pretty good. It was very sweet and funny in the early stage. Although it was a bit harsh in the later stage, I was so moved that I cried. After Chen Chusheng was resurrected, it was a sweet story. Overall, I think the writing was very good. I think there were less poisonous points. Alpha's reaction was very real, and the unequal fight and hug for the male protagonist also happened to promote the story. When it comes to the development of the plot, the blond maid is written in a very three-dimensional way. Qiangwei is also a relatively vivid character. I think the heroine and her mother are also written in a three-dimensional way. The other supporting characters, well, I can only say they are supporting characters. Anyway, overall I think the writing is very interesting, touching, funny, sweet, and sadistic. It's pretty good. Good luck to the author! ! ! [Love][Laughing][Like]