The Spiritual Roots Are Exposed at the Beginning, and the Fox Demon Junior Sister Practices Repaying Kindness

It looks good, the world view seems to be that of a game world, there are a lot of foreshadowings, the junior sister is very cute, the interaction is very good, and the emotional line is also well written. I hope it will be a single female protagonist. Promise me, other inexplicable women will sacrifice to heaven to strengthen the protagonist, okay? I can do anything [Sending Hearts]

Well, I think pasta should be mixed with No. 42 Concrete, because the length of this screw can easily directly affect the torque of the excavator. When you smash it in, it will produce a large amount of high-energy protein in an instant, commonly known as UFO, which will seriously affect the development of the economy. It will even cause nuclear pollution to the entire Pacific Ocean and the charger. In other words, the Pythagorean theorem can easily infer that the artificially raised Tojo eagle chicken can capture wild trigonometric functions. Therefore, regardless of whether Qin Shihuang's section is radioactive or whether Trump's Nth power contains sediment, it will not affect the meeting of Wal-Mart and Welcome in the Antarctic. Summary: The style remains the same as always, I love to watch it and post more [smirk]

It's a good-looking movie. It's a 1v1 love story with a single female protagonist, but it's a bit too cool, but the CP of the male and female protagonists is very good. The female protagonist is a nine-tailed sky fox with white fur and red eyes. She's very cute. The author seems to be a lolita fan. I hope that in the follow-up plot, the male protagonist will not have romantic relationships with other women, please do it all [take your life as a sacrifice to my supreme swordsmanship]

Highly recommended, full marks. If you don't watch it, you will miss it and regret it for the rest of your life. First, the author is already invincible. The author is so full of life. The author is a character. The corners of my mouth are already harder to press than AK. I won't say more, you know. Second, the author can freely switch between the non-serious and the serious. The plot is okay in the beginning and may seem a bit off, but it gets better later on. Finally, believe me, you must see the back part, it is really beautiful. After seeing the latest, you may wonder what is going on in this world?

The writing is pretty good so far. The background setting in the first few chapters was a bit confusing to me, but it gets better and better later on. I haven't seen any bad points so far. It's really a new book that is interesting. Even if I don't like the male protagonist's character, I can still watch it, but I won't have much motivation to watch it.

It's quite emotional, with both the male and female protagonists being arrogant. It shouldn't be a harem story, nor a system story. Although it's a bit vague in the early stages, it's a foreshadowing story. It's quite fun later on, but I'm curious about how it will be written in the future.

Strongly, strongly, highly recommended, very potential. At present, in my opinion, it is far more than this rating, at least 9.6 9.7 It is equivalent to a comprehensive modern upgraded version of the classic X-point immortal novel. The level of wits, characterization, emotional drama, characteristics and funny jokes can already be compared with some classic old novels. The writing style is not particularly outstanding and is pretty good. It is basically not poisonous. There are just a few minor issues with the pacing, some parts are very jumpy, and the whole main plot is a bit too rushed. For example, the protagonist's sect is almost unreadable before he's familiar with it. There is no description of the heroine. I don't know what she looks like. I only know that she has a cute personality. The battle between Zhao Teng and Zhao Teng reaches its peak, which is really good to watch. The progress of the dual-line narrative between the two worlds is slightly flawed. Including the previous ones, I can give them all 9.7 Or above. I can completely rub a lot of classic and old-fashioned fairy tales on the ground with the same structure. They are very praised and recommended to everyone to read. But the setback was really obvious after that. I was a little too anxious to promote the plot, and it was uncomfortable to pretend to be a cliché. The heroine disappeared, and some of the fates also disappeared, so all the highlights were lost. If you want to write about reverse fatalism, you can just write about a few changes in destiny. In this way, the protagonist's first-mover advantage will be completely lost, and the male and female protagonists will have no growth in hundreds of chapters and there will really be nothing to watch. Since the female supporting characters make it clear that they have nothing to do with the protagonist, they shouldn't spend so much time shaping them. The female protagonist doesn't have as many roles as the supporting characters, and no one wants to watch others fall in love. As a result, there is no interaction at all. The old man came extremely unexpectedly, even as a child's play, yet he was still so friendly; and he left inexplicably. The protagonist does not show any special points at all. It seems to be acceptable to say that a low level of cultivation can survive, and that the remnant soul cannot be possessed by too strong a spirit. In fact, it is absurd and uninteresting. It can be written based on the inheritance of the fallen dragon to make some interesting dramas. And it's originally a boring part of the male and female protagonist's life and death. What's the point of putting a light bulb in there? The Chaotic Sea of Stars was originally an excellent plot location attached to the Great Wilderness to keep a low profile, but in the end it was actually written as two points and one line. After escaping from the Great Wilderness, the plot rhythm should be relaxed and get information. Now I am confused and it all depends on the author's providence to control the character and make the protagonist lick blood with his sword. It is a headache. Later, there is a plot where the female protagonist is submissive to the male protagonist. After so many times, the old married couple has not become a good person and they are like their subordinates. Doesn't this ruin the character? It's a bit outrageous. According to rumors, the copyright was sold and now the gunman is writing it. What else can I say? It is a pure act of destroying books and accounts, discarding the good and chasing the last.

First let me talk about the specific label. It should be single woman cultivating immortality (which is rather weird) This book is very good, at least for me. The writing is passable. The emotional line is ok. There is no classic. The author does have some strength. The plot is quite cool. I feel like I should put a knife on the neck of the reviewer to pass. It should be about to be taught. The male and female protagonists had a quarrel. In terms of soul, the male protagonist teaches the female teacher to train. The female protagonist helps the male protagonist to defeat the inner demon (maybe). After my experience, it is suitable for the public perception of Tomato. The male protagonist also has the benevolence and justice of Uncle Liu Huang. I have to say Good job I hope the author can write more, it's a bit too little. The relationship between my sister and the emperor's uncle is really good. I hope you will get along well for a hundred years. Let us readers eat the wedding candy as soon as possible. Otherwise, I will not let you go. After all, it is my sister who writes the best for such high-end operations as education and training.

Okay, I've read a lot of them lately, and finally there's one that I can't help but give a favorable review. Although I basically only read single women, and I don't know the positioning of this book, the emotional descriptions in the front are quite delicate. There is no brainless plot, but a step-by-step approach. This alone deserves a high score. The writing is pretty good, and it has great potential.

I'll give it five stars. The new book has 200,000 words and 500,000 readers. It's considered a hit. It's probably not a eunuch. I've also read the author's first two books. This one with a junior female protagonist is so strong. I read through the book reviews and most of them are for single female protagonists. If the author doesn't go crazy, she must be a single female (but there is no label, and the author didn't say anything. Her love talent is too suitable for a harem (ᗜ‸ᗜ))

The author is great. From what I have seen so far, the overall story is very good. The rhythm is smooth. The protagonist is very individual. It is not like other mindless novels I have read, and it is full of laughs. Overall, there is nothing worthy of criticism. But as a reader, I definitely want to see the author be better. Let others see the novels I follow and praise him. It is worthy of praise. I can make 2 suggestions, but it is not a big problem whether to change it or not. One is Su Jiu's favorability score of 50, which is already like this. It's just a matter of saying that my good opinion of you is very high and written on my face. As long as you are willing, you can actually make a smoother transition, because the plot is only about seventy chapters. In fact, as long as the writing is good, readers will not mind whether the plot is fast or not. This is one of them. The second one is to hide underground to avoid thunder tribulation. This is actually a bit unreasonable. This thunder tribulation itself is a punishment sent down by heaven. It is not an exaggeration to call it a punishment from heaven. Not to mention it is specifically targeted at ordinary people who survive the thunder tribulation. If you hide underground, they will condense thunder clouds underground. You Hiding in the small world, he will gather in the small world. It doesn't mean where you hide and break through. As long as the breakthrough is successful, he will not give you a thunder disaster. Anyway, I have never heard of it. Or there are novels about hiding underground or in a small world to survive the thunder disaster. If this is really feasible, don't those big guys know about it? Directly use this method to go underground every time you want to break through. How many years have passed in the world of cultivation, and there are countless monks who have survived the thunder tribulation, or have not survived it. The path these ancestors have taken and the accumulated experience are only a lot more. And will God allow such a bug to exist? I didn't make any specific suggestions, I just pointed out the unreasonable points. Will the residents change them? How to change it? Either way, let the author spread his thoughts [Taste carefully][OK][Eat the melon]

The brothers found the treasure! I really like this plot! The junior fox girl with white hair and red eyes is really cute. The character of the protagonist is also very well-shaped. She kills when she needs to be killed and kills when she needs to be killed. This is the most comfortable episode.

This book is very good and won my heart. It's a pity that I discovered this book earlier. The male and female protagonists are well portrayed, and the plot in the text is hilarious The man is funny and arrogant compared to the woman, and the interaction and confrontation are very interesting Adding jokes from the ground up, secretly developing feelings that are hard to describe Among all the good books from Western countries, there are even fewer authors from Madhu "Quick update - can't sleep at night" [angry] [angry] [angry] You know the author's point, don't let it go, otherwise what will I see [laughing evilly]

It's very good. I suggest adding a single-heroine tag. In fact, this novel has been on the recommendation list for a few days. I read it today and found it to be quite good. It's just because the introduction was a bit unclear. I thought it was a harem novel at first and didn't plan to read it. It would be better to change the introduction

It looks good, but the whole thing is a bit bumpy. The car is very nice. After watching it for a long time, I realized it was a single female protagonist, ugh

The early stage is a bit boring and has some flaws. The plot after Chapter 21 starts to have novel features, so it shouldn't be difficult to read. This book has humorous daily life and imaginative breakthroughs; it has the insistence that "my heart and my actions are as clear as a mirror, and everything I do is worthy of guilt"; there is the aloofness and restraint of "I ride through the wind, flowers, snow and moon without asking about the sky, and the world does not know that I am an immortal"; there is the pride and tenacity of "the belief that I am a real dragon falling from the mortal world, and all sufferings are just dragons lurking in the abyss"... If these are not enough to attract people, then there is the white-haired and arrogant Junior Sister Tianhu, who has a natural and brilliant writing style in this book. It's a cool article with deep flaws. In comparison, the five stars seem a bit higher.

Shen He, you prey on people [crying] A great novel, the plot is cool, the setting is okay, and the relationship is online. The best thing about it is the single female protagonist. It is a pity that the author was locked in a dark room and broke off the love (exaggeration) to push the plot crazily and planned to finish it [crying] My little Liu Xuande (uncle of the emperor) is gone forever I understand, when he defeated Zhao Teng, the male protagonist actually sacrificed his spiritual roots and walked on the path originally arranged by Heaven. From then on, he broke up with love and cultivated his skills rapidly. Then, after the female protagonist was elbowed and flew away, the path of life and death was taken away by Heaven. The male and female protagonists both became puppets of Heaven. Everything is explained [Thinking]

I really admire the author's imagination and thinking. This book is so good. The combination of reversal, comedy, and emotional drama is so good. It's interesting, and the writing is delicate and relaxed. I enjoyed reading it. I read it in the middle of the night and couldn't sleep. Help [Adoration] [Adoration] The author must keep writing. I will give you a small gift to support the author [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts]

(Evaluate based on my own feelings, don't criticize if you don't like it [crying]) Let's talk about the advantages first: 1. The driving is very obscure; 2. The junior sister is very good-looking; 3. The plot is more ups and downs and has some cool points. Let's talk about the shortcomings: 1. At present, the author has reached chapter 512. I read chapter 502. I don't know if it is my illusion. I feel that after arriving in the upper world, the destiny system of this world will be like a fiction. The protagonist's destiny also became transparent in the later stage. It seems that no one in the upper world has a destiny? 2. The protagonist's leapfrog battle is too exaggerated (this is understandable, after all, he is the protagonist, and the author cannot write that well). The protagonist either does not level up, or reaches two major realms in a row, which feels very abrupt; 3. The update is too slow (this is very important) In the final summary, the overall situation is pretty good so far, and it's still worth a look. I hope the author can improve the shortcomings [eat melon] [learned]

Needless to say, it is great. It is one of the very few in Tomato that is very hard to find. What's more, the content inside is quite novel. The male and female protagonists are also very good. The author must not give up. This is the affirmation of a 4000-hour Tomato bookworm. It is much higher quality than some other books. I am reading another one now and wait until I finish chasing the 5 stars (the other one is also good-looking, um, it feels different [smile] Author, you have really played with it [smile] [smile] [smile]) I'll take another look emmmm... I feel like it might not be there yet

There is a villain named Wang San in this book, who keeps making fun of the protagonist, but the protagonist has never been able to kill him. Just like the little junior concubine who slanders the senior sister in female videos, she can always escape even if she is killed by force. I searched a short section using full-text search, and found that Wang San is still alive after more than 30 chapters.

I feel that the pace was slower in the early stage, and the character design was very good, and the details and foreshadowing were very good. However, in the later stage, I felt that the pace was too fast, and I felt that the plots of other characters, such as Netherworld and Su Jiu, were missing. Now even There are very few descriptions of the destiny lottery after the protagonist breaks through. I really like this book, which is very good, but I feel that your style has changed recently, and I feel like you want to end the story quickly. I really hope you can return to your original heart. I really like this book.

Immerse yourself in the book and forget about time, each chapter brings shock to the soul and enlightenment of thoughts. The author's writing style is delicate and sincere, and the story resonates strongly, making you unable to calm down for a long time after reading it. It is both a treasure house of knowledge and spiritual food. It has become a habit to read it before going to bed every night. [Note][Note]

A good single female protagonist, Xiao Liu Bei (currently there is only one female protagonist, and the other female protagonists who are close to the male protagonist are all sacrificed to swords [laughing]) Now from the introduction and the two previous books I wrote about Card Maker and The Banished Lord of the Stars, I guess that this book should still have a single female protagonist.

I have seen the most detailed description of the emperor's uncle in Tomato so far, and he is still a flower played by you city people... The name was not chosen well. I browsed the online clips to read it, otherwise I would never click on the name. It was a bit weird in the early stage, but it felt good after I clicked on it. Regardless of the imaginative jokes and writing style, at least it is considered top-notch in the Tomato refreshing genre. It is all based on the support of peers, but it is still very short. I don't know how long it can maintain its level... The plot is still relatively compact at the moment. If I have to say it, there is a vague sense of weirdness in the idea of ​​a female channel, but it is a cool article. If it is not too outrageous, I can not think about it... But it is really painful to watch the series. If I can't find anything good recently, I still want to wait until it is finished. Every time I pretend to be cool, it makes people excited. This is the kind of cool article I want to read. Even though I saved up for a month to read it, I still only read this little bit. I am really anxious.

I came across this book from the home page. I saw the updates in one go and thought it was very good. It is considered to be of high quality in Tomato. When I clicked on it, I saw that the author was an old friend. I have been following the book since the first card book. I left Tomato for a while, but I didn't expect that the author would open a new book. It can only be said that the progress has been huge. The first book ended with some confusing card writing. The second book has improved a lot but the main plot is still lacking. This book is simply a qualitative leap. The author's character creation has always been very good. The story line and plot of this book are still perfect until now. There are also weird plots in the middle. I can only say that it is a masterpiece that completely touched my heart. At this rate of progress, I will be able to write a masterpiece about tomatoes in a few books, so I must keep writing it.

This book was weighed down by its title. I read it 4 times before clicking in. Overall, it's good. The plot rhythm and character descriptions are not bad. Especially the 2D storyline is novel and creative.

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The specific background of traditional immortality novels is not very new, but this kind of bad leather cover tests the author's writing skills. Obviously the author of this book is qualified. I rarely finish a book in one day. Firstly, the writing style of this book is exquisite, the language is humorous, and the conception is strange but logical. There is not much sense of disobedience in the whole article. The reading experience is good, and the quality is surprisingly high. If it can maintain the status quo, it will definitely achieve a lot in the future. Secondly, a common problem with new books is that they are "short"! Moreover, failure to see results in the short term may very well lead to the abortive demise of the new book, so I hope I can get through this difficulty. Temporarily list it as a five-star support.

To be honest, the first part was very good-looking, sweet and royal, and I enjoyed watching the single female protagonist. But in the second part, after escaping from the mine after ascension, it became very strange. The previous system was completely useless. The male protagonist just kept killing and robbing, and then there was basically no interaction with the female protagonist. To be honest, it's a bit behind the AI, but the front is very nice.