Twinkle Twinkle: The Demon Lord System

Objectively speaking, the author should have a relatively complete outline, with a lot of foreshadowing and a plot that is basically new and not as polished as the original. But for me, that's it. Looking at it now, Jiu Xing's stealing star is undoubtedly a lot of poison, but for me, it is indeed a childhood regret. Because of the author's favoritism towards October, Liu Xing's plot has been heavily occupied, and the heroine Jiu Xing is rarely made into a plot tool. It is really a pity. The fanfics I want to read are novels that change these regrets. Liu Xing's efforts are rewarded, Jiu Xing is no longer a plot tool, and the emotional development is logical. I don't care if it's a single heroine or a harem story, and I don't want to watch Ryusei cheat and crush everything. What I want to see is that Liu Xing's efforts can affect the ending of the story, and that Yue Yue can truly act as a heroine, and that the emotional line with Liu Xing develops normally, steadily and unstoppably. The two of them making love is what I long for the most.

Only represents my personal opinion: To be honest, I didn't know that September's behavior was okay before reading the comics, but after learning about it, it's hard to have a good impression of September. This book is similar to other reviews. The plot, world view, etc. Are well grasped, but I really feel that the character of the protagonist is a bit useless (in the early stage). I agree with the tolerant attitude. After all, the strength is not enough, but I always feel that I am being played back and forth by the little witch and September. Although I appreciate the plot It's good, but it's quite toxic to individuals. Either be direct, or don't easily trust others to develop their abilities to complete tasks. If you make a mistake, there must be a price, rather than simply being forgiven. It's too frustrating, but the later stage is still quite good. I hope the protagonist can always have a normal logical character, and don't end up directly becoming the character of the original book (you know the plot, okay, don't rely on the original book) The writing style is stable, there is no deep emotional resonance, and the scene atmosphere is not outstanding enough. However, as one of the few star-stealing fans, it is still worth recommending. If necessary, you can skip to the early chapters and give it a four-star rating for the time being to see what happens later.

Does the author have Cang Yue in Meteor Harem? Does the heroine have Cang Yue? Author

So far it seems interesting, but one thing I don't understand is why the little witch is always in a hurry to send her husband away? It's somewhat poisonous. [Petrochemical]

Come on, now I have a guess about the identity of the little witch, I feel like she should be that woman [laughing and crying]

I have something to say, let's not talk about whether it is good to write or not. Whether you can persist in writing is another question. I have already read two of the star-stealing books that have been discontinued.

A poisonous point is that if the mission fails, it will erase the It's time to start getting awesome. The protagonist finally really stands up at the beginning of the second volume.

It's pretty good, and there's no big problem with the plot. Different from the previous star-stealing, stronger demon king, the doomsday destruction cannon conforms to the original setting

One of the few star-stealing articles, and the quality is surprisingly high

Very good, let Liu Xing have a harem and enjoy it