Huangsha Bone Burial Station: from Post Soldier to Emperor

The struggle and growth of the low-level people in troubled times are spread out against the background of the yellow sand sky, and the atmosphere is well created. The author's writing skills are solid, and the description of the environment is very picturesque. The scenes of desert wind and sand, fireworks at the inn, and troubled times seem to be right in front of you. He has also put a lot of effort into character creation. The protagonist is at the bottom but is unwilling to sink. His character is rich in layers and is no longer thin. The cheating protagonist can make people sympathize with the difficult situation of small people trying to survive. The shortcoming is that the overall narrative pace is too fast, some plots are advanced a bit hastily, many turns are sudden, and the description of some bridge sections is slightly exaggerated, lacking a little foreshadowing process. The psychological changes of many characters and the causal logic of events can be further polished and refined. Overall, this is a work with great potential. The story concept is very good, and the theme of counterattack from the bottom is very attractive. If the pace of the narrative can be slowed down a bit in the future, more foreshadowing can be added to the key plots, some exaggerated descriptions can be restrained, and the character's mental journey can be portrayed more completely, the completeness and appeal of the story will reach a higher level. I am very much looking forward to subsequent updates.

I think, a novel author with good writing style It can really bring the resonance of the text to readers, and the immersive environment expressed in the text, as well as the description of the appearance of the characters, allow us to independently imagine the emotions of the characters, and we will also bring in our independent joy, anger, sorrow and joy to follow the protagonist. I don't know whether this sentence is appropriate or not: "When talking about joy, words and laughter are combined, and when discussing sorrow, we cry together." A good article can really make people feel stuck and unable to get out. Often when they see that the reality is the same as the scene described in the text, they will feel like their memories are coming back.

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The author's writing skills are profound, his descriptions are clear, detailed, and not verbose. The main line is novel, and the overall framework is high-level. It is a pity to cut it off. There are many high-quality works in Tomatoes that are unknown and buried in the yellow sand.

Yes, the conflict in the writing is intense

It fits the history and the storyline is touching. You can continue watching.

It is very beautiful, with a tragic and majestic momentum. The author's writing is very good, the description is accurate and beautiful, and it has a poetic feeling.

The author's writing style is sophisticated and delicate, and his descriptions are penetrating. Super exciting!

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