Harry Potter: Heir to the Legacy

The author should work hard, it's rare to find a book with a heroine other than Hermione [Like] But don't be perfunctory. The later stage obviously feels less serious than the early stage. For example, the story about Qiu's Firebolt was mentioned many times. It may be that the book has no results, but you have to work hard and let more people see it. The writing is okay. Please give it some encouragement by giving it good reviews.

It's more daily life and the writing is very harmonious. As the grandson of a time traveler, he masters ancient magic. It's relatively bland, with no strong conflicts and no hidden secrets. Personal opinion: When the story reaches the normal storyline of Harry, he is actually still a bystander. Although he participates, it seems that there is not much change from the original story.

Overall the plot is good, but the writing is not particularly good for a newbie. If I write a few more books and improve my writing skills, I should be able to get a score of 9 or so. The plot is still good.

It feels okay, but there is nothing that attracts me (except for Qiu). It is quite satisfactory and does not arouse people's emotions. Although there are some conflicts, I still feel it is quite flat. It may be a problem of description. I hope the next book will be better (I hope it will still be the heroine Qiu, which is relatively rare)

It's okay, but I think it would be more interesting if Ed was the Defense Against the Dark Arts professor [laughter]

I don't see where Invincible is

Come on, author, it looks great as a daily routine!

It's a rare Harry Potter fanfic that I can still read if Hermione is not the heroine.

The sense of ordinary daily life is quite good.

It looks pretty good so far, the plot is smooth and the plot is more daily.