(Single female protagonist, slow to develop, border prison company intrudes into (?) Academy stream, self-set plot, no self-set cards. Newbie on the road, I hope readers can give me more opinions)
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Under the neon projection, in the dark rainy night.
The back of each card is etched with an unknown vortex mark.
Every reading from the duel disk, every moment when every soul trembles——
In his ears, only the whispers from the cards remained.
Destiny is stuck in reincarnation, but the eternal thing is the cry of friends...
On both sides of the dueling platform, above the projection, are glimpses of the world beyond.
I... Who am I?
By the way, I should be "Youshi Wedge".
At that time, I had never dueled with anyone.
In this world where everyone is crazy about "Duel"... There doesn't seem to be much I can do.
It doesn't matter if you transfer to Duel Academy, or you can start encountering Duel Monsters from scratch.
At first, I just wanted to find my kidnapped father.
That's all.
It's just that... As the cycle goes on and on, tragedies always happen one after another.
And what can I do? Always very little.
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I don't want to be stuck in the past.
I don't want to let my friends and my father die in countless wrong futures.
Maybe, I really can't do anything.
But... You know what?
Even if the monster on the card thrusts its fangs right in front of our eyes.
Even the most important person has his claws piercing my chest.
Even in the end, you forgot me and I missed you——
I... Will definitely bring you back.
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Reader comments
It's very good. The duel part is better than many written ones. At least it's not that boring. It does have the feeling of soul collision in the original Yu-Gi-Oh!
But let me give you a few suggestions, author. You don't need to publish so many words in one chapter. You can write it separately. A chapter of 2,000 words is enough. Some people only read the number of chapters and not the number of words. I used to save novels with less than 100 chapters first.
Then there's the title. Isn't this title a bit too serious? Wouldn't a title like "The White-Haired Girl Also Wants to Play with the Ancient Giant Machine" be better? [Eat melon]
It's super nice and feels like I'm watching anime (although I only play cards and don't watch anime)! ! But the popularity is low because of Yu-Gi-Oh...(-｡-;
But it doesn't matter~\(≧▽≦)/~
Gold will definitely shine! Rating☆full☆speed☆forward☆line☆da☆
Also:
Please can the author write Galaxy Eye (;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`)
In actual combat, our Galaxy Eye cards were so bad that our cards exploded, but it was really easy to write and very soulful.
Please let the author create a character whose life is a four-star light attribute magician monster whose effect is to increase his star level by four and free himself to retrieve a "Galaxy" card from the deck and add it to his hand~~
Vadasi can't do anything orz
Hmm... This is my first time writing a book review... Try to write some duse
First of all, Juji Ku's deck is quite cool. We who play Electronic Dragon are famous for being in prison. Recently, we have followed K9 on the pie chart, but Juji Ku is quite rare. The author writes that this deck can be said to be a very novel experience.
Secondly, it seems that there are no bugs in the duel at present, but maybe it's because I'm a bit of a Red King reader, and I can't understand some of the backgrounds (laughs)
Anyway, I wish the author can continue to create, and I will continue to support him (laughs)
above
You! A+!
Have a taste:
Advantages:
The character creation is quite excellent, with distinct personalities and flesh and blood.
The psychological description is delicate and the protagonist's growth is obvious.
There is currently no cerebral hemorrhage during the card playing session.
Details in place
Chef N is ecstatic
Disadvantages (personal opinion):
The protagonist has too much inner drama, it can be reduced appropriately
The pace is too slow, it took less than 8 hours to finish 16W words....
Question:
About the division: How to determine Bailong (fusion zone coherence axis) and electron (fusion zone excess axis)
Regarding reinforcements: In the future, the protagonist will take Thermonuclear Dragon. If a protagonist with such a soul fills the deck with his own, the risk of getting stuck is very high (souls will be the end). Will general reinforcements be added to the protagonist's deck?
Regarding the plot: Will there be an original deck? Can you still fight back when an electronic dragon is rolled over by a tire? Will the electronic player be the first time the protagonist suffers?
Makes me feel strong
It's a great read. It can be seen that the author is very attentive and I would like to give my full support [laughing evilly] [full]
Can there be a gem knight in the fusion department? [Sinister smile]
When I read this book, I felt like I was teaching newbies how to get started, and I felt very anxious. However, the character portrayal and emotional scenes are quite good. There is also a lot of foreshadowing in the front. I wonder if the holes can be filled in later? Also, the ancient mechanical giant is really not strong. I wonder if the deck will be changed in the future? Do you mainly play mechanical groups?
Very well written! Why does the teacher group feel like a prison bus?
Lao You and Lao You remind me of the duel between the Nuo Nei Chicken and the sunny and cheerful boy.
The author writes really well
How should I put it? The writing itself is pretty good, and the character creation is okay, and the fact that the protagonist is Leo Ku is a plus, but the plot could be sped up in some places.
Is Gu Juji's card efficiency too low? Looking forward to an original card [laughing]
It's very good. The duel part is better than many written ones. At least it's not that boring. It does have the feeling of soul collision in the original Yu-Gi-Oh! But let me give you a few suggestions, author. You don't need to publish so many words in one chapter. You can write it separately. A chapter of 2,000 words is enough. Some people only read the number of chapters and not the number of words. I used to save novels with less than 100 chapters first. Then there's the title. Isn't this title a bit too serious? Wouldn't a title like "The White-Haired Girl Also Wants to Play with the Ancient Giant Machine" be better? [Eat melon]
It's super nice and feels like I'm watching anime (although I only play cards and don't watch anime)! ! But the popularity is low because of Yu-Gi-Oh...(-｡-; But it doesn't matter~\(≧▽≦)/~ Gold will definitely shine! Rating☆full☆speed☆forward☆line☆da☆ Also: Please can the author write Galaxy Eye (;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`) In actual combat, our Galaxy Eye cards were so bad that our cards exploded, but it was really easy to write and very soulful. Please let the author create a character whose life is a four-star light attribute magician monster whose effect is to increase his star level by four and free himself to retrieve a "Galaxy" card from the deck and add it to his hand~~ Vadasi can't do anything orz
Hmm... This is my first time writing a book review... Try to write some duse First of all, Juji Ku's deck is quite cool. We who play Electronic Dragon are famous for being in prison. Recently, we have followed K9 on the pie chart, but Juji Ku is quite rare. The author writes that this deck can be said to be a very novel experience. Secondly, it seems that there are no bugs in the duel at present, but maybe it's because I'm a bit of a Red King reader, and I can't understand some of the backgrounds (laughs) Anyway, I wish the author can continue to create, and I will continue to support him (laughs) above You! A+!
Have a taste: Advantages: The character creation is quite excellent, with distinct personalities and flesh and blood. The psychological description is delicate and the protagonist's growth is obvious. There is currently no cerebral hemorrhage during the card playing session. Details in place Chef N is ecstatic Disadvantages (personal opinion): The protagonist has too much inner drama, it can be reduced appropriately The pace is too slow, it took less than 8 hours to finish 16W words.... Question: About the division: How to determine Bailong (fusion zone coherence axis) and electron (fusion zone excess axis) Regarding reinforcements: In the future, the protagonist will take Thermonuclear Dragon. If a protagonist with such a soul fills the deck with his own, the risk of getting stuck is very high (souls will be the end). Will general reinforcements be added to the protagonist's deck? Regarding the plot: Will there be an original deck? Can you still fight back when an electronic dragon is rolled over by a tire? Will the electronic player be the first time the protagonist suffers?
Makes me feel strong
It's a great read. It can be seen that the author is very attentive and I would like to give my full support [laughing evilly] [full]
Can there be a gem knight in the fusion department? [Sinister smile]
When I read this book, I felt like I was teaching newbies how to get started, and I felt very anxious. However, the character portrayal and emotional scenes are quite good. There is also a lot of foreshadowing in the front. I wonder if the holes can be filled in later? Also, the ancient mechanical giant is really not strong. I wonder if the deck will be changed in the future? Do you mainly play mechanical groups?
Very well written! Why does the teacher group feel like a prison bus?
Lao You and Lao You remind me of the duel between the Nuo Nei Chicken and the sunny and cheerful boy.
The author writes really well
How should I put it? The writing itself is pretty good, and the character creation is okay, and the fact that the protagonist is Leo Ku is a plus, but the plot could be sped up in some places.
Is Gu Juji's card efficiency too low? Looking forward to an original card [laughing]