Turning My Life Around, Starting as a Little Rascal

I'm really, really happy that Ma Xiaotiao District has such an excellent author, but there is a slight flaw. The verbs in the first three chapters have relatively few language backgrounds and the psychological explanation is more direct. There is a feeling that it is too fast, which makes the picture a bit stiff and the picture coherent. Slightly change it, like the scene of returning home before time travel: as always, turn the key to the left twice and the door lock will be unlocked. Turn the key twice to take out the key and at the same time open the door and cross the threshold. Unlike other families who are reserved, Su Li's parents are standing next to them with smiles on their faces, but that is a photo. The warmth in the room, the house was still quiet, I picked up the golden medal next to me, and remembered that day... (Background), "Da, da, da" footsteps in the corridor interrupted my thoughts. The young man pursed his lips and turned around to unlock the door. "Click", he turned and walked towards the kitchen, just like he always did. Ahem, the above are just some of my humble opinions. Please forgive me if there are any mistakes. Finally, come on "Ma Xiaotiao"! Hurry up and encourage the author to update! 😏

I give you a five-star review, not because of how well you write, but because I urge you to update quickly 😳

This is a conventional five-star review

Very good. Very few Tomatoes write about Ma Xiaotiao. This one is pretty good and very creative. 👍 That's why so few people read it. Also, the author will update soon***

Tribute to childhood, nice looking 👍

It's very beautiful, really, and it's also interconnected.

Be sure to write about the super mayor, remember Wang Tianjiao, this is also a very good girl

Ma Xiaotiao's fan fiction is quite interesting.

Come on! Be careful and don't get blocked.