[Single heroine Xia Linguo] [Slower pace] [Including original work] Su Li, who has been alone for many years, stepped out of the college entrance examination, and his youth seemed to be over. Then when he felt a burning yearning for the first time in his heart, a magical umbrella appeared and took Su Li to another wonderful world. Let it be what it is, the facts have been settled, and Su Li is determined to start a new life with a new identity. He is Ma Xiaotiao. He is going to start a new life. Here are his friends and classmates. Lu Manman who loves to take care of Ma Xiaotiao, Zhang Da who is outstanding in sports, good buddies Tang Fei, Mao Chao, and of course the beautiful girl Xia Linguo. The original trajectory deviates, and Ma Xiaotiao will start writing a new story.
Is the umbrella that turns time necessarily an established fact?
Reader comments
I am really, really happy that Ma Xiaotiao District has such an excellent author, but there is a slight flaw. The verbs in the first 3 chapters are relatively short in language background and the psychological explanation is more direct. It just... Feels like it is too fast, which makes the picture a bit stiff and the picture coherent.
Modify it a little, like the scene of returning home before time travel: as always, turn the key to the left twice and the door lock will be unlocked. Turn the key twice to take out the key and at the same time open the door and cross the threshold. Different from the reservedness of other families, Su Li's parents are standing next to them with smiles on their faces, but that is a photo. The warmth in the room was still quiet in the house. I picked up the golden medal next to me and remembered that day... (Background). "Da, da, da" footsteps in the corridor interrupted my thoughts. The young man pursed his lips and turned around to unlock the door. "Click", he turned and walked towards the kitchen, just like he always did.
Ahem, the above are just some of my humble opinions. Please forgive me if there are any mistakes. Finally, come on "Ma Xiaotiao"! Hurry up and encourage the author to update! [Sinister smile]
I give you a five-star review, not because of how well you write, but because I urge you to update quickly [shy]
This is a conventional five-star review
Tribute to childhood, nice looking [like]
Very good. Very few Tomatoes write about Ma Xiaotiao. This one is pretty good and very creative. [Like] That's why so few people read it. Also, the author will update soon***
It's very beautiful, really, and it's also interconnected.
Be sure to write about the super mayor, remember Wang Tianjiao, this is also a very good girl
I am really, really happy that Ma Xiaotiao District has such an excellent author, but there is a slight flaw. The verbs in the first 3 chapters are relatively short in language background and the psychological explanation is more direct. It just... Feels like it is too fast, which makes the picture a bit stiff and the picture coherent. Modify it a little, like the scene of returning home before time travel: as always, turn the key to the left twice and the door lock will be unlocked. Turn the key twice to take out the key and at the same time open the door and cross the threshold. Different from the reservedness of other families, Su Li's parents are standing next to them with smiles on their faces, but that is a photo. The warmth in the room was still quiet in the house. I picked up the golden medal next to me and remembered that day... (Background). "Da, da, da" footsteps in the corridor interrupted my thoughts. The young man pursed his lips and turned around to unlock the door. "Click", he turned and walked towards the kitchen, just like he always did. Ahem, the above are just some of my humble opinions. Please forgive me if there are any mistakes. Finally, come on "Ma Xiaotiao"! Hurry up and encourage the author to update! [Sinister smile]
I give you a five-star review, not because of how well you write, but because I urge you to update quickly [shy]
This is a conventional five-star review
Tribute to childhood, nice looking [like]
Very good. Very few Tomatoes write about Ma Xiaotiao. This one is pretty good and very creative. [Like] That's why so few people read it. Also, the author will update soon***
It's very beautiful, really, and it's also interconnected.
Be sure to write about the super mayor, remember Wang Tianjiao, this is also a very good girl
Come on! Be careful and don't get blocked.