Crazy Criticizes the Cannon Fodder, and the Dank Villain Behaves Like a Dog

When I first started watching it, I thought it was a story about a tsundere and a yandere. Halfway through, it changed into a story about two yanderes, and then it turned into a story about a madman and a yandere. Then I thought it was a story about two madmen. After reading it, I thought it was a story about multiple teenagers saving themselves and each other, and a story about high-spirited young men growing up together. The character creation is very successful, the story logic is clear, and everything has a beginning and an end. There may be some shortcomings, I think it is probably because the words do not convey the meaning. The above and below are all personal opinions! ! ! A good book, worth reading, recommended

My thoughts after reading Chapter 40: So cool! ! ! I'll give it four stars first, because it's not enough (｀へ´). The protagonist's IQ is above average, and the young couple is sweet∩_∩, but when I saw the family chapter, my eyes made me pee o(╥╥)o , apart from the protagonist, the one who impressed me the most was the protagonist's eldest sister. She is a strong career person with a very high IQ. She can distinguish right from wrong and will deal with it promptly when her family beats and scolds the protagonist (I don't know whether it is due to the control of the plot or the loss of trust in the son who has not been raised for many years). Of course, I also guess that it is because the original author did not describe the eldest sister too much, so the eldest sister is not under control and becomes more like a living person. In short, the author did not weaken other characters in order to highlight the protagonist, making the whole novel more realistic, and the plot is also very brilliant. If you like it, you can feel free to read it. Finally, the author, please update! Not enough to see ah ah ah ah (இωஇ) @ Su Zhong OMG How come there is such a good-looking article ~ Although the ending is a bit lacking, the young couple is delicious [The God of Bird Food][The God of Bird Food][The God of Bird Food][The God of Bird Food]

S0m1 is simply a fairy, (no refutation will be accepted) The young couple is sweet, and the plot is not very sad so far. There are just too few. When I see that shit-yellow button every day when I am catching up on updates, I feel helpless... (Teacher, please keep updating)

It's beautiful and beautiful. Teacher, teacher, I will update when I am tired, I will update when I am hungry, I will update when I want to sleep [laughs] Don't starve us.

Sure enough, no one can escape dog training literature. Puppies are involuntarily attracted to their owners. The domineering and powerful Li Miao will only give the puppy the tenderness of a person. The wall called the heart is filled with depression without Miao Miao knowing it. The secondary characters in the book are also well portrayed. The characters who are briefly mentioned in the plot have richer thoughts. Under the influence of the plot, the parents and Miaomiao are forced to separate, while the original person also chooses to be relieved in the face of late family love. The sub-CP inside is also very interesting, but I may be on the wrong side┐(˘_˘)┌

Nice! Our Miaomiao is really a smart baby at the master level. If you eat a loyal dog and have a fishing line of 0, you can rest assured. This is a really cool article. It has a brain and a mouth. If you encounter a bloody plot, you will just slap it. It's so cool.

It's not just me, but the people here are all majestic, admired by thousands, unparalleled, jade trees facing the wind, both internal and external, talented, noble sentiments, super invincible, proficient, reaching the pinnacle, flying sand and stone. , Miraculous craftsmanship, enlightening, the candle illuminates the world, sees thousands of miles clearly, rains and dews on the common people, benefits all directions, the eagle watches the wolf, the dragon walks and the tiger steps, the majestic figure, the high-rise building, the benevolence and morality, the suave, the selfless, Looks like Pan An, but is more talented than Song Yu. A pear tree weighs begonias. You have it for others, you have it for others, you have it, you are upright, you have the breeze on your sleeves, you have thick virtues, you have an innocent heart, you travel to high mountains, you have high feelings, you have great virtues, and you have no merits. Quantity, good gold and beautiful jade, bright virtues but sweetness, Huai Jin holding Yu, Hui Xin Wan Zhi, Yuan Tao Feng Lan, lofty ideals and benevolent people, white cranes in the clouds, magnificence, romantic figures, flying dragons and phoenixes, unparalleled in the world, unparalleled heroes, unrivaled.

The plot of this novel is simply amazing! It is like a symphony of carefully woven stories, with every note jumping with sparks of wisdom, making you intoxicated. The author skillfully blends various elements together to create vivid pictures that make readers feel like they are in the world of the story. The ups and downs of the storyline are even more amazing and make people want to stop. Overall, this novel is definitely a masterpiece worth reading and it will remain in the hearts of readers forever. (The review is my own, but it's really good-looking. My old enemy is my wife. I want to see more of the sub-CP, hey, I appreciate it. Looking forward to the update [Adoration] [Adoration]) Finally got the ratings, super good looking [KISS] I like the status of the main palace, mistress style, super sexy, waiting for updates every day

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! I love dog training literature! The plot is smooth and refreshing, and the characters are not cliché. I have read many articles, but I always gave up after reading them halfway, but this one directly captured my heart. I waited for the author to update every night [crying] [crying] After I tied it, I had to wait 24 hours every day. It was really unbearable [crying] [crying]

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It's very nice to watch in the front, the male lead has a great personality, he never spoils anyone, he beats up when he needs to, he's a blond beauty with a thorny rose, he's also about duplicity, he's a bit tsundere, he's a young and shy little wolfdog, the couple is sweet, both strong, both have high IQs, there's tension and cookies, it's an everyday sweetness, it feels pretty good, I gave it four stars because I have a bit of a bad plot Or the system is forcibly controlling it. I saw the beginning of Chapter 17, and there is no acting in Chapter 18. This is to add a halo to the original subject. To be honest, I don't understand it very well. Apart from this, there are lightnings to avoid. I recommend the rest. The writing is also good, there will be comedy, but it is not dragging on when it should be, and the emotional line is also easy to break. According to the character of the protagonist, maybe this plot is not worth mentioning? So I still recommend watching it, overall it's really good [full] (except for the plot)

The plot is pretty good, the setting is relatively old, it's time-travel, systematic, Mary Sue, gloomy, the villain turns into a yandere husband What may be uncomfortable to read: Sometimes the author feels like a second personality suddenly takes over the pen, and it becomes awkward as he writes, with his toes touching the ground, and then it turns into a story about a middle school boy and his Jiahao boyfriend. . . But not a lot. A little bit will pop up suddenly. Maybe the author is in a bottleneck period and can't write anymore, so it's more abrupt. When you see a plot like this, you can indulge in it, and you will watch it quickly. Overall it's pretty good! Looking forward to the conclusion and extras

The author's writing style is very good and the characters are also very exciting. I have rarely encountered an author with such good writing skills after reading Yang Persimmon for so many years. Moreover, this is the first time that I can stay up all night on Tomato to follow a novel. I hope the author can write more. I really can't get enough😭 Come on! ! ! ! !

It was the first time that I was so eager and I read it all in two days. It can be said that this book is the only one that I have read so many novels in which I did not abandon the text midway or feel bored. I read the last novel in one go and it was so to my liking. The author has some holes that he has not filled in yet, and he may fill them in the extra chapters. The character of the protagonist is really full and the writing is super delicate! The various characters are all very well drawn, and there are no major conflicts or misunderstandings. I couldn't solve them for a long time. It feels like they were resolved within a few chapters, and the various interactions are super sweet. I plan to watch it again, 99 for all young lovers!

Dog training literature is so cool! The characters of the two protagonists are also in line with my psychological expectations. Each party is powerful and charming, and of course they are also very dual-standard. Li Miao and Shen Yu are both very miserable little pitiful people, including the original owner. The plot's openly defying nature and forcibly changing the original direction is what attracted me very much. Li Miao himself is a very flamboyant character, which is very attractive to people like Shen Yu who struggled in the quagmire in the early stage. The emotional line between the two people was also handled very well. If Shen Yu approached Li Miao at the beginning because of the side effects of the drug, then later he disarmed and became a dog under the charm of our princess. As for the deputy CP, there is not much plot. The existence of the two can be said to be carried out on the premise of promoting the development of the story, but they account for a small proportion and will not take away the attention that the protagonist deserves. [I am actually quite sensitive to sub-CPs, because there were too many sub-CP plots in the previous book, and the number of protagonists I wanted to see was drastically reduced. Even the two characters' promotion of the main plot was dispensable. But this book doesn't give me that feeling. Feng You's feelings for Jin Lai appear very cleverly. They appear just when Li Miao is about to further deal with Jiang Luo. Naturally, the two join forces to cut off Jiang Luo's path, and there is not much description of their plot, just interspersed in the main line. In a few sentences, the author has grasped this kind of "proportion" very well. It will not make people feel disgusted with the young couple, but also makes the novel more exciting overall. Just like when eating roast duck, it will always be a bit greasy after the freshness. At this time, the onions will come to divert your attention, making the meal more layered. (The first time I write a long review, it seems a bit too serious [face covering])

No prodding or prodding, you can read it as an article to pass the time. The writing is okay, but the plot is a bit watery and the ending is a bit rushed. It feels like it's not rendered well, but the characters are pretty good and worth watching.

It's just very good. The character design is very three-dimensional. Princess Palm is the kind of person who is naughty and unconventional but also feels sorry for others, which is very interesting. As for Shen Yu, like Princess Palm, two people cannot sleep in the same bed, but it just feels like his world only consists of Princess Palm and his aunt (although they are not very close). In addition, the reason why I didn't give five stars is that the depressing scene in the original world felt foreshadowed, but I don't really like this style. I don't think I like it very much. I still think the two people in the current world are better. (Maybe I'm overthinking it.) In short, I hope that when I fill in this paragraph again... I don't know what to say. Anyway, it looks pretty good.

Damn, this foreshadowing is so awesome. The whole text is connected very smoothly. It's a very good-looking and refreshing article. Miaomiao finally chose to walk out of his rose garden and fall into the arms of the person who loves him the most. The love of a puppy is the best... Oh, and the supporting characters are also very distinctive and unique. I spent all my time reading it. The only regret is that there is no extra episode and Lin Shi is still missing...😭

Hmm... The first time I met the two of them, they were both crazy. Hehe, they look good. They must be good together. Although Li Miao was a little sad when he said that he and Shen Yu were just playing around (óò｡), the xql must be long-lasting.

It's okay. Dog training is really fun, but I feel tired later and feel a bit messy. The love between the two is also quite good. As a puppy, Shen Yu just pretends to be good in front of his owner, but in reality he is still the sinister villain. Some of them are also very interesting, but to be honest, I don't feel much at all later. There are some dramatic ups and downs, which is interesting, but there is a feeling that you can't watch it. There is no violent chemical collision between the two of them, it is just stable. Maybe I prefer that Li loses control once or twice, but basically it is only when he is depressed by the reporter at the end that the plot becomes out of control, but it is covered up by a few sentences. Of course, everyone has their own preferences, and the author also writes very well [shy]

The author's writing style is very good, and the character settings really impressed me. The fishing-type beauty & the villain's loyal dog [Adoration] are so refreshing and engaging, but it's a bit lacking. Please update it soon! ! ! But you should also pay attention to rest ~ [Blow a kiss] [Send a heart]

So pretty! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! What a treasure book! [Adoration][Admiration][Admiration][Admiration] Our princess is so handsome! You must protect Shen Yu well. The young couple will be happy every day, 99! The emotional line is smooth, the puppy and its owner will stay together forever! The logic of the whole text is clear, the foreshadowing is great, and the group portraits have a sense of belonging. It is especially suitable for Baozi who loves to watch two strong characters. This is not a bad story. Both people work hard, there is no cheat, and the system is also very good. Both husband and wife are crazy, but they are both good people! ! ! You also have your own unique aura on the career line, and everyone has your own destination! But can there be a side story? [Flying kiss] [Flying kiss] [Flying kiss] I want to see Lin Shi return [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] There are too few articles to read [Adore] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] Five-star praise! ! ! ! !

The emotional line is okay, the plot is okay, but there are too many sub-CPs, it seems like a group novel, and basically everyone the protagonist knows has a partner (it is not officially acknowledged in the article). Whenever the supporting character has a change of mood towards another unfamiliar supporting character, even if they only meet once, a lot of people in Duan Commentary will say that he is the future husband or something. The author's writing is good, and the plot and emotional lines develop quickly and are not abrupt. I am very picky about reading articles, so I can keep reading. Except for the deputy CP, everything else is okay. I can't say I particularly like it. It's just the kind of companionship that flows smoothly. After reading it, there are a few more important holes that have not been filled in. I hope there will be an extra chapter to fill them in.

It's very good-looking. I've been following it for a long time. I'm now waiting for an update. The character of the protagonist is very good and it's interesting to interact with other people. I like the secondary CP [smirking], especially Bai Jiali, but the main CP is the best. The early stage is pulling and the later stage is indulgent. It feels sweet. Li Miao's character is very good and attractive. I like the feeling in the previous part when he entered Shen Yu's collection about his stuff [shy] and Shen Yu is also very good. The part where they are playing the game together is also good. I still like it. I really like the content of this game, and the daily interactive sweetness is also very interesting. It is my favorite article on Tomato now. After reading it for so long, I am still very curious about the content behind it. Ji Zhoulin pinches each other and is very cute. I wonder if there will be a plot of Du Shengsheng in the future. I feel very uncomfortable when she has a car accident and cannot participate in the competition. Now Jiang Luo and Shen Xingze feel that their relationship is broken and I don't know what will happen in the future. Mrs. Bai of the Bai family seems to be controlled by the system, which makes her a little worried. I have also read another book by the author, because I couldn't get enough of this one, and that one is also quite good, but this one is better, and the plot is smoother, faster, and less laggy. I have also read another short story. The author will update it soon, and I will review it after it is finished. It is not enough [sending heart] [blowing kiss] [love] I give you my heart ❤️(ง •̀_•́)ง Come on I have completely finished reading it, and the rest of it is also very interesting, but I feel that the ending is a bit rushed. Not only the main CP, but also some of the sub-CPs that are very promising have basically no ending. I feel like I can't get back the feeling I had in the previous chapters. The writing is still very good, but maybe in order to finish it in time, I am still looking forward to having a sequel to expand it😢

It's a pretty good novel, and I've read it intermittently. The author is very successful in shaping each character, each character is very three-dimensional, and the teacher will lay a foreshadowing, which will be filled in later (the latter will involve the plot!!!!), But in the original world (that is, Li is in the original book), what is the follow-up to the foreshadowing laid by the teacher? This is indeed a daydream, and perhaps there is no answer. There is also the follow-up of Jiang Luo. Although he is a very annoying character, it is such a character that created a character like Li Miao. But later, the father and son Shen Mingxiu and Shen Mingze were imprisoned for pharmaceuticals. What about Jiang Luo? As a member of the Bai family, what will be his follow-up? He is a character who was abandoned and replaced by the author. What is his follow-up? This place makes me very curious, but you all may say that this is very reminiscent of something, but I also really want to see a character break through, have a soul, and no longer be a silly and sweet Jiang Luo, he is a real character and no longer just a brainless one. There are also the following elements that may not have been thought of. Maybe the author has foreshadowed it before. These two points made me confused, but the whole book is very good in summary. Li Miao is a very arrogant, domineering, undisciplined, but very free person. The reason for depression is that Li Miao is the center and everything is done for Li Miao. In the early stage, he was so arrogant and gradually sank under the training of our dog, Li Miao.

Oh my God, it's so good. I really like it, at least until chapter 54, because I only updated it up to this point. I like the main CP and the deputy CP very much. I hate the things that I feel are low-level and can't make any waves. Anyway, it's great. I hope that the so-called world consciousness will not collapse in the later period and then the book will be perfect. I was fascinated by it and suddenly it disappeared. Author, please update it soon. I love you so much, but because it is a serialization, I will stock it up for the time being. I will come back, baby! Looking forward to the follow-up!

Both the storyline and the character creation are very attractive to me, and the comments from readers are also very interesting. Moreover, they are two strong people, and they are not weak at all. No matter what the other party does, the other party can understand it instantly, and there is no barrier to communication. The protagonist is completely crazy and has been hurt. His people must make him pay the price. He is calm and calm when faced with difficulties. He can quickly discern the truth of things when faced with difficulties from reporters. The final reversal is also a step-by-step foreshadowing. It is beyond the reader's expectation. It is logically reasonable and the ending is HE.

It's over, it's so beautiful. Dog training literature is so authoritative. It's great that Princess Miaomiao is not portrayed. It's a fairy tale. I hope there will be a sequel. I have such great ambitions. S0m1 has always been so authoritative. I wish the little couple 99 [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][ blowing kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][love][love][love][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

It's really, really, really, really, really, really beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I can only describe it like this. Forgive me for not being able to speak, but this book is really good. Both the foreshadowing and the foreshadowing are very natural, and the writing style is not bad. The most important thing is that the protagonist's character is very interesting. As for dog training literature, I feel like a succubus. Even the author instills love. It has the correct idea of loving oneself first, and the plot is not too procrastinating. The plot is uncertain and quite novel. I couldn't stop as soon as I opened it. This article feels like a two-way redemption, and it's very refreshing to read. I can only say this, and you can figure out the rest by yourself [Blow kiss]

It's very interesting and the writing is pretty good, but I feel a little sad when I see the protagonist's family. I feel so sad. The overall style and plot are quite good, not too cliché. It's quite refreshing when the protagonist returns after being retaliated against, and you can chase after him.