Rebirth**********

The whole story is sweet. The writing is okay, Su Li is cute, and Bai Luo is a bit of a guiding lover. If you want to watch Pure Sweetness, you can probably skip to Chapter 12 Amusement Park. When I first read the previous book, I thought it was the same routine as other books, but later I found out that I had guessed it wrong. Every time I read a novel that I like, the author is very slow to update it, but this one was updated quickly and finished. The author can recommend more books [Like]

I don't have much reading time at the moment, but now that I'm commenting, I'll give you my humble opinion. The yin and yang are harmonized to perfection, so this book does have one or two flaws. The shape, attitude, and heart of the characters are very different from those before and after Chapter 10. The separation is so deep that each chapter can be written independently. The content of the style is large and the previous and the following cannot be followed. If you look closely, there are many flaws. Therefore, the author can try to differentiate the general outline of the style, be meticulous, pay attention to the emotional changes of the characters, and become too natural. The yin is all the way to the yang, so this book has many advantages. The emotions and actions are carved into three parts of the wood, the ups and downs of the emotions are described appropriately, and the feelings described are optimistic and positive. This is all I feel at the moment. This book has both advantages and disadvantages, and I will wait for my careful appreciation.

It's very sweet, but there is a little logic problem. But after reading the sweet article, what kind of logic do you need [Sending Hearts]

Is that slap torturing the audience?

I have read about ten chapters. The author is short, but the writing is quite good, but the pace is a bit fast, a bit too condensed, and there are so few people. No comments.

Very beautiful, recommended

The ratings haven't been released yet, so I almost didn't watch it [face covering] [face covering]

I feel that the writing is quite good and makes me laugh all the time. However, there is a little bit of abuse at the beginning. I hope the author will stop writing it. The child has been fooled by the original sword @

Interesting, fugitive.

I personally think it looks pretty I think this book is very interesting and I didn't skip a chapter, but the first few chapters made my heart break. The rest is quite sweet. I hope there are more stories about them.

Okay, Tiantian Anxin

Now the sword is first, then the sweetness is my favorite [Adoration]

Sweet [shy] lily or something is the best

Sweet,

The first few pictures have blocked most of the readers, so don't read them with your brain.

The writing is okay, but the pace is too fast. I read the author's previous books and found that the writing was okay, but I felt that there was no outline and no ideas. Overall, this book is okay and very sweet.

I think you can skip the front and go directly to the sweet daily life at the back

There is always a feeling that I have missed dozens of chapters, but the author's writing is great [Adoration] [Blowing Kisses]

During the period when the relationship eases, the heroine's behavior and thoughts change too quickly. It would be much better to expand the heroine's awkward view of the protagonist and expand it. Chapter 10 does not feel like it was written by the same person. It feels inconsistent. The main reason is that the relationship between the characters changes too quickly.

It's a very interesting book. Kudos to the author.