Steelclad Bear: From Mech Beast Grunt to World Overlord

A very good martial arts battle article, as long as you work hard to write more than 1 million words, I believe you can also be the Red Star [Love]

[Eating Melon] can only be said to be one of the most interesting Lolo themes at this stage. I personally think that although it is not as good as Red Armor and Wolf King, the world view is large enough, and the number of words is not a problem. It is 8.8 And it is not unfinished. There is no problem with it. It can be improved to 9 if it is better written later. At present, there are no big logical problems, but without a map, it is a bit difficult to distinguish the battle logic. In the mid-term, it is basically going to the ice field to develop, but I don't know how the author plans to arrange the route. After all, there are a lot of people and a lot of combat energy. If the distance is far, it is normal for the armored bear to be ambushed and carve up the entire armored bear. If there is also robot intelligence, I think it can be patched. Warriors like the Golden Claw God who may be born with high intelligence, as well as combat thinking, can be arranged to have a very small number of natural recruits. After all, most ordinary soldiers should be puppet soldiers with no brains or even bluntly saying that they have no brains and can only understand instructions. However, this is not very good-looking. It can be written with more flesh and blood, and ordinary soldiers also have thinking logic. [Eat melon] The only thing I think is a bit problematic at the moment is that I mentioned earlier that low-level soldiers have low intelligence, but later in the plot, ordinary soldiers with ordinary intelligence appear. Although it will be more interesting when reading the book, it is a bit of a slap in the face. If it was written before, I think it can be deleted, it is a bit redundant. It is better to write that the factory chip is relatively new. The underlying combat logic is almost the same, but the chip content is constantly updated to upgrade and gain abilities based on the growth process, just like the saying that babies have different thinking based on experience when they grow up. As for being the best-looking, it definitely doesn't count, because no one seems to be writing about Luo Luo now. Short and tall is considered good. Comments support [eat melon], and add one star to the world view.

The writing is very good, very similar to the book on Red Armored War King, please be patient and don't stop updating.

The author writes very well. Both the protagonist and the supporting characters have brains, and there is no big problem with their combat power. It is also very good in martial arts fan fiction. It shows us the world of motorcycles a hundred years later. It contains many of my childhood memories and a unique world view. As long as the fighting power does not collapse later, it will definitely be a masterpiece. I hope that the author will be seen by more people, earn a little money, and can make more updates. It is not superficial and the quality is guaranteed.

For a while, the realm was crushed to death. In 4 years, the eldest brother has been promoted to one level. You know, it was still the period of the war. You are only level 1 when fighting motorcycles. Do you think it is possible?

Alas, it's been a long time since I posted a rating.

The writing is okay. I don't know when the protagonist will become a marshal.

Among Luoluo Adventures fans, the quality should be ranked among the top three (mainly because there are too few related books), a little worse than Chijia. If you like it, you can read it!

A very good book, worthy of five stars⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

It looks okay so far, but so far I have seen too little about the protagonist.