Horse Racing Girl: When the Snow Falls

Very good, very good. It would be better if a story like this is a little more enjoyable [laughs] The reason for the remaining one star is because there aren't enough details in the plot. With the author's ability, he can obviously write better, so go for it.

I remember, doesn't the big difference mean that only the first one will be on the winner's stage? Or am I remembering it wrong?

It feels like it's a bit overwhelming for the protagonist's schedule, as if he doesn't want the protagonist to actually defeat Braised Tofu on the field.

Tomatoes are pretty good inside (in my opinion)

Jiji should run with the three goddesses. This way of widening the gap and returning Kukuhong's skills will only hurt the horse girls who are competing together, right? When playing games, Ms. Tsunade seems to have said that she should look for opponents of comparable strength, otherwise she will be very frustrating to others. Just like "one horse leads the way and ten thousand horses are lost", invincibility is truly invincible, and pure failure is also pure failure. And is it really good to start cooling from time to time? If other horses find that the polar is always in cooling mode, don't they really feel that the polar life affects other people? There is no problem with getting red skills in the game. After all, in the game, you don't have to care about whether the opponent has the motivation to focus on whether the horse girl you cultivate can win. However, in the novel, you write more than just the protagonist. It is not recommended to make the supporting characters become experience packs for monsters one by one. It's better to rely on your own efforts and sweat to build up numerical values and mechanisms at the beginning, and then gain real growth from winning matches with strong players of equal strength than to start with all numerical values and mechanisms causing absolute crushing, right?

So far, it seems to be a good horse girl novel. The competition and daily life of horse girl are written well. The interaction between the characters and the protagonist is also quite interesting. There is no emotional line yet, but I feel that there will be no messy and weird writing. It is a horse girl fanfic worth reading.

Very good Ma Niang essay

It's a very nice book, but I don't know if it has CP. If not, just keep reading and enjoy it.

The author's writing is very good, and the plot setting is quite reasonable, but the updates are a bit slow. The article is mainly about invincibility. If I insist on talking about the shortcomings of the protagonist, he is too paranoid about victory and absolute lead during the competition. It may seem that his character is not very good, but it also fits the title of the book (it is convenient for some friends who don't like this kind of character to avoid lightning). But in general, the current rating is still too low. Personally, I think this book is among the first-rate among horse racing girl fanfiction. (Finally, let me talk about something unrelated. Isn't the protagonist when I am playing alone, including when I turn on the momentum, different from the protagonist in daily life? It feels a bit like a dual personality, one daily personality and one empress personality. Could it be that the voices in my heart are the foreshadowing of the second personality)

The protagonist can think about the expedition quickly, the protagonist's field in the G1 competition can keep them frozen for so long [face covering]

A very good Ma Niang novel

It's beautiful, I love watching it, but why are there so few people?

Yes, it can be seen that the author has checked the information and many of the competitions are based on historical facts. Although the plot is a bit bland because he is too invincible, the description of the competition process and the psychology of the characters can also be substituted into the story. I am very curious when such an invincible protagonist will lose. Keep up the good work, author.

There is no numerical value, it's all skills and sweat [face covering]

It is said that the field thing is from Oguri Hat. Liuhei also said that unlike hot-blooded comics, anime and comics can be seen as more expressive. You are exaggerating to freeze the mirror directly. Then Tamamo Cross is not allowed to electrocute the opponent [eating melon]

One of the rare Ma Niang novels that is very comfortable to read. I look forward to the story of Luna and Ji Ji.

Hey... The numerical value... Hey... The mechanism [laughs crookedly] I only see hard work, no pride! Why is the sweat on my face? [Cry]

Does the main character have a significant other? If so, it would be Rudolf.

Hmm, it's hard to find a book that's not about gender reassignment. It's very interesting and has good reviews! ! !

Very good work, the article is very interesting, vivid and detailed. Although there was an obvious deterioration in the later period, it is still relatively good. Unfortunately, it has been discontinued. Author, you have worked hard and persisted for so long.

There are no numbers, it's all hard work and sweat. As for who the sweat and effort belongs to, then you don't care.

I can only say that the protagonist has a certain kind of numerical beauty [face covering] I suggest you be like Li Yi next door, who fought for three years straight to the Arc de Triomphe [laughing evilly]

It's a masterpiece. I haven't read Ma Niang's novels for a long time. The last time was the Chinese Superman. This book is really cool. I hope the author will keep updating it. I look forward to the day when I become the number one in the world.

It feels pretty good. Why is the score so low?

It looks good, I love watching it, but can you please add some details on the setting of the main character? For example, why does the protagonist travel through time?

Not bad, it feels great [like]

Super pretty! (Recommended by Uncle Gray).

Very promising, worthy of full marks

Not enough, not enough, once a day or something is too much [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

It's pretty good. Since it's crushing, keep crushing [I learned]