[Traveling through Genshin Impact to Winter], [Multiple heroines! ! ], [There is a system but flying is useless and there are few restrictions], [Easy to daily life and combat], [No knife! No knife! , The author is very interesting!
Xu Yusheng accidentally traveled to Teyvat. He was glad that he had the Tomato Novel standard system. He never thought that the system was a useless novice. It seemed that he had to rely more on himself. Fortunately, the system brought Uncle Kizaru's Shining Fruit and other abilities to Xu Yusheng, so it was no problem to walk sideways in Teyvat.
The game started in winter, an area that was unfamiliar to the game. Xu Yusheng also saw Columbia and the Ice Queen earlier than Blue Star players (ˉ▽￣~).
Arecino, Colombia, Sandone... What should Xu Yusheng do if he feels like he likes them all? Of course I want them all! Uh... Just kidding, sisters, don't slap me in the face.
[A novice author, this is his first book. If there are any deficiencies, you are welcome to tell me!
Reader comments
There are sweet and eccentric stories about fools. I quite like this kind of interaction. The fools are written as a big family, except for the doctor and the stragglers. The author changed the character design of the executive, and I think it's okay. It can be read as a small sweet story.
The character of the male protagonist is a bit too cute Xiao Chunan
Then, I overcame the scene where the executives had a dinner party. My skills were still not that good. In fact, his plot was not too poisonous for me. I didn't care about being a dog and being a junior student. However, wearing women's clothes and being a dog was not a poisonous point to be honest, but he was very irritating.
If I were asked to recommend a group of people, I would recommend Wa students who have some M attributes, or any group of people with M attributes, I would recommend them to check it out
So that's it for this review. Oh, by the way, there's one more point I haven't mentioned yet. The system in this article can compete with Paimon.
The writing is okay, this is the system, it makes me want to deal with this thing
Although this book has shortcomings in terms of the emotional line alone, it is considered good among many fan fiction works that prefer romance. The writing is excellent, and it is a rare masterpiece for readers who only read this genre.
He also has his own ideas in character creation. The author's image of the heroine appears full and full of tension. She has the character of a royal sister who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside as a "servant", has the youthfulness of a "puppet" girl and the cuteness of a "girl".
However, this book still has shortcomings in controlling the rhythm. The result is the phenomenon of skipping chapters. The proportion of daily life is too large and it is not suitable to read it in one step. (It is recommended that the author can study "This person is obviously very strong but still tries to trick the Loli Master")
I hope the author can work harder and don't forget that there are still a group of readers who love you deeply after arriving in Japan. [Blowing kiss]
I really like the article written by the author, but when I saw how good the author's grades and family were, I immediately felt jealous and bloodshot╮(╯＿╰)╭But I also wish the author a happy life in studying abroad in the future and not encounter villains. Also, please update quickly😜
Let me comment first [laughing evilly]
I admire the first person to have a harem, maybe he will die.
I hope the author is mentally fine [laughing evilly]
I can only say that I am worthy of being a liberal arts student.
Regardless of the character's personality and relationship network, the writing is quite good.
There are sweet and eccentric stories about fools. I quite like this kind of interaction. The fools are written as a big family, except for the doctor and the stragglers. The author changed the character design of the executive, and I think it's okay. It can be read as a small sweet story. The character of the male protagonist is a bit too cute Xiao Chunan Then, I overcame the scene where the executives had a dinner party. My skills were still not that good. In fact, his plot was not too poisonous for me. I didn't care about being a dog and being a junior student. However, wearing women's clothes and being a dog was not a poisonous point to be honest, but he was very irritating. If I were asked to recommend a group of people, I would recommend Wa students who have some M attributes, or any group of people with M attributes, I would recommend them to check it out So that's it for this review. Oh, by the way, there's one more point I haven't mentioned yet. The system in this article can compete with Paimon.
The writing is okay, this is the system, it makes me want to deal with this thing
Although this book has shortcomings in terms of the emotional line alone, it is considered good among many fan fiction works that prefer romance. The writing is excellent, and it is a rare masterpiece for readers who only read this genre. He also has his own ideas in character creation. The author's image of the heroine appears full and full of tension. She has the character of a royal sister who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside as a "servant", has the youthfulness of a "puppet" girl and the cuteness of a "girl". However, this book still has shortcomings in controlling the rhythm. The result is the phenomenon of skipping chapters. The proportion of daily life is too large and it is not suitable to read it in one step. (It is recommended that the author can study "This person is obviously very strong but still tries to trick the Loli Master") I hope the author can work harder and don't forget that there are still a group of readers who love you deeply after arriving in Japan. [Blowing kiss]
I really like the article written by the author, but when I saw how good the author's grades and family were, I immediately felt jealous and bloodshot╮(╯＿╰)╭But I also wish the author a happy life in studying abroad in the future and not encounter villains. Also, please update quickly😜
Let me comment first [laughing evilly]
I admire the first person to have a harem, maybe he will die.
I hope the author is mentally fine [laughing evilly]
I can only say that I am worthy of being a liberal arts student.
Regardless of the character's personality and relationship network, the writing is quite good.
Nice looking, I like servants
Beautiful, love watching, super sweet
Good, good, good