Rites of Bone, Heir to Heaven

Nice. The writing is very mature. I hope you don't arrange a male protagonist. Let the heroine be beautiful alone~

It's such a rare article that I couldn't help but comment and encourage it first. What is rare is that the author is willing to portray unpleasant, complex, and contradictory characters, especially the first male character who interacts with the heroine. In a short space of time, a completely independent and vivid character is born. The origin of his character is completely traceable, his behavior is so real that people are disgusted with him, and his exit is handled in a literary way, which makes people have mixed feelings. Such a character is only one of the supporting characters who appears at the beginning of the book, but the author created an image that many people would have to write hundreds of thousands of words to establish.

The author's writing style is very good, and he discovered a treasure about cultivating immortals, which is directly tied 😢 but I feel that the story has just begun, and it will take a long time to finish 😢 It's another day of waiting for updates, please don't give up.

The book I picked up at random was of surprisingly good quality. The setting was novel, the characters were vivid, and the story was well written. Within 50 chapters, basically all the heroine's enemies were dead. Tomato may change the title of the book to a more exciting one, which will attract more readers, hahaha.

Very nice. There are no golden fingers, only human fireworks. A mixture of good and evil. There are many aspects of human beings that are intertwined. Make the characters fuller.

Xuanying's life experience was a mystery at first. Her talent should be inherited from the family, and it is rare. Jiang Ruiyu is smart but narrow-minded. The more he cares, the more he loses. Later, did Xuanying return to Yunlu? Who was Minghuai?

It's great. After reading more than fifty chapters, I didn't find anything out of the ordinary. The author's writing is smooth, the settings and structure are reasonable, the characters are well-characterized, and the details can withstand scrutiny. It's really rare.

There is nothing to say about the writing style. At first, I thought it was about cultivating immortals, but it turned out to be fantasy. I thought it was fantasy, but it turned out to be cultivating immortals. However, the preliminary preparation is very long. Unless it is a long story about the progress of the protagonist's introduction to cultivating immortals, it would be better if the plot is more exciting. Currently, there is a downward tone and the momentum of cultivating immortals.

It looks so good, when will it become popular? Did the author put it on the wrong platform?

It's super good-looking, and the logic is very strict. I thought it was so sudden when I switched from house fighting to cultivating immortals at first, but then slowly developed, cultivating immortals is the main line, and many of them have already been foreshadowed. I saved it for a long time because the updates were slow, and then I finished reading it all at once. I hope the author can continue to update.