
I, Lu Bu, Was Reborn as Zhao Yun, and the System Forced Me to Do Good Deeds.
我吕布,重生赵云,系统逼我行善
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 378k Words
- Genre
- Historical
- Subgenre
- Historical High-Concept
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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5.8Score
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It feels like it's pieced together, and the logic in some places is very loose. For example, during the breakout in Runan, Zhang He was injured, and Zhang He was still injured when he was on Changbanpo. Have you calculated how long it took during this period? Another example is where did Jack Ma come from? Don't force the appearance of this character just because history says they are a couple. It's too abrupt. How far is Liangzhou from Jingzhou? How many forces are there on the way? Why did Ma Yunluo help the people of Jingzhou fight Liu Bei? The logical loopholes get bigger the more you write them.
Not bad. Keep up the good work.
,,,,, Speechless
Why don't you use Zhao Yun's name?