Pre-Collapse Honkai: Honkai Hits Me in the Face from the Start

The author himself: I started writing this book for fun, so I didn't have an outline. Now I'm having a headache because I don't know what to write. Then, when I clicked on this book and read the comments, someone mentioned the poisonous points of my book. I only saw it recently. 🍅Writers don't give book reviews below three stars, so I only read a lot of people's opinions now. I also think this book is very well written 💩. It is the first time for the author to write a book, so I felt the breakdown of my combat power when I was writing it. If you read it, please tell me the bad points. I will see if I can improve it. It is best to tell me which chapter it is. My combat power has been confused by myself now. 🤦 If you don't want to eat it, just change it, so as not to disturb everyone's enjoyment. Finally, thank you readers for your comments and views, thank you all 👍 I wish all readers a happy day ❤️

The content is well written and the writing is good, but the updates are a bit slow.

He really made me cry to death. He really wanted to teach me how to live.

How can I put it this way? The plot is quite deep. There are only one or two bad points. It's a good fanfic. Five stars.

Good, good, good, good