Man in the Moon, Holy Grail War? I Did It Myself

It's very well written. I'm currently watching Ereshkigal with a single heroine. If you want to watch more heroines, you can wait and see. It's probably a single female protagonist, the male protagonist is now the first, Ereshkigal is the beast, and has a strong desire to control the male protagonist. If there are more female protagonists, there is a high probability that it will collapse in the future (Fuyuki has become a special point now). Of course, we do not rule out the possibility that the author is powerful and can control the situation [eating melon]

Perfect, I only have these two words to comment on this book. In addition, I also appreciate the author's attitude of listening to readers' suggestions. His pen is full of flowers and flowers, and his writing has attracted thousands of waves. I wish the author worry-free creation and continuous success! The modern chapter is very average. I was repeatedly provoked and overturned. I was able to manage the country before, but now I can't even predict who can disgust me? The old bug will not be dealt with, and he has always suffered from the cowardice, and the battle is also grinding and grinding. The thought of being so tolerant to Jin Shining feels very unnatural, just provide for him, lick it hard, is the male protagonist a coward? The Age of Gods was looked down upon and modern times were treated as fun. Doesn't the protagonist have no bottom line at all? My wife has a psychological problem and she doesn't even have a heart-to-heart talk? I can't talk about treating the disease, so I just drag it out. I can't stand it anymore.

It's good-looking, although it's a bit OOC in the middle, but the flaws are not outweighed. I look forward to the protagonist's reunion with Jin Shining in the next five battles. The evil of the protagonist in this world is not a joke. At worst, the protagonist should be regarded as a great hero [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's also a breath of fresh air in Fate. After all, it's my first time to meet the single heroine Jin Rin. I think what's amazing is that the author is a newcomer but writes very well.

It's pretty good so far. It's pretty good to watch. I hope there will be more updates. Multiple female protagonists are the best. There are too many beautiful female servants in Xingyue. It's a pity to have only one female protagonist. [Learned]

I'll give you five stars, just to remind you, if you can't write a good love line and Ailei can't appear in most simulations, don't have a single female protagonist. And you have to be clear about who your protagonist is, otherwise the simulator text is a multi-female protagonist type and you will lose big points. You decide whether it is single or multiple, and don't just agree to one or more. The emotional line between Ai Lei and Doros originally came from the blessing of Hades in the simulation. I feel that your emotional drama is not very good, but your simulation plot is good. My suggestion is to use your strengths and avoid weaknesses. Having more female protagonists can cover up some of the problems in the emotional drama. If you have a single female protagonist, you should work hard to write it. The most basic problem with a single female protagonist is that the female protagonist cannot be invisible and the simulation plot of the simulator must not be missing. Also, the protagonist's attitude can be appropriately tough, but not too soft. When others want something from him, his attitude should be tough, and when he wants something from others, his attitude should be soft.

I saw the cover of the book and was attracted to it. The content is quite good, so can the author write about Oberon? Please, please [blowing kiss]

It's very good, but there is a poisonous point that is common in simulator stories, that is, after the simulation is over, the protagonist feels as if his body has been taken away. However, there is no solution. I would like to give the author a suggestion, so that the things the protagonist thinks about you during the simulation are the things the protagonist has experienced, but he has lost his memory. The simulator only allows him to restore his memory. This may be better.

Let's talk about the matter, this book is already very well written on this platform. The key is that it is free and cost-effective. Although the Eternal King is also good-looking, it requires money. To sum up, it is suitable for people who don't know much about FGO. After all, some parts are really unreasonable. Just read it as a daily invincible article. If you think it is watery, it may be that you don't like reading daily articles.

First of all, we must make sure that the author has played the game and has a certain understanding of it, but some settings may not be very clear. First of all, Tsukihime and the Holy Grail War cannot be in the same world line. I remember this was said by Mushroom himself back then. Secondly, it is okay if some characters are a little OOC. Not to mention the Dongmu Holy Grail, it is impossible to summon gods at all, and it is certainly impossible to summon beasts. The limit is Angola Mainyu and it is not the original canon, and it is meaningless after summoning beasts.

It's pretty good at the moment, just don't stop it (high poison resistance) [please update], don't simulate too frequently or just play a copy (multiple heroines can easily collapse), it's okay to have a single heroine, and if you want to form an all-beast lineup, it's not impossible (I'm thinking of Draco [Love]) [Note]

You are right, but the old bug has lived to Chapter 106. Pay tribute to the legendary King of Endurance.

It's pretty good. The protagonist's personality is okay, and there's nothing poisonous about it. It should have multiple female protagonists. After all, it's a simulation novel. I'm very curious about the Shura field in the back [laughing] [please update]

I hope that if there is only one female protagonist, the protagonist and the goddess will be really sweet and have pure love. I feel that if there are multiple female protagonists, the protagonist will feel like a scumbag.

When you are in doubt, you can ask the spring breeze. The spring breeze is silent and listens to the music. The avenue should not be so small, and there should not be so few Taoist companions. Ai Lei should be big and Liya should be small. If you like a girl, you have to look at her eyes. If she doesn't look at you, look at her legs... The footpath is also Tao, and the technique is also Dharma. The avenue is at your feet.

Urgent update, author, Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 Hunxi is back... Hunxi [pouts]

About this book: The writing style is good, but the grasp of sentence segmentation in the early stage is not appropriate. There are many places where pauses are needed to express emotions without adding pause marks. There are many long sentences in the dialogue that affect the perception. The follow-up is slightly better, but overall it is a good book

Although I don't play type moon. I have also learned about some settings of some model moons. Looking at the settings alone, there is not much of a problem. It is also a bit awkward in terms of details. Overall, it does not seem to have any bad points. It feels okay. Highly recommended, the biggest drawback is that there are too few

Yes, yes, it feels like a single female protagonist at the moment, but I think it's better to have multiple female protagonists. It's really hard to justify writing a single female protagonist after you've finished writing the simulation. Please, I'm willing to do anything as an author [crying] [crying] [crying]

Author, the next simulation must include Mordred. I like it so much, but it's a pity that no one writes about it.

Come on, author who writes about yandere

Pretty cool, a mock essay, right? ~! It's still pretty good

It's not an overly cool novel focusing on time travellers. ! It is an epic written by a person who experienced it personally. Here, it is not just a novel, but a witness to a new type of timeline

Why only 40 pictures? If I had known earlier, I would have watched it later.

I feel so good. Ailei must be locked up for me [laughs] It's really good. As for some poisonous books, I have almost no poisonous points about them. I mainly came here for Ai Lei😋

I want to ask a question. Why do most of the comments pile up on November 16th?

If it's not a single, give it one star immediately [laughs] Right, right, that's it

A good book Make do [OK]

The simulation is pretty good

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking