Inuyasha, I Want to Be Fulfilled This Time

In fact, the writing is not bad. I have always hoped that the protagonist would travel through Inuyasha and take in all Kikyo and Kagome to change the miserable plot. As for the shortcomings, I might be too concerned about Inuyasha. The protagonist has the Samsara Eye at the beginning of Kagome's plot. At the beginning of Invincible, the battle feels less exciting. I prefer the protagonist to cooperate with the system to sign in and gradually strengthen, so that the battle plot will be more interesting.

I feel good after reading dozens of chapters. As long as you don't change it too much, try to be as consummate as possible. At least it looks perfect now, even the village can think of it. Then there will be no problem living in the village later. I have finished reading the book, but the result is that other Inuyasha fanfics are difficult to read. I feel like I'm being taken advantage of.

Really, I read it several times after I finished writing it, for fear that I would not be satisfied [face covering] I finally finished reading it. This story is hard to redeem. Some dungeon elements were inserted in the early stage, as well as the Naruto ability throughout the plot. Overall, I think it's passable. It's just that there are a lot of typos and the sentences don't make sense! I corrected everything one by one! If you are too anxious to finish writing this! I apologize to all readers for not controlling these details well.

Why not resurrect Cuizi together. Platycodon has a ready-made body at Penglai Immortal Island.

No poke, no poke, no poke

It's really good

Good, good, good, good, good, good

Okay, but I still like pure love. This is considered fake love.

The overall feeling is okay, but there are some details problems

It's pretty good. There are too few InuYasha fanfics, and they haven't been picked up randomly. The ending is hard to get over. I hope the author will keep up the good work.

It's pretty good. The candy-sprinkling scene is also very interesting. Some of the previously bad settings have also been modified. There are no obvious problems anymore. It's worth watching.

I like this Inuyasha fanfic very much. Apart from the poor writing style, it also has some superfluous bits of the author's inner story mixed in. It's pretty good.

It's pretty good. There's room for improvement. There are a lot of places where I don't read well.

The writing is good and the content is rich and colorful, but whether I can persist in finishing it is a question.