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This book is pretty good so far, but it has a few problems. First, describing such a cunning and vulgar image may spoil the reader's reading experience: compared to that kind of vulgar character, readers may prefer that the diplomat is positive, wise, and calm, because the diplomat represents the image of the force behind it. Writing this way feels like embarrassing the force. If it is to highlight the so-called contrast, it is unnecessary. The emotional value of portraying a wise diplomat strategizing is not low (such as Zhuge Liang). Most readers of today's novels want to have fun and hope that the protagonist and the image behind him are positive. Forcibly portraying an image that vilifies the protagonist and his power may have a negative impact on readers, such as feeling aggrieved (this is how I feel). Secondly, there is no need to take advantage of some advantages (such as the so-called touching of legs). Today's readers' reading tendency has gradually changed from sentimental stallion novels to single-minded romance novels (if you want to write emotional dramas). The reason is very simple. Today's readers have begun to think about the relationship between the characters in the book. It is unrealistic to have a harem and all the harems are devoted to one person. If it is forced to be written, it will appear very deliberate and the portrayal of emotions will appear very pale. The theme of this book is relatively good. It does not have the proliferation of red alert articles, nor the hollowness of individual invincible articles, but it integrates a series of factors such as players, forces, etc. Therefore, I am very optimistic about this book and hope that the author can write better and better. The above are just some of my suggestions, no harm done.

I give it four stars for the time being, mainly because the character Wang Zhong is a bit popular, but if it can be exposed later and reversed, it can better harvest the audience according to the system settings. In addition, the live broadcast room can only broadcast one person, and there is no need to lift the avatar to such a high position. Otherwise, it will look very fragmented. I think it will be very interesting. The avatar setting can be used to stay in the safety of the main world when downloading a copy. There are also people in the main world to stabilize the morale of the army.

Five stars. It's very interesting. It's a rare fanfic of the spirit cage type. It's the first time I've seen one that brings the 4th natural disaster here to play with. To be honest, the writing is quite good. I've seen many people who have established forces on the ground. Your writing is quite good. I saw that in the latest chapter, 4068 joined the protagonist lineup. I think it's okay. From the perspective of 4068, he has no problem. If I were 4068, I would do the same, but I might die. I don't have his ability, you know. As for the character 4068, although in some fandoms, the protagonists killed him directly, because from a subjective perspective, we are following Mark, so we don't have much affection for this person, but from his perspective, the things he did are completely fine, so my suggestion is to accept him, and also accept his good friends, but what I am curious about is how to explain Mark? The protagonist and his group, although the protagonist said that they came from the sky, that is, the universe, Mark must say in detail So I suggest that it is better to take a group photo. The protagonist Lei Ming and the others and some important characters take a photo. This will be more convincing. Of course it's just a personal thought. The author doesn't have to take pictures, but I think 4068 can be accepted. He is not bad, and he is a man of action. He should not betray because 4068, he wants to be a human being, and this place can give him human rights, a person's rights, so it should be impossible for him to betray

It's well written. I've read a little bit of The Cage, but I haven't finished it. I've also seen Boss Bai in other novels. The fifth episode of the second season of The Cage was very good at watching Mark play games. Boss Bai is very good at playing games.

I feel that Red Alert's combat power is a bit low (I've only played 3), and StarCraft feels better, but if you can go to other worlds to purchase goods, your combat power should be fine. The author can add Infinite Storatos (IS) and directly crush it with technology.

The theme of the live broadcast is a bit interesting

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good

Personally I don't think there is any problem.

Great, come on author Great, cheers author.

Personal opinion is okay

Overall, it looks pretty good. I'll check it out later.

Let's see what happens behind this fandom