Rebirth: the School Beauty Is Really My Girlfriend

Both male and female protagonists have mouths and emotional intelligence, and the development path of the male protagonist is not too exaggerated. The author's writing style is delicate and has basically no poisonous points. He touches people's hearts in some small details and writes words that make people's hearts move. I kind of suspect it was a trumpet account opened by some senior [laughing][laughing]

(Personal opinion) I really enjoyed reading this rebirth love story. It has a very youthful feel. The old boy and the aloof school beauty slowly transform. I have seen a lot of comments saying that there is too much business, and I actually quite like it. As a reborn person, Zhou Yu used this experience to make a career, and as a high school student, he did not deviate from the academic part of high school life. His love with Shen Wangshu also means that the two of them are heading towards a better future together. Zhou's career and Shen Zai's responsibility for his identity at the birthday party are two people's respective responsibilities, and their gradual growth and independence have also achieved what they said to each other before and after their rebirth: "Zhou Yu/Lin Wangshu, promise me—— Just be yourself and always be honest with yourself. You don't need to meet anyone's expectations. Do whatever makes your heart flutter. Forever, free and passionate. Forever, happiness. "

Highly recommended! ! ! The writing is so good. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is so sweet. It cannot be compared with the industrial saccharine of other books. It feels like a replica of a TV series. It is really good-looking. Not only the protagonist, but also every supporting role is very vividly portrayed. Even the smallest character has a slightly obscure story, and it does not steal the show at all. It is written in one stroke and has a faint sense of group portrait. Next, let me praise the author's writing style. Tomato has read so many books and has not read those big popular works. However, this book is one of the best writing styles I have seen so far. I can see that the author writes very carefully, with many narrative writing methods and the inner activities of the protagonist. Wait, wait, I don't know about the majors, but you can clearly see the difference between the writing style and other books. The writing is really good. Although it is just a love story, including the author's attitude, I saw that he also said that he would practice his own writing and so on. He is really attentive. Highly recommended! ! ! Good-looking[Like][Like][Like]

It's a relatively good book. The only bad point is why the heroine was a big star in her previous life. Everything else is perfect. After all, most people nowadays have a bit of a stereotype about celebrities.

This book is very interesting, especially the description of Lu Bu's fight with Dong Zhuo for Dong Zhuo's sake. Lin Daiyu fought for hundreds of rounds. But Xue Baochai is really too strong . If it weren't for Noxian's outer ring + Noxian beheading Taiwan. This wave of M4's six times strafing will kill you, among other things. I compare Appreciate what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Little You are so arrogant, don't stop in front of your brother Liang" to show Zhu Liang Three sticks to the monkey to kill his homesickness. All in all, this book Love[like][like][like][like][like][like] Festival is interesting.

The heroine is very good and sweet, and is very suitable for book lovers who want to read a sweet youth-themed novel. However, the relationship line is quite long, and the relationship is not confirmed at once. The ambiguous period is very long. Of course, the ambiguity starts quickly, but since the male and female protagonists have just turned 18, the progress of the relationship is very slow. Could the author speed up the time a little bit? Otherwise, how much do you need to write every day to get married? Come on, author! Hope to adopt! [Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute] (Salute!!!) Of course, slow-paced gays are more recommended! The fast-paced gay scene is a bit uncomfortable to watch, but overall it's good! Recommend!

The writing in the back is really good, and the world line is perfectly wrapped up. Whether it is the letter from childhood or the proposal from the old school, I can't forget it after reading it in one go. The most unforgettable thing is the girl in high school who ran towards the protagonist in the snow, and the heroine recalled the plot of hiding from the rain. These are definitely one of the best memories for both parties. Running in both directions is very sweet, and it really makes up for the regret. I still remember a few symbols OO€ 0.0. I look forward to the author's next work.

Let's talk about the conclusion first. This can be said to be one of the best campus love articles in Tomato. The advantages are obvious. The author's writing style is good, and the scale is also very appropriate. The love written is basically in line with the public's imagination. It can be said to be a book worth recommending. , Let's talk about some shortcomings (personal opinion), first of all, in terms of the names of the male and female protagonists, after confirming the relationship, they sometimes call each other by their full names. I personally feel that this is a bit lacking in details. Of course, we are looking at it from a third perspective. This story is not harmful, but I hope the author can pay more attention to the names when describing it in the future. It is best to use nicknames between lovers. Secondly, some characters are too deliberately created, such as the future star that the author discovered in an Internet cafe. To be honest, I don't think so. I know the purpose of this character, because the author didn't explain it halfway through the writing. Unlike the journey of the protagonist's buddy, the story of this character is actually unfinished. If it is a group portrait novel, the portrayal will be too thin. If it is a love story, the character will be too redundant. Of course, this book is still full of flaws in general. I still recommend friends who like campus youth or campus love to read this book.

It's been a long time since I've seen such an eye-catching book. I've been very busy lately, but I managed to squeeze in the time to read the latest chapter. The description of daily life is very real, and I was a little moved when I read it. At the same time, the expressions of various emotions are also very sincere, and it is really well written. The emotional line is also very sweet and not cheesy at all. Come on, the author [blowing kiss]

Very beautiful, highly recommended! ! Although it is a rebirth novel, it is not as formulaic or routine as traditional rebirth novels. Many plots are very innovative. The protagonist is reborn with the knowledge of a doctoral student and has better grades. He will not go to the original school because of various factors such as good friends in his previous life. The most important thing is that the relationship between the male and female protagonists is not sluggish, and the heroine's character is very three-dimensional and fresh. I personally also like the portrayal of the male and female protagonists very much. Oops, it's so pretty anyway, and it suits my taste so well. I don't know how to comment anymore, author, keep up the good work! I also highly recommend new readers to read Chapter 50 first. In short, it is very good [like] [like] [like] [like]

The writing is also so good. The sparkling youth on the paper seems to be ripples in my heart, which has been away from junior high school for ten years. I miss the time of that year and think of being in front of the high school entrance examination classroom with the person I like under the eaves, leaning on the railing, with the classroom where the exam is about to take place behind me, and the rain in front of me. . .

When I first started watching it, I thought it was a classic cool novel with a classic opening. I was already prepared for it, but unexpectedly, the pace was quite slow, not a brainless industrial candy. The writing style in the early stage was indeed not very good, and it was easy to dissuade some people. Moreover, it mainly wrote about some career lines, which did not feel very attractive. However, this is inevitable and it is reborn, which is also the top priority. But in fact, I feel that the heroine treated the hero differently in the early stage, constantly gave the hero opportunities, and excessively exaggerated the image of the hero in the early stage, which indeed gave people a stereotyped image. Maybe it was not done well. The cause and effect could have been hinted in the previous article, otherwise it would appear that the heroine's feelings for the hero would be a bit abrupt, but it may also be the author's text. The wind is like this, after all, many subsequent plots are also like this. It was not mentioned in the previous article. It suddenly explodes for you, and it is a surprise. For example, after the male protagonist feels that his 18th birthday is too hasty for the female protagonist, he actually prepares at least one birthday gift for the female protagonist every month. This is not mentioned in the previous article. At first glance, it is really a surprise. It is an obvious type of writing that gets better as you write. The writing in the early stage is a little immature, but it feels like it has taken off all the way from the birthday of the heroine. The middle and later stages are particularly well written, especially the daily interactions, as well as major milestones, birthdays, performances, and concerts. Especially when the heroine played the piano for the hero on stage, it was very visual. My mind was filled with the singing, and I also had a crush on the concert. I don't know how to describe it, my brain just exploded. It was very, very good, and the details were well described. I felt that every sentence had a profound meaning, just like the heroine pretended to break the scene when she was drunk, and then secretly prepared a surprise concert ticket for the hero. It was very touching. The overlap of time and space is also very touching. There is a sharp contrast between the 30-year-old Quanquan and the 18-year-old Quanquan. It will make people feel regretful for the 30-year-old Quanquan and feel lucky that the 18-year-old Quanquan can live a happy life with the male protagonist. In fact, I think the 30-year-old Quanquan will definitely envy the 18-year-old Quanquan. Because he has a Zhou Yu who really loves her, rather than weighing the pros and cons. In the article, you can clearly feel the progress of the male protagonist. From a dull science guy who doesn't understand love and can't talk about love, he thinks he is also a boring, cold, lonely person without any talent. Art is just a festival, but birthdays are not sentimental, and I don't have the eyes to discover beauty. I'll be honest, but gradually, I will prepare a car full of flowers and white roses for the heroine, open a "junk" shop for the heroine, and a sea of stars, and prepare birthday gifts from zero to 18 years old. Although he was not very happy, he would still buy a dozen balloons on New Year's Eve, carry a huge bear on his back, and make these little rags that the heroine loved. He would run downstairs to the heroine's house in the middle of winter because he wanted her to build a small snowman. These behaviors that he thought were silly and boring before were really touching. He also created some small programs for the heroine, opened plug-ins for her, and played gun games with the heroine (the same was true for the heroine in the previous life). It was really poignant to comfort the heroine with the knowledge of science, astrophysics, and stars. I thought he was going to say it was pretty good, which was really funny. It has a sense of layering. In the early stage, you can obviously feel that the male protagonist does not love the female protagonist as much as in the later period. In the process of daily interaction, the lonely and cold soul in his heart is melted by the female protagonist. It is very touching. Holy shit, the female protagonist is the version t0 that I have nothing to say. Very Good, the characterization is perfect. She is a sleeping spirit, a bath towel, a troublesome spirit, a secret spirit, an arrogant and cool spirit. It is very contrasting, cute and touching. I really feel sorry for the circle in my previous life, but there is nothing I can do about it. The conditions of the male protagonist in the previous life were not that good, not that outstanding, and he had a bit of inferiority. In that case, according to his personality, it is impossible to take the initiative to approach the heroine, but I feel that the heroine is her sister. Words are really the catalyst for their relationship. Frankness and bravery have played a big role in both the previous life and the future. The daily interactions are very sweet. I really want to be made to smile by the heroine. The various little names, small details, and small actions are really beautiful. Maybe this is the charm of daily life, but this novel is far more than daily life. It also describes the big scenes very well, such as performances and concerts. It should be like this if you are immersed in the scene. By the way, the heroine is a really nice person. Sometimes I feel aggrieved for the heroine. She has liked someone for so many years and took the initiative twice with no results. When she is almost 30 years old, she weighs the pros and cons. Every time, the heroine takes the initiative. The cold war hero just stops talking to each other for four days and is busy with work. Who can bear this? But I feel happy and lucky for the heroine in the future, finally waiting for Zhou Yu who loves her. Maybe it is the regret of being in the industry at the age of 30 that creates the rebirth of the hero? What we don't know is that the female protagonist is a very outstanding and attractive person, and readers will be attracted by her. At that time, she could think of translating a book that the male protagonist likes (this is really shocking, a feeling that cannot be described at all), secretly recording the piano music she played with headphones, and when the male protagonist said that he had no talent. Yi, when he felt inferior and boring, he comforted him warmly. Even I thought it was just a small plot. Unexpectedly, he later started to teach the male protagonist to play piano music after being drunk, so that the male protagonist would also have talents. It was really poignant. Even I, a reader, did not expect it. The echoes were very good. Also, when it came to the heroine's 19th birthday, the hero was very busy the previous week, and what was described at that time was that the heroine was a little unhappy because the hero didn't have time to accompany her. At that time, I thought that the hero was a straight man who had cancer again, and he needed to be scolded. I didn't expect it to be another reversal. In fact, the heroine knew it all along. The male protagonist was preparing a birthday surprise for her, such as the piano page on the computer and the displayed shoes, but he was never revealed. I was deceived, but it was too early to scold him. Their mutual understanding, tolerance and support for each other is really touching. Who wouldn't love such a girl? Love is really great and magical. It can make a stunning heroine in the previous life stick to the ordinary hero for so long, and it can also make the reincarnated hero make such a major change. It is very touching. In my opinion, "Flaws Are Not Covered" is a very, very rare masterpiece. The heroine's persistent and unyielding love for the hero is really touching.

It's finally finished, and it's time to evaluate. I won't go into too much detail here, but this is the only novel I've read in so many years that I'm completely satisfied with. Both the writing and the plot are full of solid stuff. The characters are very distinct and the group portraits are particularly well written. It can even make people feel that they are all real living people, rather than rigid words in novels. This is not easy, give the author a thumbs up. I won't talk about the other two books. After all, I'm not someone's drag, and I came here specifically to advertise. Well, come on, author, I'm looking forward to the extra chapter and the next book, so I'm already following it.

Grass jelly. Strong writing skills and delicate dialogues between characters When reading, emotions are like running water, slowly nourishing every crevice in my heart. It seems that many wounds that have been torn and cannot be healed have been treated with healing techniques. Glowing green, shining golden Buds have sprouted and will be repaired slowly. Thank you to the author for your thoughtfulness.

This book really amazed me, The timeline includes past lives, present lives, and the most important thing is that the author's writing is very good, with a slight sense of alienation, like first person and third person. My mind exploded when I saw the confession. The image was so strong, the lyrics echoed in my ears, and the memories were rushing through me.

It's a book that I really like. It's not a cookie-cutter routine. The writing is online and the characters' emotions are delicate. The only thing that was a little weird was that the image of Oda was over-described when I first read it. I only need to write about the heroine. Lin Wangshu is really cute. The author writes slowly. I hope there will be more. Come on [cool]

It is indeed a very good book, and the plot rhythm is also very good. The emotional scenes are not the same as those books that just write about mindless love. This is the process of normal people falling in love. First, they have a good feeling, then to the ambiguous period, and finally to the confession; the writing is a bit poor at the beginning, and the dialogue The handling of the book was not very good. Sometimes I couldn't tell who was speaking while reading, just like that kind of lousy translator Nikki. But later it got much better. The description of the psychology was okay, and the emotional intelligence of the two people was also online. There was no talk of forcibly lowering the emotional intelligence in order to highlight the love. Overall it's a good book, it would be better if it were updated sooner.

The score should be 9.5. I read this book in three days. I don't like listening to books but only reading. I often read them quickly, but I basically read this book word for word. It is rare to see an author who can portray seemingly ordinary but extraordinary high school students so sincerely and bravely. Love has always been unclear, but the love in his writing is something I rarely see. It is not overbearing, ignorant, or skillful like Neptune, but brave and sincere. Maybe I will also be delighted by shy and ignorant love, and be fascinated by passionate and domineering love, but brave and sincere love is the most attractive. Thanks to the author for letting me see such a good book🍅

It's really good to read and suitable for readers who like a slow pace. The author's writing is online, with many funny jokes, and the descriptions of family, love and brotherhood are very detailed. It is a work that can resonate and move people. However, the reading volume has not been high. For a person who is too lazy to rate it as normal, he has always read novels just to kill time. I leave this review in the hope that the author will continue to write, and someone will always discover this masterpiece! @Wave function collapse

I have read Chapter 220 so far Overall, it is very good. The author is not as deep as a newcomer in many sentences or chapters. But it is not included in the plot? It is with a sense of God's arrogance. Both the author and the male protagonist have a sense of separation in some places, with a sense of arrogance from God's perspective. The male protagonist is an adult and has been in love for three years before being reborn. The book also writes about a female bishop, but the male protagonist who is reborn feels like he has an extra memory besides love. In other places, it is just like being in love when he was 18 years old. Moreover, the male protagonist in his previous life never knew that the female protagonist liked him since he was a child. It would be okay if he knew that the female protagonist liked him before his rebirth. This would also explain the male protagonist's constant emphasis that the female protagonist is his and must be his. It is the arrogance that this person is mine no matter what. To be honest, the heroine is not lacking in people. Other than this aspect, everything is pretty good so far. I was ready to jump in when I saw 252. To be honest, Liu Beiwen, I think the behavior of the male protagonist is nothing in a story with multiple female protagonists, but since this book is about pure love, it must have the feeling of pure love. From what I have read so far, I feel that every time the male protagonist meets the female protagonist, he thinks about Yellow, and he still has a sense of arrogance as mentioned above. The summary is that there is no sense of boundaries. An adult who is over 30 years old and has successfully started a business has no idea about his own era (he always thought that he had been dating the female protagonist for three years). Is there a possibility that the female protagonist does not have that memory, so when the relationship was not confirmed, he did it to the upper body of the female protagonist——, and silenced his mobile phone that night after confessing his love. I didn't want to think about the heroine. I ran to the heroine's house early in the morning. I felt that the heroine hinted that after taking a shower, I would only wear underwear. So I hugged the heroine who was wearing a thin pajamas, and started to touch the heroine's upper body. You must know that this is the day after the confession, not even 12 hours have passed. The heroine has no memory of the previous life. It is equivalent to touching the upper body of the partner just after confirming the relationship. Maybe in my opinion, it is okay to "pass" the kiss, but the upper body makes me feel that there is really no sense of boundaries. Other than that, everything is fine.

"I have never fallen in love prematurely. After my rebirth, I confessed my love at the beginning of school" Moonlight on the Island The male protagonist Zhou Yu and the female protagonist Lin Wangshu. The male protagonist is reborn 10 years ago and pursues the female protagonist in both directions. The female protagonist is a school belle and has a superior family. The male protagonist works hard to establish ByteDance. The mobile game has become the richest man in China from 2048, Happy Xiaoxiaole... From movies, interactions to college parties, and on each other's birthdays, we work together with the heroine to help the heroine become a star, have children, and become an immortal "Internet myth." The sweet love ends successfully in the main chapter. The excellent wave function collapse [extra] fills all the pitfalls, and the parallel reversal recreates a dream like "there is a secret fragrance coming". Both sides of the parallel are small happiness... Oops~ Not bad! This book conforms to any fantasy of love that most book lovers have. Looking forward to the new book in N months...

I don't understand why the score is only 9.1, And I almost missed this book because of the score. I am very responsible in saying that this book is really outstanding among similar works and deserves a higher score. The same time travel, the same sweet story, the same cliche plot, but the difference is that the author's writing style is super good. Many times you can still have pictures in your mind while reading, and sometimes even have BGM (this is no exaggeration). The key is that most of the sweetness in this book is not forced into your mouth with handfuls of industrial saccharin (of course, this book also contains industrial saccharin, but the amount is small and does not hurt the body), but comes from a certain These characters are destined to appear with regrets (sweet stories, sweet stories, sweet stories, these types of characters do not affect the protagonist's emotional line), and this kind of regret runs throughout. This is due to the author's delicate portrayal of most characters, so that these characters who are destined to end in tragedy do not appear abrupt and deliberate. This is very pleasing to me. After all, life is only about regrets to make happiness more precious and complete. Many similar books are hard to get into, and they seem to "remind" you that you are reading a novel. I think it is because the writing is too complete and too sweet to be true. In addition, there are so many bugs that you have to reconcile yourself while reading: it is just a novel, don't take it seriously. Of course, this book also has bugs, but they are really few and far between. Another thing that is a plus for me is that all the pits the author dug in the book were prepared when he was conceived. They were not dumplings made because of this dish of vinegar. I have read too many articles about digging pits forcibly, and I feel that I can dig a pit here to promote the plot later, sublimate the plot, lay a foreshadowing, use it if it is needed, and pretend it does not exist if it is not used. This alone surpasses many authors. Finally, I want to complain, there are too few, it is too little, it is not enough to watch, and the withdrawal reaction is really serious now. Don't tell me that you won't write similar sweet stories in the future. I'll start thinking about it right away and write another one with 5 million words. I'll write about life, old age, illness and death. The pace should be slower, the character descriptions should be more detailed, there should be more inner monologues, and the speed of the car should be maintained. Don't be harmonized anymore. You have to take credit for it as the author. Don't ask me to beg you. @Wave function collapse Let's do it

There are very few Tomato articles that I can read these days, but this book gave me some different surprises. Although it is a classic part of rebirth and making money, the commercial part accounts for a large proportion. Most of them are written for the development of the plot. The other parts only reflect the strength of the male protagonist. Overall, the love part is mostly the part, which is well received. Let's talk about character creation. There are basically no fresh characters in today's novels. They are just trying to write more brilliantly about the repetitive people everyone writes about. The male and female protagonists of this book can be regarded as the best portrayed in the articles I have read recently. If I have to use one word to describe it, it is full of fireworks. Moreover, the background of this book is still in the 2000s. This makes me, a post-2000s kid, very curious about what the living environment was like at that time. Finally, there is the overall plot. Scenes of reversals and slaps in the face are definitely inevitable. If you don't like this kind of plot, you can leave as soon as possible, so as not to turn around and scold you after watching half of it. If you like or don't care about this kind of plot, you can feel free to enter. Although I feel that the description may be a bit too exaggerated, it may be that my vision is relatively low, so you can just enjoy it. The overall plot is still very good, and I will read it again and again in the future. Finally, I wish the author will never be stuck in the follow-up and make a lot of profits. I also wish all book friends a smooth life and happiness every day.

The emotional line is delicate, the business line is interspersed naturally without conflict, the characters are full-bodied, and there are certain group portraits. You can see the author and the male and female protagonists grow together, and it is a good story about the pure love of a single woman (I hope Tian Lingwei can handle the line well).

Not to mention, brothers, it's really super, super, super sweet! It's just a daily novel. I've seen a lot of this type of writing before, but those usually write about the male protagonist being very awesome in the later stage, and the female protagonist having no sense of existence. At the end of the writing, the male protagonist writes about his career and the female protagonist. This article prefers to write briefly about career, mainly talking about relationships, and it's still a bit frivolous in the later stage, but isn't that what love is like. There are also many little Easter eggs and foreshadowings in many places in the novel. The author is so awesome.

I never thought that I would be able to encounter such a long novel on the Tomato platform and that I could still read it. It turns out that when you see people happy, you will also feel happy. People who have no sense of ritual will naturally give them the best and most enviable rituals when they meet the right person, which comes from instinct and from the heart. It's not a teddy novel, nor is it Long Ao Astronomy. Although there is basically no business war, and the protagonist's career success can be said to be smooth sailing, this is not a business war novel about intrigues and intrigues. Love and courage in the smallest details, this is what I want to learn. Always free, always warm

This novel is very exciting, especially the emotional scene. I have only read chapter 35 now, but I like the behavior of the male protagonist very much. I give it a perfect score, 100 points! ! ! It's not like the industrial saccharine smell that many male videos always write. I really, really like the emotional scenes here. If you are a heroine type, I highly recommend this book. Judging from the distance between the male protagonist and the female protagonist so far, I don't like it. To be honest, it is labeled as a single female protagonist. I feel that it should be written carefully. Why are all male videos like this? . Alas, it's hard to describe in one sentence. A female character is given so many close-ups and interactions with the male protagonist. You can make her the female protagonist. Why else would you write the original female protagonist? I cried anxiously and wanted to quit. It looked so weak. Forget it. I won't force myself. I can't stand this kind of thing. Let's read it in another book. When I first started reading this book, I was really satisfied with it. I also liked the heroine's character, but the author's sense of distance was very poorly controlled. I gave up.

The writing is really good. The writing style may be a little green in the early stage, but the further you read, the more you can feel the progress of the author's writing style. It is visible to the naked eye, and he should have studied it specially. This alone is worth five stars.

Good! It's as sweet as it should be, and it's not ridiculous. Both the male and female protagonists have long mouths. It's obvious that they are waiting for the college entrance examination to end, so as not to enter the dark room. The author tells me to hold on, stay strong, okay? I'm looking forward to the college chapter. I saw the author saying that there is actually nothing to write about, but I want to say that it is really well written, and it is the best candy for daily life. Every character is very full, and you can feel the charm of many supporting characters. Everyone is the protagonist of their own life.

I stayed up late for three or four days to finish it. Overall, it is very interesting. I also saw the growth of the male and female protagonists along the way. Zhang Chi Youdu's writing style is also very good, which suits my taste. I haven't read it this much in a long time. The update is fast and the number of words is not watery at all. Lao Deng is very awesome [like] [like] [like]. I can't say much about the update. But personally, I think the male protagonist's character is a bit off-kilter. I've never seen such a straight male protagonist. Many times, I feel that the male protagonist is a bit unworthy of the female protagonist. All in all, Lao Deng has written well, with a compact storyline and a wide range of twists and turns. It is worth recommending. I also hope that Lao Deng will get better and better. I look forward to meeting you next time!