Elf: Dragon Dances with Earth Dragon? Sister Baicai Was so Greedy That She Cried

As someone who prefers anime, I like this setting of qualifications very much. It does not forcefully lock the upper limit, and gives me the feeling that some weak elves in anime also have their highlight moments. Also, I think there is too little sugar. The author can write whatever he wants without caring about other voices. Determine the positioning. After all, the reader audience system has already selected it, so don't worry too much.

It's a very good book. I give it five stars [laughing] The author is very active. I will read most of the paragraph reviews [laughing] Also, I am very optimistic about the guy named Han. The Charmander part is really good. However, I have played Pokémon in Minecraft, and I made a Shiny Charmander in it. Hahaha, the shiny golden bald head made a deep impression on me. Now when I see Charmander, I think of that glowing bald head. It's really hard [face covering]

Based on the short reviews I read along the way, I still know that the author has changed a lot of things. And the author is willing to listen to readers' feelings So You deserve this five-star rating The author is great I hope you will write more and more and create a brand new Pokémon masterpiece

It looks good, but I feel that the emotional line is worse than that of Mr. Lu (especially suitable for elves. The interval between elves being conquered is too short. It's no problem at all. A longer interval would be better). Apart from this, it is all good, especially the plot. Although there is a linkage, it will not make people confused. The characters are also well preserved (especially Boss Sakaki). Overall, it is a very good Tomato article. Keep writing. If the plot is still at this level, the Tomato Pokémon article will be the best among the three.

Suggestions before reading: Overall it is quite dark, so it is not recommended for those who yearn for the utopian world in the original Pokémon books. 1. According to the author, strength is the most important thing, so it is quite common for powerful people to kill people here. There is no official investigation in the article. Strength is the best. 2. Pokémon die very frequently. If you are defeated here, there will be no near-death, circle-eye, death in one move if the level difference is too big, and the champion will be gone before a few chapters are released. 3. Although the setting is a bit darker, it is generally relatively relaxed, with daily life and training scenes. The more I look at it, the more fragmented it becomes, so I'd better divide it less.

I felt very good after reading Chapter 28. The setting is still very good. Maybe some brothers don't like the content about female classmates, but it's acceptable. There's no classic plot within a classic. The protagonist is "dressed" like Mo Fan and his character won't be particularly bad, but maybe it's because he is a high school student? Then after defeating the battle, he will tell the opponent his shortcomings and how to deal with himself. These feelings are not very necessary, but they are not considered poisonous. Finally, I hope that if Wu Nu is mainly a single female protagonist, I hope that the main text will not have too many emotional descriptions and scenes, and just put a side story. Reading Pokémon stories is for Pokémon.

There are so many advantages that I can't explain them clearly. The author is active and nice. He reads almost every comment. There are pictures and the updates are fast. It's super invincible. If you have any questions, he will explain them to you. He can also open porn occasionally. It's really authoritative. Highly recommended. Divine book! It's truly a divine book! The third young master of the Tang family was about to cry when he saw it, and Tiancan Tudou was amazed when he saw it! This is The four great classics are reborn, leading the literary world in the 21st century! "Holy Ruins"? I lost some of my literary talent in front of it! "Dou Po"? I owe it some connotation! "Zhu Xian"? In front of it, my feelings fade away! "Covering the Sky"? In front of it, I lost three cents of my imagination! "Buddha"? Half of the layout is missing in front of it! This is a once-in-a-century classic of online writing! The greatest literature of the 21st century Study the masterpiece! From Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naian, Wu Chengen, Cao Xueqin, to Kong Mo Lao Zhuang, Shixian, Shisheng, Sansu Jiaxuan; since Qin Emperor, Han Dynasty, Tang Zong and Song Dynasty Ancestors, Genghis Khan, to Sakyamuni, Plato, and Cobai Who can read Aristotle and not be amazed? ! This book by the author is truly the work of heaven and man! With brilliant literary talent and exquisite diction, Inheriting the style of the Wei and Jin Dynasties, and promoting the charm of the Tang and Song Dynasties, it is profound! Get it in your lifetime Reading this book is truly a blessing for three lifetimes! However, after reading this book, a feeling of sadness suddenly emerged: Such a masterpiece, if If we don't have the chance to meet again in the future, what's the point of my life? What's the point of my life? ! Fortunately! Make a decision immediately and put it on your bookshelf! A restless heart can only get a moment Tranquility. Otherwise! If these masterpieces were covered with dust and the world could not see them, wouldn't they? Otherwise! If these masterpieces were covered with dust and the world could not see them, wouldn't they? A waste of natural resources and a waste of the author's efforts? ! After a battle between heaven and man, I finally made up my mind to sacrifice my ego and achieve perfection. Big me! This book review is dedicated to everyone in the world! This book must be read over and over again, until Let the whole world know about it! Walking between heaven and earth, the scorching sun and bright moon are witnesses: Is this book enjoyable enough? One is not enough! Across the rivers and lakes. Above, rivers and lakes are proof: Is this book enjoyable? Not at all Enough! Standing on the top of the fairy mountain, Qionglou Yuyu echoed: Is the update fast enough? Not enough! Not enough! Far from enough! Not enough chapters! Not fast enough! Not enough content! Not enough! [Come on]

Pokemon, hehe, this book is really good. The author's tricks for the protagonist are quite reasonable. Except for some of the skills and characteristics, they are all in Pokemon itself. Otherwise, it would be too invincible and boring. I also like the fact that there is a female protagonist. Otherwise, it would be too monotonous. The group portraits are not bad. It is boring to have a single protagonist who is invincible. The world view is a combination of anime and special chapters. Special chapters are the main ones. There are also some personal designs of the author. However, the private designs are still interesting and can be regarded as saving the world. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

The framework of the story is quite good. Such a direct theme and slow pace don't really go together well, but overall it looks good. It's already a good work for a new writer [OK]. It's just that the pace is relatively slow [scrolling], and until the end of the first chapter, the round land shark has not evolved in more than 100 chapters [crazy]. Moreover, the author is a little too pursuing the diversity of elves [currently in the process of drafting], and I don't understand why the first elf has not changed his fate for the second time. Now that there are not many resources, we should concentrate on cultivating one elf [hit hard]. Don't let readers' attention be too scattered, because it is too slow to warm up and there is not much excitement. After all, the PK on campus does not look so passionate [rolls eyes] The channels that the author sometimes avoids may make the impression worse (at the end of the first article, I thought it was going to be ignited, but only the mythical beasts fought, but the result was to skip the Crimson King and talk about it later [I almost cried]) Moreover, the pricing and detailed introduction of abilities are a bit brief [Thinking] I think we can add a proficiency column to the protagonist to increase the protagonist's abilities [Shy] In short, I really want to see more progress for the protagonist, instead of hitting the wall and failing at every turn. The sense of existence can only be found in front of classmates. This aspect is still too low [grievance] Of course, the author is very eager to improve, and the speed of replying to comments is already among the best for other books. I believe that future chapters will be better and better [full], and I also hope that the progress of biting the land shark and meeting the heroine will be accelerated. Ps: (On the contrary, Chapter 2 feels that the progress is too fast, and the sense of division is relatively strong. What happened in the previous chapter should have been a very exciting ending, but instead it became a discussion later, and a lot of information was stuffed in it. It should not be summarized in such a simple way) I recently read a few more books and found that the author always felt that his contact with the heroine was far more natural than other books. At least it wasn't an accidental encounter, a hero saving a beauty, being picked up, taken in, and knocking someone unconscious during teleportation, because I accidentally did some minor things before (such as taking a look) but ended up being involved in an inexplicable dispute. And the protagonist does have enough advantages to attract Shyvana, and it is not just discussed because of the connection with the elves (guess whose Bite Land Shark's super evolution speed will be reduced by 10 [face covering] [OK]) and the fact that the protagonist is not a wooden person, or even an attacker, is well received. Another point is that I haven't seen the protagonist's reformation or teaching part written so carefully in any other book (that's a lot of pressure), so it's fresh and it's a good debut novel.

The progress of the plot is very smooth, and the battle strength is very natural. As a Pokémon novel, it does not ignore the character of the elf, which is really great. It can be seen that the protagonist is making little progress and becoming mature. It is delicious, delicious, delicious, and the interaction between the young couple is also very delicious.

The world view is very interesting, relatively easy to accept, but not lacking in freshness. The author is a veteran in writing Pokémon articles. The quality is guaranteed, and the pace of the content is not sluggish. However, it is not a cool article in the traditional sense, so you need to be patient to read it. It is not a brainless read. Five-star recommendation.

I have been short of books recently, so I came back to read elf books on a whim, and picked out many books. In the end, this one was the only one that kept me reading. The plot speed is moderate, the logic is tight, and the scene descriptions are also very good. Even if you don't know a lot about elf numerical skills, you can still understand them through analysis. The various foreshadowings are also recycled. The author is also very active and can integrate various memes well. It is a good book, and I give it five stars. I look forward to the subsequent development. Come on, author!

It's a very good book, worthy of giving it five stars. The emotional line with Sister Baicai is very good. At the same time, the story line with Han Song is not like those traditional elf kings, which are like a villain who pretends to be a slap in the face, but depicts the arc of the character [laughs]

It's a very good book. The author is also relatively active. The setting is more anime-oriented. What I like the most is that there is no upper limit for elf qualifications. The plot as a whole has no poisonous points, and the pits buried in the early stage will be filled in later. The shortcoming is that it is a bit unsightly, so keep working hard!

Why do I give it five stars? 1. The advancement and modification of the story are very good. The advancement of the timeline may not be as fast as other instant games, but it gives people a sense of immersion. The author also put a lot of thought into character creation and plot design. Moreover, the author will respond and correct readers' suggestions, which is very attractive. 2. Regarding the theme of Pokémon, this book will not cause unreasonable mistakes and confusion. It is very sure about the plot, the appearance and characteristics of the characters, and the system does not directly make people become gods. This arrangement is more reasonable and more suitable for cultivating characteristics. Through unique memes, thoughtful pictures, and detailed descriptions, you can also give people a better experience. 3. Although there are many emotional descriptions, they are in line with the plot, which means that the real passion has not yet been reflected. There is no need to be sarcastic or disgusted with the plot. On the contrary, this kind of foreshadowing makes me more attracted to it. The above are all personal feelings, if you don't agree, please don't harass me. Secondly, let's talk about the important Pokémon. The author also leaves room for our imagination when describing the battle. (I personally feel that we can actually add more descriptions.) At the same time, as for the role of the system, changing fate, shopping malls, and space are not prominent enough. It is still a bit urgent to conquer and compress Pokémon in a short period of time (I personally think that this aspect should be slowed down next, and more exploration progress should be written. Although due to the urgency of the end, more foreshadowing can also be provided). Compared with other harem novels, online game novels, time travel novels, and fanfics, this Pokémon novel has a very good progression. It will not be abrupt or depressing, and most of the plots are reasonable. I also feel very good!

Except for some places where the narrative is a bit confusing, the rest is really great. I feel like I am watching Teacher Lu, but the details are much better than him. It is so sweet [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Well, it's not bad. The group portrait story is just too slow in pace. The interval between collecting Pokémon in the middle period is a bit short and a bit abrupt. There are too many watery stories in the later stage😔The emotional line is still okay. The middle and late stages are sweet. If you like the group portrait story, it's worth reading. The character creation is okay🤓

Although it is a group portrait article, two men and three women have three characters, and three men and three women have two characters. Doesn't it mean they have to form a group? Also, as a Pokémon novel, there is very little interaction between the protagonist and Pokémon, and there is also very little interaction between Pokémon in the team. The plot and characters are not very three-dimensional, but the daily life with Sister Baicai is good. And from what I have seen so far, Kyushu official seems to be a bit fw [eating melon]

Overall, the book feels good. The advantage is that it captures the feeling of utopia better. It is very real and not very dark. The emotional line with Sirona is not too rough, and the transformation is more delicate. The elves of the protagonist and the elves of the supporting characters are depicted in detail, the characters are three-dimensional and vivid, and the aptitudes are handled best (except for Pokémon novels without aptitude settings). There are also shortcomings. It was a bit awkward in the early stage. Some of the protagonists I watched had problems with their commitment to civilian Jing'an (commoners can raise a combat-effective quasi-god in three years, do they still need your resources)? Then there is no big problem, and it is worth watching. [Like] The poisonous point is not too big, it is just the awkwardness in the early stage, which does not affect the viewing (just skip the chapter if you can't accept it). After meeting Sirona, it feels like a pure romance. There is a lot less description of the elves, which can be considered a poisonous point.

The structure is clear, the author is friendly to the people, almost everyone will reply to paragraph comments, the writing style is not bad, there is no obvious poisonous point, and the only one who bullies others is himself. Moreover, Sirona has a single female lead, which I personally think is worth watching.

The writing is very good, very friendly for a "cloud" player. It combines animation, special chapters, games and other aspects, and has a thorough understanding of elves. The heroine is Sirona. Although she did not appear in the early stage, the author's attitude is very clear and the foreshadowing has been laid. I believe that the author's writing skills will not be bad.

I haven't seen much Pokémon, but I've clicked in and exited a lot. As for this book, the main reason why I want to continue reading it is the round land shark. I have also read the small earth dragon at the beginning, but I like the rhythm of this book very much. There are brothers and friends, and the relatives and friends around me are basically very friendly. There is no so-called slap in the face for the sake of being slapped in the face, and there is no such thing as having to write funny scenes just for the sake of being funny. No nonsense, there are many elves and they are very strong, but they are not particularly heaven-defying (everyone feels that the degree of defiance is different, this book just stuck on my bottom line). But! ! ! ! There's a bit too much romance content, isn't it? ! ! Can the author cut back a bit? It's not a love channel. If it doesn't fit into the porn channel, just leave it alone! ! ! Overall, I give it five points without any reluctance! ! If you're not tired enough to die, then try to die [laughing]

I've been watching it for a few days and I've finished it. The plot is well developed and the Pokémon knowledge is very solid. I will also fill in my blind spots with my book friends. The fact that I like Sirona is in line with the character image. I hope the author can keep it from being unsatisfactory and finish it well. I will continue to follow [Blow kiss]

So far, this is the best Pokémon fanfic I have ever read. Every character in it is flesh-and-blood. The author has said before that he has invested his emotions in all the characters. That is why I think this book is so good. Whether it is the introduction of each Pokémon's skills or the sketches of each character posted by the author in the comment area, you can see the intention of this book. Moreover, single heroine and pure love are two labels that are very rare in novels in this era. The only shortcoming is that I think it is narrated by real people. But it does not affect the fact that the novel itself is very good. All in all, it is a very good book. Whether you are a novice who has never understood Pokémon or a veteran who has read a lot of fan fiction and played many games. I recommend reading this book. I also hope that the author will work hard to update this book. If you are still interested in writing novels, I hope to see a sequel or a second similar novel [Love]

Read the latest chapters in one go. It is a very good book among the Pokémon novels I have read. The protagonist is portrayed very delicately, and the other protagonists also have their own focuses. The plot is relatively compact, and it is not boring to read. The relationship between the protagonist and Baicai is also very detailed, so I highly recommend it. The author is usually very active and is also a master of Pokémon games, so the skill introduction is also very detailed, so even those who don't know much about Pokémon will not be confused.

The author's writing is very good. The early stage is similar to a group drama. Everyone in the protagonist group has character details, but the pace of the early stage of the plot is slow. The combat power is a bit broken later on (personal opinion). Maybe Shui Wutong used the strength of the special chapter, and the national character who is the protagonist on the Jiuzhou side was designed too early, and it seems that the combat power is broken. (The King of Nine Provinces has just passed by. The performance of East China Champion is not worthy of the word champion.) Here I also recommend another novel where the starting Pokémon is Bobo and the heroine is Xiaoyao. The name is in this novel, look it up yourself. (And me. When will the designed character be available? 😭😭😭😭😭😭)

I have read more than 50 chapters. It seems that there are no flaws so far. The writing is okay and the plot is also very interesting. According to the rating in the elf classification, the score is a bit low. I will continue to read [Thoughts]

The author writes so well, and there are pictures in the middle. The author is also very lively. You can see the author chatting with the readers in every picture. I think this book is one of my favorites among Pokémon novels [Learned]

It is also a very good and beautiful book. I can't say enough good things about it. Among the Pokémon books that are basically multi-female protagonists, it is also a very good single heroine. And I personally feel that the combat power does not suddenly collapse like in other books. I feel that the combat power is well controlled. But this is just a personal opinion. Of course, the most important point is that the author is quite nice and very active. The only shortcoming of the illustrations is that the author should update it quickly. It ends at a critical moment every time. Do you still have a conscience? Be conscientious!

I have just finished reading the first volume. It is really very interesting and some of the book reviews and writings are very interesting and fun. The author has also worked very hard to reply to many comments. If you like campus Pokémon and non-invincible single female protagonists, this book is very good. It is as interesting as the storyline of the protagonist Xia Yu (non-emotional plot) and as good as a book that starts with a high-five to attack the fire monkey. Come on, author.