Senior Sister Baisi Pestered Me, She Said It Was Me from the Future
白丝学姐纠缠，她说是未来的我
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 946k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High-Concept
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 16h ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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165Reads
380Chapters
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65.7kReads · all time
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Begging for the Harem, Urban Daily Writing Is Best Like Bai Yuyou's Book Begging for Harem
I want to read a book similar to "The School Beauty Is Always the Same, Because I Raised Her (Lianyu Silent)".
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Urban Imagination Category, the Content Is Quite Exciting, You Can Read 12
I want to read a book similar to "Plunder countless talents, and I will become a god in the era of all people".
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Although it's not my cup of tea, the content is bland and not that exciting. But at least the logic is complete and it is not a poisonous novel. From my perspective, it seems like I am watching the life of a naive rich second generation. The evaluation is a novel written by human beings. It is not poisonous, but it is not suitable for ambitious people. It is okay to use it to heal the soul.
Fortunately, it looks good
After watching it for a short time, I liked being a licking dog, so I thought it looked good [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration], but it's a bit poisonous to travel back in time and become a woman.
Pulls well. The character design is also well written.
I hope the relationship can be properly handled
The plot is quite good, and the setting is also very novel, but some things are described too much and are not suitable for minors, but overall it is quite interesting.
Will there be narcissus behind? [Laughs crookedly]
Looks good, don't cut it off
Well written, support it
Not bad, not bad, getting better and better
Is this still a sweet article? Or is it just like what the girl said, when you lick a dog to earn health points, it lasts until the finale. Is there anything that is a fixed target?
The story is good, but the narrative layout needs to be improved. You need to pay attention to paragraphing and white space. Don't use any polish. I can see it. Don't talk about the eggplant system. Pay attention to the writing skills of line drawings. Use accurate words and everyday sentences. Reduce the use of adverbs and adjectives. Use verbs accurately. Hide feelings in things. Pay attention to the perspective. Don't have God's perspective for a while and the protagonist's perspective for a while. Eat, drink and have sex. If it does not advance the plot, you can delete it. Looking forward to improvement!
This book is actually quite interesting, but it's a pity that its popularity is so low.
I hope it won't be interrupted. Speaking of which, there should be multiple female protagonists, and one of them should be married, right?