Girl Band: No Way, Bro!

The book is okay, okay. I personally feel that the biggest problem at the moment is the plot. The dialogue transitions are inertia. It's a bit like a fairy dialogue. It feels like an outline.

A beautiful combination of a Northeastern man and a girl band. By the way, how many times do you update a day? If it's a lot, I'll read it every day. If it's a little bit, I'll read it for a few days. Anyway, good quality books will be on my priority bookshelf.

I've seen the protagonist kill with memories, but it's rare to see him being chased and killed by memories.

Oh, there weren't many heroines before, but now there's no heroine?

Well, it's not bad. It's just that it's a bit uncomfortable to listen to the novel. I keep hearing the full name. I wonder if I can simplify it a little and make it more intimate. I don't know. I thought I was hearing the name all the time 🤦

If the author optimizes it, maybe someone will read the first few chapters.

I feel like the biggest flaw is that the word "subaru" is always written as "ang".

I finished reading this for no reason. I feel like my head is a little spiky. Is there any famous doctor who can help me? The current budget is 258.

By the way, is there a female protagonist?

Not bad, come on, change it to five stars after 100,000 words Five stars promised to the author