Classroom of the Elite: The Border Between Goodness and Foolishness

Personally, I think the protagonist is Okushida, Ichinose after the failure, who has more inner drama, and who prefers to be passive. After two awkward games, the two-dimensional hair color was brought up to talk about things, and whether there should be clubs in practical education that are not doing their jobs properly. Others are okay

Yes, the characters are very realistic, the male protagonist has a relatively positive outlook, and there is no messy system or madness. The plot is too slow and too detailed, making it a dull read. However, the structure and logic are quite tight, and those who can adapt to it will be able to read it. However, those who like refreshing and fast-paced writing may not be able to do it. And this platform is more of the latter, so it is normal that it is not popular. I hope the author can stick to it.

Although based on my reading habits on various platforms, I usually review it after reading one hundred chapters, but this is a new book after all, so I will review it first when it reaches fifty chapters. This book is generally good, at least I don't think it is much worse than the Shijiao fanfics on other paid platforms. However, there are some problems. One is that the narrative pace is too slow. I have read a lot of Shijiao fanfics, and I have never seen one that is slower than the early stage of this one. However, although the slow writing is quite delicate, I can accept it, but I just don't know how long it will take to write the book. Then, there are also some content that is a little bit toxic for a web article. The author should be clear that this is not about Riqing, and that content that is fine is very toxic if put in a web article. My suggestion is to try not to make the protagonist feel aggrieved, and even if it does, it should be reversed quickly, otherwise it will not be refreshing enough and readers will have the patience to read it. There are some spoilers below, so don't read on if you don't want to read it. The character design of the protagonist of this game reminds me of Ichinose who failed in sexual transformation. Judging from the contents of the previous dozens of chapters, the protagonist used to be a character very similar to the current Ichinose, or to Kushida. He helped people everywhere, but in the end he failed for some reason and was isolated by others. The protagonist's mentality has changed and he has become a little indifferent, but in fact he is still a good person. Although he does not actively help others like before, he will not harm others. The protagonist now seems to want to find the path he wants to take, and then wants to observe others more and act out of interest. Judging from the routes revealed in the early stages, the protagonist seems to want to take the club route, and finally use the club to compete with the student union, and even change the school structure. And I have seen this club, Wanshiwu, which means that it can reasonably fit in with the plot of other classes and even grades. I think this The setting is still very good. I have not seen similar fanfics so far. Others are either class confrontations, or end up with mixed student unions, or just pure daily love. There are very few such new ways. I am still looking forward to it. I hope the author can stick to it and write well. That's about it. After all, it's a free platform, so I don't insist on too much. I can read your book and it's pretty good here. As long as the author can maintain this level in the future, I also suggest speeding up the plot advancement. At the current advancement speed, it will last until the year of the monkey 🤦

I've seen the latest chapter, and I feel like it's a pretty good practical fan work. It's not as exaggerated and dramatic as most of the real-education fan fiction. The characteristics of this work lie in daily life, character creation and psychological description. The character traits of the characters are slowly revealed through details, and detailed psychological descriptions can also make those characters more like real people rather than characters or symbols. At the same time, gradually unfolding the school's rules and the characters' strategies through the protagonist's psychological description can advance the plot while showing the characters' thinking, and will not make people feel abrupt. The author's design of the Master Club is a wonderful idea. On the one hand, it can reasonably add appropriate original plots. On the other hand, because the main perspective of the original work is in Class D, Master Club can give the protagonist in Class B a starting point to intervene in the original plot. In terms of original plot, the little sorority of Class B and Class D is well written. The story itself is interesting and makes the characters more three-dimensional. In addition, some people are looking forward to the hidden line of Elf Wind designed by the author. It can be seen that the author has indeed spent a lot of effort on this, but to be honest, I personally feel that the first game in this dark line is quite boring. I hope the author can design a more exciting game. If the game is not interesting enough, it is better to downplay this part in the writing. Some readers may think that the pace of this work is relatively slow, but personally I still feel that this pace is more suitable for the style of this work itself. If you want to show the world of reality more realistically, if you want to describe characters with curves, and if you want to pave the way for the growth of characters, you really need these meticulous descriptions in details. Of course, in order for readers who like these to continue reading, the author needs to make this aspect of the plot interesting and logical and consistent with the characters' personalities, otherwise it will easily make readers feel like they are reading a running account. So far it feels like most local authors have done a good job in this regard. At the same time, if there were more updated content, readers might feel that the slow pace would look better, but the content of the work is more important. There may not be that many readers who have read this novel, but I do think it is a pretty good practical educational fan work. I look forward to the next plot development and hope the author can stick to it. Come on!

It's pretty good among practical fans. The protagonist doesn't deliberately pretend to be a pig to eat a tiger or blindly show off. When dealing with some things, the protagonist doesn't blindly refuse like those who deliberately act maverick, such as when other people invite you to participate in some activities. It is more realistic to consider other people's feelings and adapt to the situation, and the ability of the protagonist is quite well controlled, which can make readers feel a little bit happy without being too much. After all, there is no point in reading a cool novel. A good protagonist is a deflated protagonist. The character design is more in line with my taste. But some aspects were handled a bit poorly. For example, Himeno's part felt completely unnecessary. There was no need to specifically write out whether he could leave early in class activities, so the transaction felt a bit inexplicable. Moreover, the protagonist did not have to eat with Himeno often. After all, the two people did not know each other in the setting, and they only knew each other for one day. How good the relationship would be if they were of the same sex, but if they were of the opposite sex, it would be a bit bad. Anyway, what I am most dissatisfied with so far is that the part about Himeno feels like it was deliberately done by the author to forcefully connect the protagonist and Himeno. In short, this book still has great potential. The author should also pay attention to rest when updating and not delay his own work because of writing. Come on, author! 💪

I think this is a very good novel, but the author's narrative is too long, but it is this long description that makes me think this novel is very interesting. I read it in one go. So far in the updated part, the protagonist has not shown any overwhelming force, intelligence, etc., Which I think is very good. Other fans of the same type either crush everything with force, or use intelligence to control the other three classes. It is indeed very exciting, but after reading too much, I feel a little visual fatigue. This novel seems "alternative" and I like it very much. I will keep following this book until it is finished or discontinued. But I sincerely hope that the author can persevere and finish writing this book. Come on, I hope you don't give up

So far, it's pretty good. There are very few high-quality works, so I can't say how high they are. Others can't stand it after just a few or more than a dozen. This one doesn't have any bad points so far, and only a few minor problems won't have much impact. And there are no problems with logical descriptions, etc. Tsk, it's considered good in Tomato.

The writing is very good, but the progress is too slow. Reading it slowly makes me feel like I am really spending every day in school. I don't hate it. I can say that I like it. However, there are not many people who are willing to read it slowly. I am worried about whether the author can keep writing.

I haven't read it in half a month. Have you finished writing the first month? 😂

I've finished reading it. So far, it's pretty good. It's a fine example of practical teaching.