Demon Slayer*******

Hmm, I feel like the author of this article has a lot of personality! First is the writing session! The writing style of this article is quite exquisite, and the details are in place. It is a bit green when writing the emotional line, but the author's performance in the battle scenes and narrative scenes is not bad. It can be said that in terms of writing style, the author still has nothing to fault. The second is the plot link. In terms of plot, since the author said that this book is a fanfic that he thinks is good to read, I will not over-evaluate the details, but only make a simple analysis—— Advantages: 1. The plot structure and timeline arrangement are relatively reasonable. The plot arrangement between the protagonist and various characters in this book is appropriate, and the plot structure is complete and smooth. 2. In terms of move learning, currently only the ninth and twelfth moves use plug-in-like abilities, and the character's growth trajectory is clear (the eighth move has specific environmental factors, so it does not count) 3. In terms of character design, there are currently no major deviations. The only possible objection is Tomioka Giyu's character in the early stage. However, this problem is actually very small and can be ignored. Overall, the character design is quite reasonable. 4. Regarding the details, the author knows the relevant culture and creates the plot. It just so happens that the nine basic Japanese sword skills are within the coverage of my knowledge points. I was very surprised when I saw it. I won't list the rest of the small details one by one, but in short, there are still some theories. Disadvantages: (These shortcomings are based on my subjective wishes) 1. There is actually no need for the protagonist to be a time traveler, because the sixth sense is actually quite buggy. It is not necessary to have a half-open hang-up, and it can easily be misunderstood as wanting to maintain the original plot while also wanting a higher perspective on the entire world (but I think it is great that the author downplayed the initial memory in the later text) 2. This sixth sense was previously regarded as a ghost-finding artifact. Fortunately, the author grabbed it and wrote it back immediately. 3. I think the author's move names can be pondered over. Lei Yun is a bit too Chinese. Summary: According to the normal rating, I would give it 9 points, but this is written by the author for entertainment, so full marks are enough!

It's very interesting. At first I thought this book was going to be discontinued. Now I'm really happy to see that it can continue to be updated. And I personally feel that there are more Leihu novels than other Breathing Methods (because Leihu is really handsome), but most of them are soul-piercing or self-created breathing methods later. This is the first Leihu novel I have seen with original characters. Finally, I want to ask if it has a single female protagonist. I hope it is a single female protagonist. Good luck, author [Like] [Like] [Like]

, Is a good book. The plot is clear and clear. It can be seen that the author's writing is very good. Every move of the protagonist is not too abrupt. Generally speaking, it is a good book with great potential. I hope the author will continue to work hard and don't end it. I'm optimistic about you [Love]

This is a very good book. The author is very attentive. He has a lot of things to do, and he also works hard to update it, which is rare! I hope you can be happy and don't go to bed too late. One or two chapters a day is enough. Pay attention to rest. Come on! ! Main package!

Personally I feel very good, I hope the teacher will continue

It's very beautiful. Come on, the author is awesome.

A very good Demon Slayer fanfic. The plot is very smooth and reasonable. There is no fighting power. The protagonist uses the breath of thunder to derive moves from the seventh to the tenth type. It is very good.

Except for the slight overlap with rice pillars, this is a novel that suits my taste.

A very good book. Since I personally like pure love, I hope it will be a single female protagonist. If the author has no current goals, he can consider Li Xia or create his own.

Not bad, there is no poisonous point for now

A pretty good Demon Slayer fanfic

Come on, come on, come on

Big cheers for the author!

Demon Slayer Bunri, overall good

The author writes well

It looks good, but why was it taken off the shelves?

Very good book

Very pretty, but looks a bit like a rice pillar

Can the author have two female protagonists and accept the Butterfly Sisters?

It's very beautiful. Why was it taken off the shelves?

It looks good, but it's too short. I hope the author gets longer and longer,

A very good looking Demon Slayer story, Raihu, but it is self-made, non-toxic and edible [OK]

There is no poisonous point and the writing is good. It is an excellent fanfic.

It's so beautiful, there are no other bells and whistles, and the process of getting along with Shinobu is very sweet.

Not bad, not bad, I haven't seen such a Demon Slayer fanfic in a long time.

It's really good-looking and the protagonist is really strong. I would like more updates [like][like][like]

To put it bluntly, he is still too powerful. When will memories be made known to others? Is it the half-tengu, the jade pot, or the two siblings who are the first to be killed by the protagonist?

It's good so far, a bit like Star Pillar

Yes, it's very interesting, but I hope the author will have a new book of his own. I want to read different Demon Slayer fandoms.

Ffff, it's pretty good-looking, but the heroine is not Kanae