I Became a True Immortal in the World

Yes, it was said to be like Romance on the River, but I didn't see it. It felt like an ancient monk. It borrowed a framework and added its own things. The plot development is also good, and the main line is clear: seeking immortality, and getting acquainted with gods along the way. It's well written. It's a rare masterpiece. The platinum god will wave to you again.

There is no routine, just searching for immortals and killing evil monsters along the way, but most passers-by will not go out of their way to point it out. Those who are destined to get it will feel calm after reading this book. I have been reading it now. The enlightenment is not the enlightenment given by the system or the system text, but the enlightenment in language. The spells learned by the male protagonist rely on enlightenment in the early stage, and the angel investors are the edicts given by the Chenghuang Temple (I think, I don't remember). Overall, the writing is good. I go through each short story with a peaceful mind. I have dug a lot of holes, but I still haven't filled them in yet [face covering]. I have become an immortal by searching for immortals all the way, and I meet all those who seek immortality. It is one's own path to seek and realize, and to do what one has to do and do it. It doesn't make any sense [laughs evilly] limerick After reading some negative reviews, I blindly gave it five stars at first, and I saw the latest chapter. I decided that I still have to deduct one star. Most of the things I wrote in the beginning have feedback, which means filling in holes. The closer you get to the back, the more flaws there are, that is, more and more holes are dug, making it less comfortable to look at than the front. I thought he was writing this book in the way of a saint, until some demons I met on the journey did not choose to help the confused demons who were lost. There were no words to enlighten them, but they left with different paths and did not conspire against each other. I knew that the author was not writing about no one being perfect, and the author was not perfect, so what he wrote was naturally not perfect. Four stars are encouraging, but five stars are not enough.

It's very interesting. I read it all in one go. It's not toxic at all. It's just that some people who read fast-paced novels can't stand it. ⁰̴̷̷ ˙̮ ⁰̴̷̷ , I think it's very interesting. It's just right for me. It would be nice without a heroine

Good book, good book, written with a fairy spirit. Although it feels a little indirect, Mr. Ji, the author, well, I can feel that it also wrote some of my own understanding. In short, it has written a fairy spirit. Come on.

I read 86 chapters in one go. It's so good, it's just so refreshing. It fits my image of a worldly master. It's cool. The character description is very good. There are no idiots or brainless supporting characters. Keep it up. It will definitely be a masterpiece.

It's very good. As an old bookworm, I really feel that it is well written. However, I always feel that there are several more chapters, but the story progresses very slowly. I doubted the word count several times, but after reading it, it was indeed enough [face covering]

Why is MD so short? It's not enough to watch! It's a very good book. The protagonist is very fairy-like. He is very much like that worldly master, the same type as Lan Ke Qiyuan. I love reading it. I have to deduct two stars for you. It's too boring and cliche. I don't want to watch it [I'm about to cry]

The author's book is actually very good. It is different from other popular novels. The plot is not linear so that the protagonist becomes stronger. Instead, many side plots lead readers to understand the world of the book. The more you read, the more you read. You can't guess the subsequent plot development. It is really a breath of fresh air in Tomato. It's a pity that this kind of plot may not meet the current readers' expectations for cool articles, resulting in mediocre traffic and the author may be a little discouraged. The plot will be seriously watered down in the later period, which is really a pity. But it's still very worth seeing.

There are many articles about cultivating immortals, but this one is considered to be the best one. It is about ordinary people cultivating immortals in ancient times. There is no system and no space. It is about ordinary people traveling to ancient times to cultivate immortals. The writing style is very simple, the content does not have many ups and downs, and the whole process is calm, but it wants people to read it.

This is a monastic novel written by Golden Finger that is rare to see on Tomato. The writing is smooth and the structure is reasonable. The emotional values ​​​​and concepts are deep and worth reading carefully. I hope the author will not stop updating.

Among the eggplants, it is considered the best. I hope the author can slow down the pace appropriately and stay in one place for a longer time. Of course, a fast pace is also good, which is much better than the back and forth words. Come on

It's okay, but the fighting scenes are so rubbish. After a few moves, they stop in various shocks, and then introduce each other how powerful their spells are. After that, they continue to fight, and after a few moves, they start to be shocked again. I could write tens of thousands of words about a fight. A fight can last more than ten chapters, bullshit

I feel that this book is very well written. Unlike those books I saw that started with space, towers, tripods, etc., This novel is just right. There is no magic space or anything like that. I feel that the content is like an infusion, very slow, but very interesting😊

The writing style and story are both very good. At the beginning, the protagonist's name appeared too frequently, which caused some discomfort. It improved later, but some modifiers always appeared repeatedly in the same chapter. I hope the author can improve it.

I've read over 400 chapters, I've eaten too much, and when I have something to say, I don't explain it clearly at once. I'm always misunderstood, and then I'm told a bunch of misunderstandings, and only in the end do I say, oh, what, I'm a paper stuntman, or we're here to watch the show. I'm convinced. But the rest of the writing is still very good, so much so that if you feel uncomfortable, you can skip the pages that are full of crap.

It's very good. This kind of novel similar to "Rotten Ke Qiyuan" is rare in Tomato. It is considered a good product. It's a little wet, I have to write a few pictures of fighting skills, most of which are chatting.

It's very interesting. I clicked on it as soon as I saw the tag "Lan Ke". Because I have watched the anime commentary of "Lan Ke Qi Yuan" before, it is so good, I have always wanted to watch something similar, and I was lucky enough to find it.

This book is pretty good It is a slow-burning unit story about cultivating immortality. The text is very natural, and the story is guided by the exploration of cultivating immortality alone, so even if the protagonist has no goals, the viewer will not feel anything out of the ordinary. There are also some clips of people appearing as saints. It seems that the outline is very natural. Good luck, author. See you next time, either you will stop reading and run away, or I will read a thousand chapters at a time and watch the series year after year. It is really a hearty wait [I learned it]

Not bad, a bit like Ke Qiyuan. The protagonist is devoted to Tao. At present, it seems that he has no plans to have an affair with the heroine.

I have seen many similar movies, but without exception, the protagonist goes further and further away, becoming neither human nor immortal. This one is no exception. He is far away from human beings and not close to immortality. The more I watch, the less I can relate to it. There are not many ups and downs in the plot, and there are not many battles of wits. Perhaps this is an unavoidable common problem in this genre. I rarely comment on books, but I hope that in the subsequent content, the author can describe the protagonist more from the perspective of others to feel better. Flowing water cannot retain fallen leaves, and only a pool of clear water can reflect the blue sky. But it's difficult

The plot is pretty good and engaging. The writing is good, but the pace is a bit slow, especially since there are not many words yet. Two chapters are updated every day, and the plot only advances a little for several days.

This was never expected! It really made me find this fairy grass! Immortal? Are there really immortals in the world? ? Turn around and look back! It turns out that the immortal is around. Write well, I feel that your writing progress is a bit fast. Fill in the content of the book slowly, and you will find that it only takes one book to become a god! Just like this book! ! The writing method is really similar to the writing method of Xiaodian's author, which is very good. Come on

It looks great. There is no such thing as a heroine or a villain. The character of the protagonist is very well developed. He is kind but not holy. He is not greedy for external things and does not regard money as dirt. I feel that only people with this kind of personality can become those cultivators with real perseverance and perseverance.

A great work to relieve boredom, with no flaws and no highlights.

I think this book is a book that needs to be read slowly. If you read too many fast-paced books, you will feel uncomfortable reading this book. The plot may be a bit cliche, but the writing is good. This is a masterpiece during the book's lean period, and I can recommend it.

Good. Not a traditional genre. It is more like close to the current state of Taoism. The subject matter is novel, but the abuse has seriously affected reading. Playback at 2.5X speed doesn't work either.

It seems very good at the moment, but don't have emotional drama heroines. A good traditional cultivation of immortality is to give up small love, if you have it, you will really lose your soul, and you can love all living beings.

Good books, ordinary but extraordinary life

It's quite novel. Although there are ghosts and monsters, it is not scary. This kind of book is suitable for people who are not brave!

Beside the Immortal Character It looks good now. I hope it doesn't collapse or end badly. Come on, author [like]