[HP] Those Ten Years of Being a Rival Couple

The writing is very good. However, the heroine's character, emmmmm, feels all kinds of timid when faced with anything in reality, but she also has reckless idealism. It's obvious that I have lived for 30 years in my previous life and this life, right? But it's like an 11-year-old Muggle just walked in.

The writing is really good, and it makes people feel like they are immersed in it. After reading so many HP articles, this one really made me feel the feeling of a pure-blood family, that feeling of suffocation. In other novels, the heroine's family is basically very open-minded. Reading this book really made me feel uncomfortable. It's not even finished yet, and I don't know where it will end up. What is it, but I feel that the foreshadowing is laid. Sirius and the heroine's plan will most likely be very difficult, and they will definitely have to be separated for a while. I feel that I feel uncomfortable watching the sweetness of them together now and thinking about their future direction, but the writing is really good. If it usually makes me uncomfortable, I will never read it, but I really can't help reading this book. In fact, when I first saw a comment saying that the heroine was aggrieved and it was poorly written, I didn't want to read it. I don't know why but I couldn't help but click on it in the end. You are right, the heroine is indeed aggrieved, but this is reality. The heroine does not have the ability to resist his family. Without a system and a particularly high talent, he can directly destroy his family (bushi). On the contrary It would be unrealistic if you wrote that the heroine has been resisting and resisting. Now the heroine relies on her family after all. The heroine's image is very good and has a real psychology, including the description of Sirius or Snape, and the ambiguous atmosphere between the heroine and Sirius is really well written. I have read a lot of HP novels, basically all of them on Tomato, and this one can be ranked in the top three🥲

Some answers about this book This book is HE (Happy Ending) The total length is about 270 chapters There is a connection between grandmother and Catherine I know that many readers may not like Catherine's character very much at first. In a sense, she is not a likable character at the beginning. She needs to grow up, and I am very grateful to every reader who can see the updated part. Thank you for your extreme patience and accompanying her to grow up little by little. Salute to every companion! ❤️❤️

It's really beautiful! 😭😋🥺This Sirius is really handsome! Of course Catherine is also very handsome! The first part is about the wanton youth of a teenager, and the second part is about the last dance in trouble (maybe some settings are a bit convoluted, but it still tastes very delicious). The character creation is relatively three-dimensional and full, and you can savor it carefully. In the end, the emotional line of Catherine and Sirius is really too fragrant. Whether it is the youthfulness of the student period, the sexiness of the working stage, or the mellowness of the finale, it is particularly good. (I am just expressing my personal feelings, but the writing is not very professional. It is recommended to read the original text directly🌝)

Look good, look good! Dear author, can Lily and James not die? I want a little Harry with a happy childhood! Also, I wish all the young lovers in the book a 99! Big cheers for the author! ! !

A book that does not hide its flaws. There are some time errors and bugs in it. For example, Trelawney entered Hogwarts about a year before Harry was born. For example, it is completely impossible to have the Marauder's Map just one or two years after entering school. It is also difficult for me to believe that first-year students have such strong magic and knowledge reserves. For example, how can a Slytherin who has not completely betrayed his family eat at the Gryffindor table... Excluding these, the friendship and family aspects are well written, and the author's writing style is still very good. Well, it would be better if it is a story set in a magical world. No, there are too many bugs and it's hard to see [laughing awkwardly] I still hope they can be corrected.

I have replayed it 3 times and it is the top Cp Siris I have ever seen. This book brings each character to life, with accurate and unique psychological descriptions that I didn't expect, such as the nervousness and excitement of Catherine (the protagonist) when she gets along with each of her parents' characters after traveling through the book. The relationship between Catherine and Sirius when they were in love brought out Sirius's inner ruthlessness. The heroine of this book, Catherine, is not a conformist person. She is a talented and ambitious person (with a rebellious mentality). She wants to rebel against her family and completely get rid of the constraints, but she is trapped by family ties. She hates that her father used the family honor to let her and her sister marry other families like selling their daughters. Afterwards, she successfully collected evidence and sent the marriage partner to Azkaban. In addition, there is a big foreshadowing in the book (probably the author's personal setting). This book is really well written. I hope more readers will read it, I hope the rating will be higher, and I hope the author will get better and better and produce more high-quality works.

It looks good, but I don't know why the author is changing the text. Didn't the heroine in the first few chapters enter Sirius's next class and then suddenly become the same class? But aside from the plot, the writing is great.

It's very beautiful, the writing is also very good, and the imagination is very big. Catherine is a little... Inexplicable in the early stage, but the character description in the later stage is very interesting. The interaction between Catherine and Sirius is also very sweet. In the later stage, Catherine and Sirius don't understand each other, and the various pulls are also written in a very immersive way. The friendship line between Catherine and Snape, the family relationship line with her sister, etc. Are also very well written. The plot is really exciting. It's good to watch. It's good to watch. [Blow kiss]

Gold found on tomatoes [send heart][send heart][send heart] The writing is very good, the first part is about freedom from oppression, and the second part is a little bit sadistic. It is a coming-of-age story, and it really shows the growth of the heroine. The character of the heroine may not be likable at the beginning, but if you stick with it, you will find that she is super good. She is the kind of person who works hard, has a planned schedule, and has a tight schedule. Her pursuit of freedom is very fascinating (maybe she is attracted to Sirius because of this), and the two of them are super sweet. But why is it so miserable later on? First time commenting, please forgive me if it's not good [love][love][love]

Damn, it looks good. The relationship between the protagonist and Sirius is really good. The protagonist longs for true freedom but doesn't go overboard. He has a really good personality. I like it so much [sending my heart]

It's great to see two people watching together and not even knowing that the other one is dead. We are all good babies. My body felt warm after looking at it.

It's so well written. I had an inexplicable feeling the first time. The collision of a modern soul and a pure-blooded mind. The entanglements and contradictions of the heroine are written out naturally. The writing is also very good. Come on, I look forward to the follow-up (✧◡✧) [laugh][laugh]

Good-looking, not embarrassing! The heroine's character change is pretty good. The interaction with CP Sirius was age-appropriate, and the interactions with Snape and others were also harmonious and not embarrassing! ! ! This is really precious (it's so good that it didn't get awkward with us [face covering]

It looks good, but it feels a bit AI-like in some places.

A passage in "The Ordinary World" is very suitable for the heroine: "Who made you read so many books and know that there is a big world outside Shuangshui Village... If you have worked at sunrise and rested at sunset in this world since you were a child, then you will now hold the same ideal as all the villagers: After After a few years of hard work, marrying a satisfactory wife like your elder brother, giving birth to a fat son, and with your body, you will become a very good farmer. Unfortunately, you know too much and think too much, so you have this kind of trouble that cannot be understood by the people around you..."

A new complete logical line is created, which is well rounded. There are just a few minor bugs. For example, Trelawney started teaching at Hogwarts around 1979-1980, and her parents entered the school in 1971, so it is unlikely that she would have become one of Trelawney's students. But the flaws are not hidden, the writing is good, most of the foreshadowing has been filled in, the sense of substitution is very good, the child kept crying

The setting of this work is indeed interesting. The protagonist considers himself a time traveler, but gradually discovers in the story that he has already been deeply connected to this world. The emotional lines between the characters are very solidly written, especially the sisterhood, the friendship between Snape and Lily, and the love between Sirius, which is very impressive. In the ending, except for Lily and James who were not saved, the arrangements for the other characters were relatively satisfactory. But why didn't the protagonist tell Dumbledore the truth about the world and the Horcrux earlier? If revealed in advance, would Lily still have room for redemption? In addition, the plot preparation in the early stage is very detailed, but in the later stage, it is a bit like reading an outline, and the narrative is a bit brief. Overall, it is still a good work. The setting is innovative and the emotions are on point. It is worth watching.

Maybe it's my imagination, but it has a faint AI flavor when reading it, especially the early conversations with Snape about discussing magic. It has a strong DS flavor. This issue has also been mentioned in some comments, and I agree with it.

It's really great! The plot and characters' emotions are well written and very natural! I hope the author will not give up on this masterpiece [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

Ahhhhh, the heroine is a little girl trying to survive. Her struggle is very real and the plot is very smooth. It's awesome.

The author's works are all super beautiful! Particularly delicate #Writing Oh my God it is really beautiful The writing is very good The emotions are very delicate

I like it very much. The protagonist in the early stage is indeed a very flattering and cowardly ordinary person, but in the process of writing, she has become the person she expected. She has taken control of her own destiny. It can be said that I will not compromise. I only belong to me. In fact, I don't like the early character. But seeing the protagonist grow up and break through the cage, her destiny becomes clear, I really congratulate her.

Five-star praise! I can only say that it is really amazing. I never imagined that my sister is my grandmother while reading the book. To be honest, I was so shocked when I saw it that I was so excited in the middle of the night. The author's description is also very good... If I can use it to describe it as awesome, the first person does not have as strong a sense of separation as other novels. The characters are not OOC at all, and the ending is also a happy ending. It is the strongest one among the HP novels I have ever read [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss]

It is a very delicate and warm writing style. Catherine's growth from the inner repression of being imprisoned by her identity at the beginning to the sharp wisdom and strategizing later shows her strong core and the author's super writing style. There is also the emotional line between Sirius and Catherine, which is the budding relationship between adolescent boys and girls. It is really super sweet. I hope the author keeps writing! A very, very good article😭🙌

The writing is okay, and it's pretty good-looking, but it's really OOC and has a lot of private settings. If you're not a fan of the original work, you can check it out.

The image of the heroine is well created. It is not parallel, but multi-faceted and complex. Those who cannot understand it are because they have never put themselves in her shoes and have only high-level evaluations. I haven't seen such an impressive book in a long time. A good book can stir the reader's emotions and is very meaningful. I sincerely hope his rating will improve.

The character of the heroine is really interesting to me. I'm not very good at writing long reviews. I can only say that the author's writing is really good. You can judge it for yourself.

This is a seriously underestimated novel. I have been reading the novel for three or four years. The writing style of this novel is very slow, but it is very interesting. If you like to read the kind of water that flows slowly, you can read it. It gives people a very sour and sweet feeling. [Stunned]

CP is written by Sirius, it's very sweet and the writing is super good.