Fox Demon *********

Yes, the protagonist has a very good character. He has a sense of instant vision that I have seen Li Changsheng in Shaobai, and he writes the style of a reincarnated immortal. The pace of the article is well controlled, the speed of events is moderate, and it is very comfortable to read. In addition, I kicked the knife, and now the whole Dongfang family, I am worried that Dongfang Huaizhu's ending has not been changed, because I saw Wang Quanzui in Wang Quan's family, but did not see Dongfang Huaizhu's appearance, which is sad. Well, as for the protagonist, I prefer that the author continue to write about the beauty of immortals wandering around in the world. The protagonist is already invincible or semi-invincible. In fact, the emotional line does not need to be like the growth-type emotional line next door, which is tense and heavy. Just wandering around in the world, traveling around the mainland, seeing some things and being moved by my heart, bringing out that elegance and style. But the emotional line is difficult to write. After all, the author said there will be a female protagonist, so come on, author. The author said that he does not want to split the official roles, so the only female leads that can be decided at present are Cui Yuling, Tu Shan Ya Ya, Tu Shan Rong Rong, and the six-eared macaque. Tushan Yaya officially chose the third young master, but the third young master didn't catch her after all, right? What's more, 500 years ago, I probably didn't even have the intention to pursue Tushan Yaya. It seems that the latest comic chapter of Tushan Rongrong is also given, but I can't see anything, there is an egg! There is a standing painting, but there is no standing painting, there is a name but no name, there is a plot but no plot, there is no difference between this and nothing! ! ! Anyway, for someone like me who has been into the fox demon matchmaker for a short time, I don't really recognize her! The six-eared macaque and the jade jade spirit, these two supporting characters are not a problem to write, since they don't have official roles anyway. Hey, it seems that I also missed a female character who has no official supporting role. Could it be Wang Quan Zui? No way? No way? No way? Well, forget it, the pace of the articles in this book is very good, so go for it, author!

It's about comments and comments, readers [almost crying]

I'll give it four stars first, because this is the first time I've seen someone dare to write about Jianlai x Kitsune. I don't expect the author to be as in-depth as Jianlai. I just hope that the plot and logic are consistent. After all, if it's well written, it will be the first fanfic of Kitsune in the ages. If it's not well written, it will be a castle in the air. See you later [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The world of fox demons is about to be destroyed. The way of heaven is lacking, and it is impossible to become an immortal. It is no match for the sword. Mortals, no matter how advanced their cultivation is, may die in their 50s just like ordinary people. Their cultivation cannot increase their life span. With the protagonist's level and experience, it is impossible for him to be an emotionally weak party. It is impossible to fall in love with someone. Don't lower your level for the sake of plot advancement. Then this novel will be useless. Just read Sword to Specialize in One Eye and Ten Elements. Take your time. And compared to Tushan Yaya, Tushan Rongrong is actually more suitable [laughing awkwardly]. The protagonist is a Confucian. You have to read some Confucian thoughts and so on to control your sexuality. Ge, and the protagonist is a person whose natal character is love. His understanding of love cannot be so superficial, right →_→, let alone love at first sight, it is love at first sight. If you fall in love in a daze, let alone the Tao, it will not cooperate with the Tao at all. The reason why it stopped at the 13th realm may be part of the reason, and Tushan Yaya is just a child at this time. Is this a Confucian and Taoist gentleman? Is this an animal? Although it looks like it, you can't just start like this. I personally think that the normal situation should be for two people to be together. Over time, they gradually understand the word "love". It cannot be all because of the emotional and severe gap that makes it possible to grow up. This should be the abnormal and twisted emotion. Some of the growth is due to the gradual understanding of the word "love". , Grew up naturally. At that time, Tu Shan Yaya should have gradually fallen in love with the protagonist, and then the protagonist also accepted Tu Shan Yaya in the process, and then gradually understood the word love, and finally merged into the 14th realm. There is no need to pursue realms for strength, because 13th realm is already invincible, and 14th realm can be regarded as the end, already. At this time, I have to mention the third young master of the Tang family. He believes that frustrated love is love, which tortured our Huo Yuhao miserably, so the author has a good control over the character. This subject matter is actually very novel, but don't worry, it will easily collapse if you get anxious, 😊 Come on!

What would you say about the protagonist's character? It fits Jianlai very well, but I feel that his actions are completely different from what he said. He can participate in big things but not interfere in small things? , When I was writing about the wolf demon, I felt that the male protagonist said not to worry about it, just watch the show, but he took action again. It was a very awkward character setting. Anyway, I still prefer the male protagonist's personality, and then there are many restrictions, such as not being able to kill people, etc. Watch it from an alternative perspective, Tu Shan

It's still good to watch, author, please keep updating. I'll keep reading for a while [laughing]

It's pretty good, but there are too few. People watch it every four updates a day [shy]

If you can score 7 points, you are considered to have performed exceptionally well. You can't calm down the fox demon. You resurrected people who should have died. What's the point of resurrecting people over and over again? I can basically think of what you want to write next after this line, so it's so rigid (￣ェ￣;)

The content is what I want, but the word count is not 🤓

I have a hunch that this book will definitely get a rating of 9.0 Or above in the future as long as the author keeps updating [laughing]

Very nice to look at.

Not bad, good [learned]

It's beautiful, but I can't get enough of it. Come on, author.

Come on, come on, come on, come on

It's okay so far

Resurrected my martial arts heart in Tomato

Needless to say, this is the most interesting fox demon fanfic I have ever read. I hope the author will work harder and stick to it.

Very peaceful(^.^)

It's a good fanfic, but it's a bit sparse. I've already caught up on the latest chapter.

It looks good and is expected to be the front-line fox demon in Tomato (to be honest, I can consider it as the first one, because the others are just harems to increase combat power or just ruin the plot)

How should I put it, whether it is a sword or a fox demon, it is okay to integrate it with "emotion", but it is not easy to integrate. If one is not good, it will collapse. And what I am most worried about is that the author suddenly has no way to start as he writes. Even if the outline and other things are laid out, he will still be confused when he actually starts writing.

The chapters that have appeared so far are well written in the early stage, but I feel that they are not very good in the middle and late stages.

It looks okay

Wu Mu writes well, five stars are indispensable. Come on