The Dead House Also Needs to Awaken, and the Counterattack Begins

I'm still digging for treasure books. This one has a good beginning, with a very childish style of writing, but I don't hate it. The psychological description of teenagers is very good, but it is a bit childish for today's precocious children. It may be that I have read too many dark books, and there are also things like not being able to get married with Qingmei, and the general data of slow-burning books are not very good nowadays. I hope the author will persevere and it is best to write more than 1,000 chapters [laughs]

After reading it, I feel like I have seen the author's real life. I want to ask if there is disharmony in the family and unhappiness with childhood sweethearts. Is it an illusion that his books often write about childhood sweethearts and urban novels about parents have few plots? Five-star praise, best wishes and cheers.

The plot is good, but the updates and pace are slow, but the author said it is slow and can be watched as a daily life in the city or as a martial arts drama. I want to know if Lu Lin still likes Mai Zhizhi, if she is the heroine, and if the book has a heroine. I hope it will be Zhou Ziyi, not a harem.

It is a really good book. I can clearly feel that the author is really expressing his most ideal and most wanted story. The early stage is a bit too referenced to his own experience, but it is also a small feature. The early and middle stages (before chapter 400) are the best part of the writing. From the moment when the two beauties of the principal who could not hide the public awakening were killed and the awakening ended, I felt that there was a big and big sense of tearing. It was obvious that the author's thinking was a little messed up. Then the hypnotist said that Lu Lin and Jiang Zimo entered the time rift and returned to 2007 to change their ten-year life path. Was this a dream created by him using his final ability? ? (I don't know if it's because I read it too fast or something. I feel the tearing feeling is too strong.) Then Lu Lin No. 2 Explained that [Gu Yuan] Barabara's post-stage plots are a bit too messy. The author didn't handle these plots well. But it's the first time for the author to write this kind of article. There is still room for trial and error in everything. I wish the author can write better and better stories that he wants to express in his heart. Come on, glorious.

The content is very interesting, I feel it can be rated as 9.5. It should be the title of the book that prevents many people from coming in to understand it. The young boy has a lot of ups and downs from falling in love to entering the world of awakened people. The author's writing is very good, and the confusion of the boy is very realistic. I wish the author a great success in this book [Like]

I recommend the author to read Clow's Magic (I didn't say anything about it after you've read it), it may be able to help you find inspiration. The setting of this book always feels not very strict, and the distribution of pen and ink is not very good. You need to pay attention to where you should describe more and where you should explain it briefly. There is also a common problem with many books, emotional problems, and the sensationalism is sometimes a bit awkward, maybe because the emotional foreshadowing is not enough. Finally, when it comes to the heroine, the author has to know it well. It is best to have a higher distinction between the heroine and the heroine. Come on, there is a lot of room for improvement. Regardless of whether you insist on it or not, I hope you will be happy.

It's still okay. The writing style is relatively immature, with a very special sense of youth. It's a semi-smooth story. The protagonist is not very clever. The shortcoming is that various girls fall in love with the male protagonist inexplicably. Some of the connections are not very good. I feel a little uncomfortable when I read it. I don't know how to describe this feeling. I would like to encourage the author for my own sake. I hope the author will keep up the good work.

The beginning of this novel is really very similar to mine [laughs], the same salty life, the same love of heroic dreams, the protagonist's previous character moved me [laughs] [like], don't say anything else, my brother's temperament

Finally saw the latest chapter. First give me a five-star review. The main reason is that the author is very sincere and will reply to the comments seriously. Tell me what you think after watching it. Read nearly 500 chapters. In fact, what I like the most is the first few dozen chapters, where Lu Chen goes from being an ordinary person to awakening and then gradually becomes outstanding. I read other reviews that there are hints of the Dragon Clan, and I do feel that way. But I feel like the author is a little bad at describing emotional scenes. Especially from the old timeline to the revised timeline, I suddenly became a different person. It is also an experience of more than ten years. The new timeline suddenly eliminated the self in the old timeline. There is a feeling that I can't wait to let go of my past self, which was not good. Of course this is how I feel as a reader. In fact, I prefer that if the timeline was not corrected, Lu Chen did not change his life path in the past, but faced his own heart and gradually became stronger, instead of interfering with the timeline, merging the old and the new, and completely becoming a different person. The sense of fragmentation is too strong. The further you go to the back, combined with the front view, the more regretful it becomes. I would like to thank the author for his persistence in writing, and I hope he can write better and better.

The writing is very good. I feel that I have written my own style under similar content to Jiangnan Dragon Clan. It makes people feel more like an ordinary person than Jiangnan's downfall. My expression may not be good, but in my eyes, you are better than Jiangnan! Come on and write it down! Never be a eunuch!

The plot of this novel is ups and downs and exciting, and the characters are vivid and three-dimensional, full of personality. The writing is beautiful, delicate, and contagious, making people immersed in it. The reading experience is great and highly recommended.

Can't stop from the beginning! The rhythm is tight and the suspense is high. Every chapter makes people want to put it down. The author's narrative skills are profound, with both a grand worldview and delicate emotional descriptions. It can be called the most impressive novel in recent times!

In any case, this book caught my appetite right from the beginning. It is the most realistic book among all the books I have read. It truly shows a junior high school boy's first love, love, and vision for the future. I dare say that almost all boys grew up at this stage from elementary school to junior high school. Duan Duan has a girl he likes, and then he will be frightened and crazy about the other person's various words and actions. The beginning of this book perfectly explains what it means to be a teenager. No matter what the rest of this book is, I will read it completely.

The subject matter is quite good, but it may be the first time for the author to write a book. It feels a little different from those old books, but it is still very interesting. I hope the author can work harder and not stop updating [laughs][laughs][laughs][laughs]

The writing is good and the plot is quite exciting. It's worth listening to.

I haven't read much, but this book deserves a rating of 9 or above. I read the comments and some said it looks like Dragon Clan. I don't know why people always say it does. It's just that Dragon Clan is very popular, so I just say it looks like it when I see someone similar. It's really annoying, okay [face covering]

Good reviews at the beginning, relatively close to reality After reading two hundred chapters, I still don't have a clear definition of the protagonist's character. You have to say that the protagonist is a weak child at the beginning. He has fantasies about all the behaviors of the girl he has a crush on and expectations unique to that age. The writing of the first ten chapters is really okay. However, the sudden change of personality after awakening is very blunt and there is no process of connection. So far, my biggest impression of the protagonist is that he is calm, calm, gentle and rational no matter what the situation. I don't know how to describe this feeling of tearing. Another thing is that the protagonist should know what it's like to have a crush on someone and like someone. As a result, he is oblivious to the opposite sex around him but doesn't notice it. It can be said that even if he is aware of it, there is not much psychological description. The character portrayal is a bit lacking. But I still like this kind of novel about a child growing up slowly. It's just... Come on, author. See you in your next book.

The writing is very good, the author is great, but the emotional line is a bit inexplicable. In fact, I think two heroines are not as good as multiple heroines. As long as they are not studded, it is still good. After all, many female supporting characters and protagonists have a lot of descriptions [face covering] It seems that this is the only problem at the moment. The plot reasoning and action description are both in place. Come on, come on [Sending Hearts]

It gets more exciting as you go to the back, and it gets better and better.

The writing is relatively good, and the author is very persuasive. If you have any suggestions, feel free to ask directly.

Wonderful, great book recommended to read!

A wonderful book, worthy of five stars!

It's so beautiful, I can't stop watching it! Congratulations!

The author's writing is first-rate and the story is wonderful

A very interesting book with interlocking storylines

The characters are described in detail and each has its own characteristics.

It's almost time to watch the latest one. The writing is pretty good and the subject matter is novel, but there is always a sense of fragmentation. The timeline is very blurry and there are few connections between the various story lines.

It looks good. It's not brainless in the early stage and very real. It's very enjoyable in the later stage.

The rare top-notch writing is extremely detailed, especially the characterization of the characters, which is down to earth. The plot becomes more and more interesting the more you read it, and the more you read it, the more interesting it becomes.

After only reading the first half, I felt that the writing was very good. It really gave me the feeling of being a teenager in junior high school. I must give it five stars. There are not many good works that can make me feel good.