Lost City: the Ring of Dislocation

The author is very good-looking and will immediately become a loyal reader of Beasts and Beasts. He grasps the details very well. But there are too few chapters, and one chapter a day would be too inefficient. You can start with three or four updates at first. We will polish the details when the number of people increases. After all, it is difficult for some people to be interested in reading more than 20 chapters. There are so many Pomodoro books and there is a lot of choice. As a new book, I think it is most important to ensure the number of chapters first. Come on, author! Believe in you[Like]

When I first read the synopsis, I thought it was about the 7th edition of Alien Beasts fanfic, but actually after reading this type of fic, the novelty is definitely less, and I have already mastered the plot. The only novelty that I can read in the fic is the daily novelty, but this is about people from the 7th edition traveling back in time. In the first session, the story and background were all set by the author himself, and the plots were all novel. And I have basically read all the alien beast fanfics. Some of them were those who traveled to the seventh session to make changes, some were for Gao Yang's cheat rebirth, and there were also the first series of the first series of the first generation of gods. Story, but this is the first time I have seen the author's Second Generation of Gods, and the organization among the awakened ones is also quite interesting. After all, these several sessions are actually equivalent to some kind of parallel time and space, and the same things will definitely appear. The ten members of the Star Gathering Society who appear in this book The correspondence between the two constellations and the twelve zodiac signs is actually natural in a sense [laughs crookedly] However, in the first edition, the awakened ones took the lead, so most of what appeared was the struggle between the awakened ones. I think the writing method of interweaving daily life with the main line is more suitable for an article like Alien Beasts. Then here are some of my personal views on the main line of this book: I think the main plot of this book is just the story of the protagonist becoming stronger, the awakened people fighting, fighting against the cursed abyss, and fighting against the greedy snakes. Then I think we can enrich the content of the story from these aspects. For example, as a way for the protagonist to become stronger, I think the next talent that can be learned can be the story of time and space ghost, traveling to other worlds and becoming stronger. This can avoid the runes being occupied by other awakening organizations, resulting in the problem of talents not being able to level up. Borrowing later runes, and the first thing the protagonist obtains is not the time and space rune, this can also add time and space for the protagonist to travel through. Add strength, after all, he is the master, add time ghost, add the first-generation god heir, add the first term, add Gaoyang system, add luck, and the protagonist with multiple buff stacks, why is it unreasonable to be able to travel through time? [Sneaky laugh] And this can also allow other parties to participate, instead of the original participation rate for solving the problem of Snake is 80% for the first term, 20% for the seventh term, and 0% for the others. Then this is a bit long, so I'll end it. If you have other ideas, I will put them forward and give you some suggestions [Thinking] Very good book, one of the few alien fanfics on Tomato

Come on, author [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] Brother Kai just needs more shots, everything else is fine

It looks okay, I've already watched the second part, I hope the author's fighting power will not collapse in the follow-up, and the plot will not collapse [Love][Love][Love]

Has the author forgotten tradition? Kill one person in ten chapters, and leave no one alive in a thousand chapters.

Very interesting and creative

Hurry up and reunite Gao Yang and Qing Ling [crying]

It's very interesting and the logic is clear. I only recommend this book and another book about Strange Beasts, which has a binding ending rewriting system.

Great viewing, it satisfied what I wanted to watch for the first time

Very nice, very nice

Very good. Take a look at the author's careful analysis.

After reading it for a while, I feel pretty good. [Like] Keep up the good work, author!

It's so good, I'll just watch it as the sequel [Blow Kiss]

It's beautiful, but I don't know why it's so painful to watch [currently in progress]

As long as it doesn't use a knife, it's better than the original.

Hope to see Gao Yang soon

The best Alien Beasts sequel ever written

Good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking

Author of Bie Dao Protagonist Group [smile]

It's a pity that the author stopped updating