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I almost watched the article "Little Butterfly" become richer little by little. Baby even overturned the 50,000-word text. Baby, you persisted. I applaud you! Although you encountered troughs in the middle, you persisted and wrote better and better. Your writing style is not filled with words, it is gorgeous and concise, and it is rare to be able to express your thoughts to readers! Whether it is conception or character creation, baby, your writing is a breath of fresh air in the HP series. My favorite theme of your article is not love for the sake of pleasure. It is really not easy to shape TR well. His life experience, psychology, and experiences all determine that this character is complex and difficult to figure out. It can be said that he is a very easy OOC character in HP's second creation. But baby, try to understand his heart and carefully design many actions, manners, and tones for him, as well as the content of his speech. I can feel his shrewd leadership. In my heart, Tom is very consistent with the original work. Elizabeth Liz can be said to be my favorite heroine. I watched her grow up little by little and saw her future choices in advance. Whether it was about her and her mother, her and Dross, her and Riddle, and more importantly, about herself. Baby, you have shaped her so well. I am looking forward to the day when Elizabeth truly realizes who is the anchor of her existence. Liz and Tom, their relationship had twists and turns, there were temptations, doubts, fears and timidity. But they did not let go of each other, but cared more and more about each other. So when Tom finally made that choice, I thought it was very natural and reasonable. I hope you get better and better! There are more and more readers! I will also accompany you to write it!

One of my favorite books, bar none. The key to the narrative style and restoration of the original characters is that the content of Tom's words should not be too consistent with his character. The most important thing to say is that the magical world of pictures is created with a big pen. There is also the tension in the interaction between the male and female protagonists. My favorite part is that the tension is very, very, very strong. They are talking and really understanding each other.

Watched it several times! ! Watch it when you have time! ! ! The author writes very well! ! ! Tang Heli's pulling is simply amazing, fine grain, absolutely fine grain! I see that the author is busy with work, and I hope he has a happy life! ! Hope to see this novel finished! ! Hhhh I went to read the original novel first, and I was so overwhelmed by the movie that I started reading the fanfic.

The writing is very, very good [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] The psychological portrayal of each person and the diverse aspects of human nature are well written! Especially the constant emotional pull between Tom and Elizabeth, from the initial questioning of motives, the agreement of expectations, the collision of thoughts, the subconscious movements of the body, the tentative acceptance, to the acceptance that should be 'fused' in the end is really great! ! ! So you must keep writing [love] [please update]

The teacher writes very clearly and speaks very fluently. And the content is well integrated with each other. There is a natural feeling that makes you very immersed in this story! The most important thing is this Tom, it is too Tom. I suspect that the author had to eat several Toms to write such a Tom, which is very close to the character of the original work. The pull between the heroine and Tom is really fun, and not only Paper and Tom, but also the addition of other characters makes the content of the article more lively and interesting, and it is not monotonous. This is not one, only growth-oriented, only love-oriented. It is obvious that the teacher has a very thorough understanding of human nature. He has put a lot of his own thinking into it, so he can write such an article.

I feel like it should be written in a review of the entire book🥹 The dual-line psychological description shows the respective states of Elizabeth and Tom very well. Elizabeth's reluctance after awakening her memory made her actively choose to associate with the extraordinary and dangerous. Tom's life trajectory also experienced a butterfly effect due to Elizabeth's arrival (try to ask questions) The writing is so delicate that when you see the description, your mind can't help but picture it. The plot is compact and detailed, and each plot is accompanied by a psychological change. It can be said that the detailed analysis of the psychology really makes people intuitively see Tom's decline step by step (a real masterpiece🥹) Also, I really like Elizabeth (I almost called her Liz [laughing and crying]). She is really a very good little girl🥹

The charm of Tom is vividly brought to life. His appearance, speech, movements and demeanor are all his tools. It's so attractive. Elizabeth is the most charming character. She has strong initiative. I like her relationship with other male characters. The sunshine puppy Weasley and the self-possessed and dignified Richter are also delicious. ૧(●´৺`●)૭The most delicious character is her and Tom.

I hope the male and female protagonists will definitely join in! ! !

Da Da's emotions are really delicately depicted, and Liz is so charming! ! !

I highly recommend a very good book, but I have always been curious about why, after Liz came back, the Elivers did not admit that she was their daughter? [What]

The author writes very well! ! ! I hope the author will not stop updating! (Please woo woo woo)

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