Naruto: I'm Really Not a Younger Brother

I can only say that as a reader who has read Boruto, what you wrote is really good. First of all, many settings refer to the latest progress of Boruto comics, and the settings are very reasonable. Secondly, the writing style is also good. Sometimes it is humorous, and sometimes it can vividly describe the character of the character. For example, the description of Naruto in Chapter 3 first uses various techniques to describe Naruto's loneliness, and then continues to deepen this concept. Finally, the pen turns and highlights Naruto's natural optimism and kindness, so that the article does not simply fall into criticizing the villagers of Konoha. I give it 8.4 Out of 10 points because there are 1.6

When I saw the introduction to this book, I thought that the complex bond between the protagonist Uzumaki Menma and Naruto should be explosive, and it turned out to be true at first glance. According to the timeline, the story of the bond between the two people is currently divided into the first meeting on the street, the recognition of brothers, the warm little home, the love story of ramen noodles, the back mountain training, etc. The warm brotherly love is vividly portrayed. (Naruto is adorable!) At the same time, it cleverly combines the deep emotions of Shippuden and the grand world view of Boruto. Finally, the author is very witty and full of laughs. There may be a few hiccups, but overall it's not a big deal. Here we look forward to the follow-up content [making faces]

This Naruto fanfic is different from the cookie-cutter systematic writing of many Naruto fanfics nowadays. It makes me feel a little refreshed, as if I have returned to the time when I first saw high-quality Naruto writing ten years ago. Uzumaki Menma and Naruto have a strong sense of brotherly bond, especially the head-touching that vividly demonstrates the gentle brother-control attribute. (If the Naruto player doesn't come out, Jiraiya will guarantee) The author cleverly combines the passion of Shippuden with the settings of Boruto, such as Almighty and Otsutsuki Shibaju, and the training and life scenes are naturally connected. The author is very down-to-earth and has no manuscripts. The jokes he uses are very humorous and make people smile. Basically, I don't see any big problems, or the shortcomings are not hidden. I hope the author will continue to polish his writing and plot [laughing]

As a new Naruto book, the setting is generally very novel. The protagonist Uzumaki Menma is Naruto's older brother, has the Yin Nine Tails, is bound to a system, and is not clear with the Otsutsuki clan. Let's talk about the pros: The characterization is good. Naruto is innocent and sunny, with gentle face and gentle control. Kakashi, the Third Hokage, etc. Also don't engage in conspiracy theories. The author moderately intersperses jokes (such as Hajitong) and emojis, and it can be seen that he likes to interact with readers. Finally, my biggest points for being a fan of original works are: following the comics and quoting formula books such as "The Book of Lin". The shortcoming is that the chapter on chakra theory contains too much information, which affects the fluency of reading. Also, the system's "omnipotent" memory modification is a bit abrupt. This book respects the original work, but also adds new settings. It is a new book with great potential. If the rhythm and detail processing can be optimized, it is expected to reach a score of 9 or above. I look forward to subsequent updates.

See the latest chapter (148 chapters) at once. Because I saw that the author put the book in a female fanfic, I just briefly mentioned that those who came here for CP can leave, because this is essentially a male novel. Menma's darkening can be said to be beyond my expectation, because it has been foreshadowing in the early stage not to treat Naruto like Itachi treated Sasuke, but to treat Naruto well. As a result, I basically couldn't understand Menma's darkening in the later period (not very late), because I originally read it with the expectation that Menma could properly handle the messy entanglements in Naruto without turning dark. As a result, I came with this purpose and felt extremely disappointed. In the end, I still couldn't escape the darkening of the main character in the popular Naruto fanfiction. I think this may be the reason why this book is not popular. Of course, apart from being severely beaten and disappointed when I was trying to get along with Menma and Naruto, this book was well written, especially the original work and anime were carefully studied, which made it really comfortable to read. (The pace of some content is a bit slow. I couldn't bear to read the exam chapter. For other chapters, I basically read even the smallest number of words.) Therefore, those who can accept the knife and want to read Naruto fan fiction can definitely enter the article (I originally wanted to give it 3 stars, but considering that there are many subjective factors, I will give it 4 stars. After all, I probably won't pursue it again in a short time. When the two brothers reconcile (estimated to be 50~100 chapters), I will come back to read it) That's all. Mainly because it made me uncomfortable watching it. It's completely subjective. The author should keep up the good work, it's still good-looking. I hope you can write about the reconciliation of the two brothers soon (by the way, is there any possibility of reconciliation? No, I really can't think of any way to reconcile without falling apart). Let's see how the author performs. Come on.

That's good, but how can you keep voting while changing Cp? ! The most primitive mianming is the best. Hey [petrified][petrified][petrified][petrified]

Boss, I've always wanted to read an article about Menma and Naruto being brothers, and my dream came true today😭😭😭It's so well written that I will always follow you [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

80% Are dual male protagonists. Great, there are two male protagonists, we are finally saved.

It's great~ Please come and have some noodles.

Ahhhh! Is it Mianming or Mingmian? Easy or hassle-free? This is very important to me, and I have opposed several books on QAQ. I hope it belongs to Narumian. So delicious! Come on, big(*ᵒ̶̶̷̀ω˂̶́∗)੭₎₎̊₊♡

I feel it is very well written. This is the first time I've seen the integration of Boruto's settings into it quite perfectly. And there are really very few fan fictions where the protagonist is a brother-in-law. I love my brother. 😍

Author, do you know? Do you call this microblading? What a joke, my whole body is dying from this food, when can I eat it? Please, author, don't let me see Naruto's broken state again. I really want to die if I see it again [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

Orthopedics is a pain in the ass

It looks good and the timeline is right too

It's so sweet and sweet that I don't know what the world is. [Laughing]

It's okay. I didn't know who the main cp was until I saw 75. In the previous words, there were Naruma, Narusa, and Naruhina, and finally I decided on Naruhina. I feel that the author mostly wanted to write so much, but I still prefer more clear words, so this star is deducted for my preference😓. The author's writing is okay, but it feels more daily. Although the protagonist's strength is quite strong according to the panel, but I personally feel that it is a slow-burning type.

Looks good, please leave a comment🤓

Feeling very good now

Without him, the author is really active

If you like Brother Kong, I highly recommend this book. It's very good.

I really miss Menma and Naruto, I hope it's Naruto [sending my heart]

The two protagonist brothers can be written more intimately, with more kisses and hugs [shy][shy][shy]

I'm short of words and can't speak it, so I just sum it up! (Go and show them to me!) [Smile](ノ｀⊿´)ノ

It is very consistent with my image of brother-controlling brother-controlling. It is my first time to write a book review. It is not well written and the author is also very rigorous. Come on [currently working on the manuscript][eating melon]

Logic It's quite clear. It's a very good Naruto novel I've read.

It's just very, very good [crying]

No! ! I hope it won't be blocked [crying]

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good

The first character is well written

Come on! Author, I am optimistic about you [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]