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What would it be like if there really were magical girls in this world?
Facing this absurd and incomprehensible world, Xiao, a soul from another world, wants to get everything on track.
Magic is a cancer in this world and must be eradicated! After learning the truth about the world, he made such a decision.
Whether they are magical girls or various weirdos, they are all the targets he wants to eliminate.
"Who are you! Why do you do this?" Asked a magical girl.
"You can call me Gunara, the God of Darkness."
Reader comments
A coroner travels to a different world where the police are approaching, an unemployed magical girl protects the world, criminals are on the loose, criminal investigation and three treasures are almost gone, and all friends are like enemies but not friends [laughter] The battle descriptions are really detailed and comparable to the autopsy report of a forensic doctor, but because the author seems to be writing the climax (bushi) [laughter] Almost every battle description is accurate to the point of view. It is so detailed that many people feel that it is as boring as reading a report. Of course, I don't think that is it [laughter] Some details are very good, but too detailed and a bit dry, and the appearance of each magical girl is quite good. It feels like a 9-point magical girl-themed novel [laughing] It can be said that it has the appearance of fairy grass, but it is a little bit worse. The climax is too little or too bland. After all, magical girls, the climax must be on par with Chuunibyou going crazy (bushi) [laughing] Of course, it can be more bland and can be used as a daily read [laughing]
In summary, the food and grass are not enough for the grass jelly. Of course, I feel like grass jelly [laughs crookedly]
The description is very detailed, there is careful thinking and logic, and the writing style is also good. I am undoubtedly a newcomer, but for readers like me, detailed description is equivalent to complicated copywriting, which will be very boring to read. The results are good and bad. However, just tens of thousands of words of updates per day are beyond the reach of people. I worship the boss [smile]
This book is good. The author is professional about the human body and diet. The terminology is dazzling.
The plot is quite good. Alas, we have more than a thousand points from beginning to end.
To summarize the plot of this book:
A young man came to the Magical Girl Headquarters. He was a forensic doctor with a poor background. He had been a soldier (also a forensic doctor?) And worked.
He can fight every day and looks very handsome [shy]
Nine updates a day? ! ? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The story itself is also good, and the update speed is a bit too fast. Once you update a day, your shortcomings will be magnified infinitely. If you update nine times a day, you will be a god.
Although Duogeng is very awesome, after watching your extras, I really feel that my friend will not die suddenly, right? Your update speed today is ridiculous. It's the first time I've seen an author who works so hard.
The current impression is very good, because I prefer the protagonist San Guanzheng. After all, I am reading a novel, so I can ignore some minor problems. That is, the combat performance is not good.
I just saw it. How can you write more than 120 pictures in less than 20 days?
It is worth reading, but the front part needs to be changed, which gives people an uncomfortable feeling. There are too many daily routines, and it is too slow to enter the main line (I feel that the main line is after 100 pictures). Overall it is very good. I hope the author will stick to it and slow down the update to give myself a comfortable writing time and better conceive the plot.
It's a great book beyond my expectations. The protagonist's ability to pretend is beyond my imagination. He has such a strong sense of belief that the protagonist doesn't even laugh when he talks about the setting.
In addition, this battle description is from a really novel angle. I am used to seeing blows with various pretense and various words. This is the first time I see a battle with a lot of proper nouns. Forensic doctor, you win.
In the second volume, I feel that the author has become obsessed with his own art and cannot extricate himself. Some plots that I personally feel do not need to be described in a large way take up a lot of chapters. In addition, there is really no need to use so many digits. What kind of digit fanatic is this? Hey, tentatively five stars, I will wait and see (.
It's rare to find someone who looks better, and he's also a coroner. Come on, author, update [smile]
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The writing is smooth and natural, excellent and elegant
The protagonist has upright views and intelligence.
The other characters are all written with flesh and blood.
Recommended to watch, there is the appearance of fairy grass
As far as the first volume I have read so far, the author's thinking is very clear. The protagonist gave me the feeling of being very serious at the beginning, but he also felt a little funny when looking at it later. There is a long section in the middle that describes the emotions of the main characters. I know it is used to shape the characters, but it is really long [crying]. (Ps: I feel so small and pitiful)
There are not many new ones now, but they are worth pursuing. I will always read this book [angry]
Biological knowledge entered my brain in a despicable way, and then ran out of my mind... (Ps: sometimes writing too detailed can make the battle feel like a turn-based system)
It's quite beautiful, but unfortunately there aren't many people there. Also, the author, you update very quickly. Other authors write chapters of about 1,000 to 2,000 words a day.
The author has real knowledge, even the details are so detailed
What's worse, it starts from the left ventricle. Fresh arterial blood is squeezed out from the left ventricle through the systemic arteries, and passes through the body's tissues and tissues to complete oxygen and carbon dioxide... Absorbing oxygen and expelling carbon dioxide, and the venous blood becomes arterial blood; and then flows back to the left atrium through the pulmonary veins.
Sometimes I use too much force when describing, which is a common problem, but it is indeed a very interesting attempt. After all, it has been 25 years, and who hasn't used AI to guide it? (
It's very interesting. Although I haven't played much of the magical girl series, the setting of the alien god is quite good.
Everything else is fine, but this Chi is not very acceptable.
Good book, good book, very beautiful
Very good, I like to see this kind of thing
D The author is great, is it a single heroine or a harem?
It's quite rare to write well without writing collapse in the early stage.
It smells like a report.
Hee hee hee, how honorable, give me a lot of [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart]
So beautiful, I can't stop
I want to watch the battle. It's fun.
Very good, pretty good
Too productive (*¯¯*)
I like it so much 😋❤️
It feels good so far
Very interesting, the author is great
Oh, he is completely obsessed with his art, invincible, invincible.
Hao Kan, um, are there any books of the same type?
A coroner travels to a different world where the police are approaching, an unemployed magical girl protects the world, criminals are on the loose, criminal investigation and three treasures are almost gone, and all friends are like enemies but not friends [laughter] The battle descriptions are really detailed and comparable to the autopsy report of a forensic doctor, but because the author seems to be writing the climax (bushi) [laughter] Almost every battle description is accurate to the point of view. It is so detailed that many people feel that it is as boring as reading a report. Of course, I don't think that is it [laughter] Some details are very good, but too detailed and a bit dry, and the appearance of each magical girl is quite good. It feels like a 9-point magical girl-themed novel [laughing] It can be said that it has the appearance of fairy grass, but it is a little bit worse. The climax is too little or too bland. After all, magical girls, the climax must be on par with Chuunibyou going crazy (bushi) [laughing] Of course, it can be more bland and can be used as a daily read [laughing] In summary, the food and grass are not enough for the grass jelly. Of course, I feel like grass jelly [laughs crookedly]
The description is very detailed, there is careful thinking and logic, and the writing style is also good. I am undoubtedly a newcomer, but for readers like me, detailed description is equivalent to complicated copywriting, which will be very boring to read. The results are good and bad. However, just tens of thousands of words of updates per day are beyond the reach of people. I worship the boss [smile]
This book is good. The author is professional about the human body and diet. The terminology is dazzling. The plot is quite good. Alas, we have more than a thousand points from beginning to end. To summarize the plot of this book: A young man came to the Magical Girl Headquarters. He was a forensic doctor with a poor background. He had been a soldier (also a forensic doctor?) And worked. He can fight every day and looks very handsome [shy]
Nine updates a day? ! ? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The story itself is also good, and the update speed is a bit too fast. Once you update a day, your shortcomings will be magnified infinitely. If you update nine times a day, you will be a god. Although Duogeng is very awesome, after watching your extras, I really feel that my friend will not die suddenly, right? Your update speed today is ridiculous. It's the first time I've seen an author who works so hard.
The current impression is very good, because I prefer the protagonist San Guanzheng. After all, I am reading a novel, so I can ignore some minor problems. That is, the combat performance is not good. I just saw it. How can you write more than 120 pictures in less than 20 days?
It is worth reading, but the front part needs to be changed, which gives people an uncomfortable feeling. There are too many daily routines, and it is too slow to enter the main line (I feel that the main line is after 100 pictures). Overall it is very good. I hope the author will stick to it and slow down the update to give myself a comfortable writing time and better conceive the plot.
It's a great book beyond my expectations. The protagonist's ability to pretend is beyond my imagination. He has such a strong sense of belief that the protagonist doesn't even laugh when he talks about the setting. In addition, this battle description is from a really novel angle. I am used to seeing blows with various pretense and various words. This is the first time I see a battle with a lot of proper nouns. Forensic doctor, you win. In the second volume, I feel that the author has become obsessed with his own art and cannot extricate himself. Some plots that I personally feel do not need to be described in a large way take up a lot of chapters. In addition, there is really no need to use so many digits. What kind of digit fanatic is this? Hey, tentatively five stars, I will wait and see (.
It's rare to find someone who looks better, and he's also a coroner. Come on, author, update [smile] ，，，，，high[][][][][][]
The writing is smooth and natural, excellent and elegant The protagonist has upright views and intelligence. The other characters are all written with flesh and blood. Recommended to watch, there is the appearance of fairy grass
As far as the first volume I have read so far, the author's thinking is very clear. The protagonist gave me the feeling of being very serious at the beginning, but he also felt a little funny when looking at it later. There is a long section in the middle that describes the emotions of the main characters. I know it is used to shape the characters, but it is really long [crying]. (Ps: I feel so small and pitiful) There are not many new ones now, but they are worth pursuing. I will always read this book [angry]
Biological knowledge entered my brain in a despicable way, and then ran out of my mind... (Ps: sometimes writing too detailed can make the battle feel like a turn-based system)
It's quite beautiful, but unfortunately there aren't many people there. Also, the author, you update very quickly. Other authors write chapters of about 1,000 to 2,000 words a day.
The author has real knowledge, even the details are so detailed
What's worse, it starts from the left ventricle. Fresh arterial blood is squeezed out from the left ventricle through the systemic arteries, and passes through the body's tissues and tissues to complete oxygen and carbon dioxide... Absorbing oxygen and expelling carbon dioxide, and the venous blood becomes arterial blood; and then flows back to the left atrium through the pulmonary veins.
Sometimes I use too much force when describing, which is a common problem, but it is indeed a very interesting attempt. After all, it has been 25 years, and who hasn't used AI to guide it? (
It's very interesting. Although I haven't played much of the magical girl series, the setting of the alien god is quite good.
Everything else is fine, but this Chi is not very acceptable.
Good book, good book, very beautiful
Very good, I like to see this kind of thing
D The author is great, is it a single heroine or a harem?
It's quite rare to write well without writing collapse in the early stage. It smells like a report.
Hee hee hee, how honorable, give me a lot of [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart]
So beautiful, I can't stop
I want to watch the battle. It's fun.
Very good, pretty good
Too productive (*¯¯*) I like it so much 😋❤️
It feels good so far
Very interesting, the author is great
Oh, he is completely obsessed with his art, invincible, invincible.
Hao Kan, um, are there any books of the same type?