火影，宇智波斑的带娃日记

This book is very good, and it makes up for some of my regrets when Naruto was growing up. The daily life of the "three dads" is also very funny [Thinking] It's just that I don't want to be an official partner [face covering] This book is a bit not for my taste. Finally, I hope the ending will not have a cp or oe ending.

This is my personal opinion. Please don't get excited and scold me when some handsome guys and beauties see it. This is the best Naruto fan fiction I have seen so far on Tomato. The process of many scenes is very detailed and is not mentioned in one sentence. What I like most is that the emotional descriptions are very delicate [note] I may like the most common paragraph, which is the description of the scene when Kyuubi meets Madara in space.

I can only say that the author is too creative, Madara is Naruto's son. From a certain perspective, that means Hashirama is Madara's son. He is creative and very good, and the plot is relatively smooth.

I think it's very good, but maybe the xp is a bit inconsistent. If Naruto's cp is still Hinata, I might not have the motivation to pursue it, but the author's writing is already very good. [Blowing Kiss] If Hinata is a cd, it will feel better. Come on, author, I still think it's okay. I think it would be better to watch Naruto without cp. It would be great to watch other places.

Very nice! Naruto is super handsome in this fanfic! Many shortcomings have been redeemed in the article. The fight scenes were very well written! The only drawback is that Hinata's relationship with Naruto came out of nowhere... And in this fanfic, she is just like Kishimoto's character, she is a complete tool... Obviously in the original formula book, she is the only student who got three "excellent" in the ninja school like Sasuke. Her white eyes are extremely pure, she wrote the answers in the Chuunin written test without cheating, and she is a girl who works very hard [crying] If she is destined not to become the heir to the family, wouldn't it be good for her to develop into a medical ninja? [Crying][Crying] Why do so many fanfics treat Hinata as a tool [Crying][Crying][Crying][Crying] If there is anyone who likes Hinata as much as I do, and if you see fanfics that don't treat Hinata as a tool, please feed me [cry][cry][cry] (Ps. The male protagonist must be Naruto)

Really, I can see it just after watching it. It's very good, the emotions are very delicate, and the plot is really good. It's the best woo-woo I've ever seen in Tomato. Because I'm actually a little girl, I originally wanted to find Madara Ming's cp article, but when I saw this, I was very curious, so I clicked in, and then I saw Madara Kyuubi and Xiaona Wenxin. Ah, the fourth generation, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, help, I really like this kind of family love. In the original book, it was a pity that Xiao Na was lonely when he was a child and put makeup on his father. Without a family, he had to rely on himself to practice... I am very happy and relieved to see Xiao Na become strong and start to grow up with a "family" in this book... I like it very much! ! Also, oi, why does this prison spot look a bit gentle? I want to challenge him🙄💅It turns out it's me who is so handsome and he actually stole my portrait rights [face covering] [OK]

It's rare to see such a delicate and beautiful Naruto fanfic. I give it a good review and encourage the author to keep working hard. By the way, I want to ask when are you going to let Kushina appear? For no other reason than to see the funny scene. One more thing, how does the author arrange the four generations of dirty soil and the dirty soil spots [please take a closer look]

I have to say that the author has a very thorough understanding of the character of Uchiha Ban.

How can I put it, I was moved by the normal beauty. There is no weird stuff, off-site jokes, vulgar jokes, or anything too big. The characters have grown up honestly and their mentality is the same. It gives the impression that the author really likes the original work. The grasp of the characters is also very good, and some characters have been slightly changed to make them more likable and reasonable than the original ones. Comparing the group portraits, the bond between Class 7 can really be seen. It's heartwarming to see something so decent in a time when bad fan fiction memes are rampant. The anchor actually skipped and watched it because it was Sasuke's solo push and he was impatient, but it was enough for me to conclude that the writing was very good.

The writing is very good. I haven't seen such a good-looking fanfic in a long time. There is no system, no time travel, just the world of Naruto. The author's ideas are also very good. The character creation is not much different from the original work. Especially it saves all the regrets. Note that it is all regrets. I haven't seen such a logical and happy Naruto fanfic in a long time. Come on, author.

It's probably pretty good to watch. Madara and Minato Kurama get along well with each other. The setting is also very attractive, but I personally don't like Naruhina's official role. If possible, the two of them would have a good cb relationship. As for Sakura, this book is pretty good too.

Awesome, heart-warming, a passionate young man who fights as coldly as an Uchiha [laughs] and a family reunited and grows up healthily, Sasgei [laughs] Damn it, Zetsu died, and those who died regrettably lived a reasonable life. The wedding in the last chapter should be the most luxurious and heartwarming among all fan works, a perfect ending, five-star praise, highly recommended [like] [love]

I like watching it very much. After all, I have followed the anime several times. This is one of the anime I love to watch. It allowed Naruto to experience the teachings and affection of his father as a child. He also taught Naruto not to be too kind, and the bond between friends prevented Sasuke from suffering the hatred of genocide, and Itachi did not suffer the genocide by his own hands. He did not let the man who loves to laugh and laugh The death of the powerful Shisui did not make Jiraiya fall in the Rain Village, which made up for some regrets. Some people may think that human death is inevitable, especially if you endure this title, but I hope that they will have different experiences in each parallel world, which is not necessarily what they have to endure. I also watched one of my shadows, and it was quite good.

I highly recommend this book. The plot is very interesting, the connection in the early stages is just right, and it resolves a lot of difficult questions. Nothing is inappropriate, the characters are described very vividly and vividly, highlighting their original personalities. Many of the battle plots are very vivid and vivid, which also highlights the protagonist's firm determination. Sasuke is also well portrayed, and he is also a young man who moves forward firmly with the protagonist. The final ending is also very touching. It turns a character like Madara into a great being like his father. It is a very reasonable explanation for why it happened at the beginning. It is not only for atonement, but also for the reincarnation of Asura. Satisfied many of our imaginations, Sasuke directly used Susanoo Daibutsu, and Naruto directly used Susanu Kongji Nine Tails. The plot is very in-depth, and it also follows the main line, with some foreshadowing and the final ending.

It's a very good fan novel, and the author is very popular and the update speed is super fast. The characters are basically non-ooc, although there are some innocuous minor mistakes, but overall it is one of the few good-looking Naruto fics in Tomato Awesome, awesome, simply awesome! This book is really great. If it didn't suck, I would declare this a Tomato Naruto fanfic.

How to say it? MC: The emotional scene is perfect! ! ! There is no doubt about it! The character's personality and psychology are well grasped. There are also funny elements. Disadvantages: It's not refreshing enough, and it feels like I'm half done with pooping. The pace is a bit slow? ? [Thinking] General: It's a masterpiece

I didn't plan to read it when I saw the rating of 8.6 At first, but I read it anyway and got straight to the end. The book is quite good. There are some bad points at the moment, but they are basically controversial parts of the original work. The logic is quite reasonable.

It's very good. The interaction between Team 7 is very delicate and fits everyone's character in the original work. The direct interaction between the three old fathers is also very interesting, so much so that now I feel like I am reading a group portrait article, except that there are more scenes of Madara and Naruto, which is very to my liking. Come on, author!

I have read nearly 20 chapters so far. The character descriptions are very good, not OOC, very full and three-dimensional. The emotional and family lines between Madara, Kyuubi and Naruto are really delicate ('▽') I look forward to what will happen when Minato's father and Kushina's mother arrive in the future. A great article that can be read over and over again!

To be honest, let me just say that it is really good to read, and this book makes up for a lot of the regrets in the original work. It is well worth reading! Although part of the plot may overlap with the plot of the original work, he will slightly change the plot in the original work based on the development logic of the book, but it will make people feel that the change is not abrupt at all. After all, this book is not the original work. Now I am increasingly looking forward to the follow-up development of the protagonist group. Will they be as powerful as they were in the later stages of the original work? Let us stay tuned...[Laughing][laughing]

(My review contains some spoilers) It's very beautiful and written exactly the way I like it! The part about not recognizing relatives is so funny! It's not just about this world, because some accidents activated Rei and traveled to other worlds. The writing is not bad, and the characters are not OOC. Even Hashirama appears in Sasuke's body later to meet Madara, and Minato Kushina also appears.

The characters are well written, but Naruto's chakra was cut too hard. Putting in dozens of shadow clones and a Rasengan left him with no chakra.

Brothers, the writing style and plot of this book are quite different, and it also makes up for the regrets of the original work. Although the title and introduction of the book may not make people interested, but only after really coming into contact with this book, the plot inside makes people shine [top post] [top post] [top post] [top post] [top post] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [heart] [heart] [heart] [heart] [heart] [heart] [heart]

It's so good. Come on, the author. Don't overwhelm me with the writing. Now that I see it, I really feel that it's really good-looking and the plot is okay. I've also read a lot of Naruto fanfics. I think it's among the top ones I've read so far. It's good-looking. Come on, the author. [Like]

Highly recommended. I feel that the setting of this fanfic is better than that of Kishimoto's in the original work. Many unreasonable points have been changed to make them more reasonable. I even think that if the original work is really unfolded like this, there will be no problem. The final ending really explains everything. The foreshadowing begins with Ben's memory loss. , And at the same time, it is also a dream come true for the original work. Well, there are some spoilers below (the appearance of Ben is more about regret for the past life), which I feel is very good. There are also the reincarnation setting of the Rinnegan and the ending of the villain. I feel it is much better than the original work. A person like Danzo is purely disgusting. Early death, like Obito's repentance before death, rather than whitewashing, I think it is better than the original work, and there is an ending like Madara's, which is more suitable for him. If you take Madara as the protagonist, this article is more casual in the early stage, as if Madara is raising a child, and there are more battles in the later stage. I think the various fighting scenes are quite good. It's good, and I also buried a little bit of knives. I feel that the character settings and personalities of the original work, as well as the final ending, are very suitable. I feel that the original settings of this book are comparable to the original work. I can only say that Kishimoto did not want to write a long novel at the beginning. Various loopholes and pitfalls, this book has also filled a lot of loopholes.

It's not bad, it's a novel novel. Good luck to the author.

A very innovative article. Well, although it may occasionally be a bit overwhelming in the middle, I still want to give this article a high score. Well, I read it in one week, very quickly.

It's good to watch, the psychological description is very thorough, and the fights are also very exciting. Kyuubi, Madara, and Minato have no OOC

It's pretty good. There are a few good actors and actresses who are well-written. They also have little characterization, which is much better than Kishimoto's (I'm not talking about Raiguan's actors and actresses, I just recommend Naruto). The plot is also quite interesting, with warm daily life and passionate battles.

It's rare to see a Naruto fanfic with such delicate emotions on Tomatoes. Although the writing is not the best I've ever seen, it is definitely not a formulaic and enjoyable article, so some minor bugs are innocuous.