My Little Pony: the Perfect Character Collapsed!

It's rare to comment on writing, but it's really good. And in this context where new books on Tomato Girl's Pony Channel are generally not good, the book's emergence also vindicates Pony Girl's name: through exquisite and accurate descriptions and special and interesting plot entry points is the best way to improve quality. The traffic gained by the novel setting of Succubus Neodymium Mary Sue's system will only be temporary.

Anyway, the setting is really attractive, and the writing is not bad. I think as long as it doesn't end badly or make a mess of things later on. This book should do very well🤤I hope it won't be removed from the shelves after reading it halfway (›´ω`‹) Can any other author update 10,000 words a day🥺🤤🥺🥺🥺🤤🤤🤤 The number of updates is small and the quality is not good. Some of them are even promoting new books to friends. It seems that the word count is crammed. I feel that the protagonist is too cowardly. I can only say that I will not comment on it in the future.

In fact, the plot and other aspects are very good, but the fake system is poisonous. If the real system is the mask of the protagonist, then the fake system is the ghost that harms people. I don't know if it has something to do with Discord. If so, Discord and the protagonist will also have a hostile relationship. But in fact, the real system will look better if it develops, while the fake system will cause drama. Weakening the system and emphasizing friendship will not make the protagonist too uncomfortable. Faced with social pressure and past painful experiences, I really don't want to add a backstabbing system. Having something that the protagonist can rely on will make you more motivated to watch.

The writing is very good, but I feel that the protagonist is a bit aggrieved...[Crazy] I think there is a song that fits the occasion. An adapted version of "Mo Homesickness", the lyrics are as follows: Cry loudly, no one will laugh at you here, the most important thing in life is life and death, nothing else matters, the reality is too terrible, it makes me want to escape all the time, but in the blink of an eye I am woken up by the alarm clock [I'm about to cry]

When I saw the title of the book, I thought it was a funny article. The author, who taught you to write a book like this? ! ! ! So innovative and beautiful! ! ! ! ! Looking forward to continued updates! ! ! !

I'm so good at writing about the dampness in life. Although I come from a northern city (if I'm wrong, just think I didn't read the article carefully (waving my hand)), the style of my previous life was as humid as the summer in the south, very heavy. Great writing! Although I was unlucky to meet some bad people, I still shine brightly. Looking at it so far, I don't know if Zi Yue and the others will really trust Shirai, but the last words Shirai said should be challenging their bottom line, what does it mean to withdraw, so that others will wonder whether you consider us as friends, and just withdraw without permission. But I'm looking forward to the follow-up development. Everyone in My Little Malia is a good pony, so I hope it will develop well!

Yes, the picture description is very good. The My Little Pony I watched ranks very high. If you have read Salted Fish Novelist, you can see that it is similar to what she wrote (I am talking about the picture description). It is very good.

Because he was not liked and was at the end of his rope, he decided to give up on his previous self, put on a mask, and please everyone around him who could make his life better. He is very autistic and has a severely dependent personality. I was hurt so badly that I was very afraid of being disliked by others. I hope you recover soon and don't collapse.

Very very beautiful! But if there are babies who can't bear the abuse of the protagonist, you can skip it, because the protagonist in the early stage is still quite distressing. It's really, really beautiful, the writing is very good, and some things are very interesting. Then I really want to ask, can the original system also become a pony to accompany the protagonist? ! ! ! I think it would be great if the original system could come back. I am very much looking forward to the next story, but I still hope it won't be too cruel. I cried for a long time when the baby was forgotten. I will read more and change the rating. 😘

It's really, really beautiful! Daily life is like really entering the life of My Little Pony. The sense of immersion is super strong. After watching it, I still have a feeling that I still have something to say🥺. The character creation is also super good. From the nervousness and anxiety at the beginning of coming to this world to gradually integrating into this world, becoming a member of a loving family. There is no need to split the CP and use CP. For those who like to have no CP, it is really super suitable! Really highly recommended! Believe me, as long as you read a few more chapters, you will definitely be hooked!

It's a very good book. It's one of the few good-looking pony articles that I found on the software Tomato. The setting is relatively novel and has its own ingenuity, and at the same time it does not have a big impact on the original characters, which is worthy of recognition. Hope I can see it end well.

Without a strong golden finger, the protagonist grows from a child with low self-esteem and timidity to a gentle and confident sister who faces difficulties head-on. The friendship between the girls in it is described very naturally and naturally, and so is the growth of the protagonist. It will be a little uncomfortable when you read the first part, but this process seems to be experiencing the protagonist's story personally, and it also reflects the difficulties in our reality. A wonderful novel, I really like it. Especially "truth" and "born toward the sun"

When will the protagonist show his true self🧐

Not bad, but after reading too much about the system, it feels like AI The AI in front feels so heavy

Author, please, please don't abuse my baby anymore [cry][cry][cry][cry]

Author, don't work too hard, and don't be too relaxed [note] (This book is quite nice)

I've only read Chapter 7, and I just happened to be unhappy today. I read this book, and I don't know why I suddenly wanted to read it. I really feel bad for the protagonist, it's quite incoherent... But I like it very much. I liked the protagonist Bai Jin when I saw her name. There's no reason... I'm a little afraid to read it, so I'll give it a good review first... Also... The protagonist's sense of isolation is really obvious, and it's well written... Good luck, author (I'll add a comment when I think of something...) When I read Chapter 64, wow wow, the emotional line is really good and smooth. I am very curious whether the three princesses can find the problem. Now that I have reached Chapter 92, I came to read it because in the introduction, the protagonist has now found himself, and I don't feel particularly interested in it anymore, but I still want to congratulate the author on getting better and better, come on [Speaking of which, for those who cannot understand the emotions of the protagonist and fall in love with them, you will only feel aggrieved, so if you can't accept it, run away immediately, don't watch it!

Hahahahaha! ! I can only tell you that this is an unusually human novel, and it almost made me popular [laughing evilly] I feel that the author is quite cute, the protagonist is also quite cute, and the story is quite detailed. It is not quite like other Xiaoma novels, but it is also very interesting and suitable for slow readers, or people like me who have been wandering around for a long time and can't find a book to read.

I've never seen anything like this before. It's very novel! ! ! [Shy][Shy][Shy] The style of painting is also very similar to that of Little Malia. I feel like I have come to Little Magdalene when I look at the description. I personally don't think there is anything OOC about it, Tiancai! ! ! The author is always updating, 🙏🙏🙏Please, I finished reading it not long ago and cried to death [cry][cry][cry]

When will the real system come online again? When will the counterfeit products be removed from the shelves?

FW system can also be stolen

It would also be interesting to see how the authors (Chrysalis, Kexiguanghui, Tirek) were added to the mix. I see that in the current world line, Cocoon has been defeated in the past. Has it turned into a stone statue?

This is the most realistic book I have ever read about My Little Pony's character, just like another branch of the same tree.

It looks good. I love watching it. Please order more.

Very nice (After reading for so long, I suddenly realized that there is no comment yet)

It's okay, but I suggest you watch it again.

What a great book. The protagonist and the system are perfectly integrated into the protagonist group. The description of the characters is so good.

It's very interesting \(//∇//)\. This is the most interesting book about My Little Pony that I have ever read. I hope the author can make it faster,,վ^վ,,

It looks good, but when will the original system come back?

Great article, reminds me of The Stanley Parable