I Retired Due to Injury, So Why Am I Coaching Martial Arts on a Variety Show?

Kuangfeng, go back! Let's rewrite the destruction of Shushan and what follows! I think it could have been adapted into a film and TV show, The Wind!

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Those who don't know think that my grandma is sitting in front of the computer writing ancient and cool articles.

The real Li Xuanxiao was already dead when Shushan was destroyed

Did I really survive that epidemic? 😄😄😄

The protagonist is dead and his identity has not been revealed

The return of the Dragon King? Shouldn't this be the strength of the original author? Has he really been replaced?

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The subject matter is quite interesting. Gao Wu retires and is combined with a variety show martial arts instructor. The setting has potential. However, when reading, the wrong sentences often jump out of the scene, and the logic is often lost. For example, the motivations of the characters' actions are inexplicable, the plot connections are blunt, and the slow pace in the early stage did not maintain the "relaxation and refreshment". For example, the integration of martial arts training and variety shows could have produced exciting sparks, but the sense of satisfaction was compromised due to logical loopholes. I hope the author will polish the text, sort out the plot, and not waste good ideas. I look forward to the follow-up work.

It is recommended that you don't read the introduction that says it's cool. I don't see where the coolness lies. If the male protagonist has always been as exhausted as before, has no strength, and faints as soon as he goes to the battlefield, then it is a cool article.