The White-Haired Lolita I Picked up on the Roadside Turned Out to Be a Good Brother

Good. Although there are some minor flaws, the flaws outweigh the flaws. Only the male protagonist has the system, and the reason for the female protagonist's gender change is not the system. The description of the battle is a bit immature, like "looking at the pictures and talking" from various battle scenes. Regarding the marriage change, although some of the scenes in the early stage were a bit baffling, the awkward feeling of "I clearly like my brother, but I can't express my feelings for various reasons, so I can only try to act as usual" was perfectly written. It also wrote the character design that "male soul, female body" should have. Really great!

Give yourself a good review [Thinking]

Yes, the dialogue between the brothers is very touching and vivid (but I don't think the scolding is very serious, of course I can't blame the author😊), but some small details are really not handled well (but the author has worked so hard, can you blame him?🧐) We are both from Carmona, so we must give it a five-star rating! Five-star praise! Five-star praise! (Must support greatly)🤓

The author comes out, I want to copy your work Homework [laughing evilly]

It's so beautiful. I have never read such a beautiful novel in my life. It must be praised with five stars. The content is interesting, the structure is clear, the full text is free, it's so beautiful

Taihao saw it, when will the training be released😡

Very good novel, which made my brother change his gender @

It looks good, but it doesn't follow the above. Relaxation mixed with tension, anyway, please recommend

There is a slight problem. Sometimes the upper part does not follow the lower part. It would be better if the psychological description is more detailed. I hope the author can write better.

Everyone knows that it's hard to say something, so On the evening of September 5th, I discovered that I don't like playing games on my mobile phone that much. I dare say that playing games is more like diverting my attention. As for why I divert my attention, please don't worry about it... Even though it's only a little bit, I don't feel that bad anymore, so I won't say it [laughing]

Emmm... It's worth watching anyway🥵

Personally I think it looks good

Suddenly I remembered that I haven't reviewed the book yet.

Good looking, a few typos but not many If I go there, there will be a cat girl?!

Not bad. Come on, author.