Is the King Strong? Tell Me About My Game Account

So far, the writing is pretty good, but there are some minor flaws. Does it take so much effort for the master-level Mariluli to fight the king-level Boss Cordora? Absolute class suppression is greater than anything else Observe again

Wonderful work, but the author's writing style is not strong enough and needs to be improved.

Pokémon Level: 1-19 Elementary 20-39 senior level, 40-49 elite level 50-69 gym level, 70-79 king level 80-89 championship level, 90-99 master level 100-109 second level god, 101-119 first level god

Five stars are encouraged, but writing invincible articles that pays attention to daily life is also a point of retaining readers. The failure of this book is that invincible writing is not invincible. In the early stage, it took too long to create bonds and daily combat power. The lack of excitement will make many readers abandon the article. Later, the author gradually got better, but the early transition was still a bit too long.

Seeing it now, it deserves five stars.

Come on, author, you must persist until the end.

Logically speaking, shouldn't everyone know the elves given by the system? Otherwise, where would they get combat experience?

I feel like the protagonist is a level 90 elf who doesn't have martial ethics. If you do this kind of thing in the Zhongji Arena, I don't need to save face for you.

It's okay. Overall, the quality is okay, but the details still need to be improved.

It's a nice-looking Pokémon that's very three-dimensional, and the battle descriptions are pretty good too.

Very good author, please give it a try! ! !

Invincible writing is just awesome [laughing evilly]

Good, good, good, good, good, good

So far, there's nothing too poisonous about it. The concept is quite novel and very good.