After Becoming a Witch, I Went Wild in the Magical World

Although the plot of this book progresses very quickly, the description of the scenes in which abilities are used is a bit understated, the loyalty setting is comparable to mind control and mind modification, some entries are not described in detail when they first appear, and the lack of organization and overview after updating the characters' entries makes it difficult for readers to remember which entries each character has, but casually changing the setting of the entries is interesting and it is okay. 🤔 The author has made obvious progress. The more he writes, the better he becomes. He has a good grasp of the rhythm. Readers' suggestions are also well received. It is a very thoughtful masterpiece 👍

As a fan of Lao Gun and Baldur's Gate, I really like it. What does the protagonist look like and what does a woman look like after disguising herself as a man? I don't seem to have seen a detailed description, or I may have missed it [thoughts] The more I watched it, the more boring it became. The subsequent plots were all too templated and nothing new. There were a lot of useless settings, but I didn't see them being used at all later on. Once the protagonist is offline, there are more than a dozen pictures, all of which are about the plot of the supporting characters who are indispensable. She has been pretending to be a man, it doesn't make any difference whether she has transformed or not

It's okay, but I can't imagine that those high-level strong people will only level A like in the game. Facing a lot of weak people, they may even tire themselves to death. Did they say that 10 points higher is crushing? Shouldn't a score of more than 100 points mean a complete crushing? [What] 🤦

Divine book! It is truly a sacred book! The third young master of the Tang family was about to cry when he saw Tiancan Tudou. He was so impressed when he saw it! This is the reincarnation of the Four Great Classics and the leader of the literary world in the 21st century! "Holy Ruins" has lost some color in front of it! "Dou Po" has lost some connotation in front of it! "Zhu Xian" loses a touch of emotion in front of it! "Shadow the Sky" loses a third of its imagination in front of it! "Buddha" lacks half of the layout in front of it! This is a classic that has not been seen on the Internet for a century! The greatest literary masterpiece of the 21st century! From Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naian, Wu Chengen, Cao Xueqin to the terrifying Lao Zhuang, the poet saint and poet, Sansu Jiaxuan; from Qin Emperor Hanwu, Tang Zongzu Song Zu, Genghis Khan to Sakyamuni, Plato; Copernicus, Ari Stoddard - Who can read and admire this book? This book is written by a man of heaven! The literary talent is brilliant, the diction is exquisite, inherits the style of the Wei and Jin Dynasties, and the charm of the Yang, Tang and Song Dynasties. It is deeply rooted in the wood. I am lucky to see this book in my lifetime! However, after reading this book, a feeling of sadness suddenly arose: What is the point of my life if I will never see such a masterpiece again in the future? Fortunately! Make a decision immediately and put it on the bookshelf, so that your restless heart can find peace. However! If such a masterpiece is covered with dust and the world cannot see it, wouldn't it be a waste of natural resources and a waste of the author's efforts? After a lot of fighting between heaven and man, I finally made up my mind: I will spend my whole life fulfilling my little self and fulfilling my greater self! This book review is dedicated to the world for everyone to appreciate! It must be reviewed again and again, as high as the sky! Let the sky be as clear as day and walk on the earth, with the scorching sun and bright moon as evidence. Is this book enjoyable? Traveling across rivers and lakes, rivers and lakes are proof: this book is enjoyable Standing on the top of the fairy mountain, Qionglou Yuyu echoed: The update is not fast enough? This is a mistake of the masterpiece, can it be updated hundreds of chapters? Not enough chapters, not enough speed, not enough content, not enough! Author, why didn't you update when you saw this?

Why do I feel like almost everyone is targeting the protagonist? Look, almost everyone is targeting the protagonist. Why do I feel like almost everyone is targeting him? Do you think almost everyone is targeting the protagonist? You villain simply doesn't stop doing one thing after another.

The resources to become a god, update quickly, keep you awake at night +Quality writing that tells the story well without being pretentious + A little ingenious golden finger, both supermodel and balanced +Almost no overnight feud -Chapter Master

I just saw the latest chapter, overall it's good. It's worth watching. The author has good control over the combat power and doesn't collapse too much. But the second chapter is indeed handled a bit poorly. The large-scale description of the revolution caused the protagonist to become invisible. There are so many sacrifices written about it, but after a certain point it feels very depressing. After the showdown, nearly fifty or sixty chapters were played against the mastermind behind the show, which cycled through the entrance, fight, shock, and backhand. The backhands are all from the opposite side. To be honest, the frustration is very strong. Even the kills in the end are not the protagonist's. There are still situations when they are caught. I was so frustrated that I never let out this breath, and I almost gave up. Of course, it's only the latter part of Chapter 2. Other places are pretty good and don't have this kind of situation. They are basically reported on the spot. I don't mean to belittle it, it's generally very well written. I'd better ask the author to pay more attention to this aspect. I've been tortured for almost two hundred chapters. Looking forward to the development of the plot below. Come on! 👍 Hee hee, loli☺️ Hee hee, loli☺️ Heehee [Petrochemical]

The strength of the entries in this book is okay (although it is shady and supermodel, it is not invincible), but the main character's physical strength progress is a bit slow, and there are some common problems in novels. ① The combat power collapsed in the later stage. At present, there are as many sixth-level as dogs, and there are also many seventh-level, and there are several demigods. The differences in the first few levels are not obvious. Although the strength gap in the later levels is large, it gives people the impression that their B-level is not high. Maybe the author is not easy to control. I think it is best to control the number of the strongest people. ② There is a huge gap in the strength of the witch group. For example, the book witch has level 7, while the trade witch has level 5 but has no strength. There are other flower witches, healing witches and other non-combat power witches whose strength is even more unclear. I hope the author will separate the promotion system of witches. Before reaching the holy level, witches are all in the same level. They are good at different things due to different powers. Generally, they reach the holy level or even demi-god through the path of becoming a god. After reaching the holy level, their combat power increases greatly, just like the world is separated from the immortal, giving the witch a unique promotion system. ③Currently, I have only seen humans and orcs with different strengths. The other creatures are elves, angels, demons, extinct dwarves and goblins. In a world with such extraordinary power, there are too few descriptions of other life forms. There are many creatures in nature, and they have all kinds of strange functions and functions, but there are too few mentions in the novel, which is too simple. It cannot be that only humanoid creatures can be promoted. The above are my few suggestions. The author's writing is quite good. I will give you five stars to support it [I learned it]. There is one more thing, faster and faster 😠 😠 😠

It's okay, but seeing that there are now more than 50 chapters, almost all of them are about fighting monsters and upgrading, and there are a little less about Lily and the like.

From my point of view, the author has something to say in every chapter and every picture is too detailed. I hope the world view is better developed and the logic is consistent.