Comprehensive British and American: How to Develop a Heartthrob

The writing is all right, and the plot makes sense. The only highlight I see is that the BG is trying to make the male lead a bitch to the heartthrob. Everything else is fine.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah"""" it's so well written! I am so lucky to be able to eat such delicious food! I have only watched the first world so far, and I am really looking forward to the extra linkage. "Smartness is the definition of sexy" is clearly demonstrated in the extra part. The heroine is also really cute and lovable, especially the three people who seem to be rational above all else clearly fell into defeat in the end, which is completely personal charm. Sherlock: "You are the only end point in all my logical chains that cannot be reducted, and the only identity that I cannot solve even after exhausting all deductions." Apez: "I was originally scheduled to meet you there for the last time, but she was so strong that she fished me up in one go." Mycroft: "What are you trying to expose? The little flutter I have for her cannot be said to be feelings at all, far from it." Apez: "It's enough to lie to yourself, but you still want to lie to me?" Apez: "We are all trapped here, Mycroft, no one can save us."

Very nice! In the Shenxia fanfics I read before, the protagonist's insertion was very abrupt, and some "protagonists" would treat Watson maliciously, which was disgusting! The writing of this fan is super smooth, the heroine is very good, the three people get along with each other like a trio in the first season of Forensic Qin Ming, the kind that can be CP for each other, I made it myself, the CP of the author is very clear, I am very happy to read it [laughs]

Like! I have been deeply fascinated by the world of Sherlock since the beginning. Falling in love rationally is so sweet. (Note: The next sentence contains spoilers.) Be's main storyline ended, but I went back to it later. The beginning of the Stark storyline also perfectly ended the first world. The great detective and his lover lived a happy life! ! Hart is so warm! The HP setting is also very novel. It's the first time I've seen the heroine develop in the medical field. Hahaha. Then the world view of the Marvel universe in the present tense is really big and big. I can't wait to see the modern Shura field next. Help... Stock up, stock up, this heartthrob is so cool! ! ! Come on 🥰Thanks for your hard work!

I can't express enough how good this book is. The delicate emotional lines and warm daily life touched my heart very much, and the heroine is very charming. She seduce me just by standing there. The heroine is a person who exudes charm. This book shows an excellent sister. Only excellent people can attract excellent people. If you are unable to comment, please move to the text. Can the author ➕Newt, Percy, Sirius, Remus, and Barty Jr., By the way, go back to the original generation and conquer Harry's parents and then save them 💕 (Oh no, author, you have to write a lot of chapters.)

It looks good, and the emotional line is okay. The most important thing is that the description of the heroine is getting better and better. She is not smart but is clever and has her own shining points. She is not completely overshadowed by the male protagonist. The supporting characters are all written very tastefully. There is no female rivalry. The relationship between men and women is very good. She is really developing in the direction of becoming a heartthrob. Therefore, I prefer the growth line of the female protagonist than the emotional line.

The first one really made me cry a lot 😢😢 The heroine is very smart. In order to be around the hero more often, the heroine said she wanted to be a freelancer in the next world. I was shocked by what the system said. The writing is really good, but why can't they be together until they grow old? It's really painful for your lover to die in front of you 😢 😢 Watching the first episode of the HP world, Sherlock will time travel to Nana, right? 😢 😢 😢 😢 🥺 🥺 🥺 🥺 The author must write sweet articles, not to be abusive 😢 😢 I can't stand it 😢 😢 😢 😢

90% Of the writing is very good. The only possible personal highlight is that although I understand that the heroine's mission is to help some of the protagonists, when she is looked down upon/treats badly to the heroine in various ways by different protagonists in different worlds, the heroine has no grudges at all. Even if she wants to explain, prove or retaliate harmlessly in the future, she does not. She is attacked by Tom Reed with a curse, and the heroine just defends herself. Although I understand that it may be normal for Tom to do such a thing. But it doesn't mean that he has no temper at all; Iron Man started to look down on the heroine and was very contemptuous, but the heroine also... But the heroine's character towards others is not blindly soft. She also has her own temper, but she is very "soft" towards the male protagonists, which is a bit annoying for me personally, but the rest of the content is very well written!

Very pretty. The plot is not procrastinating and the pace is fast. Although I have a premonition that there will be an unclean male protagonist, it is still a pity (ps: I have never seen Iron Man, so I don't know if it is clean or not. I just read a bit of all types of literature)

Omg, the heroine and Locke are really close to each other, and the author's writing is really good. PS: Although it's a good match, I felt weird when I watched it. Maybe it's because I didn't expect Locke to fall in love.