Comprehensive British and American: How to Develop a Heartthrob

The writing is all right, and the plot makes sense. The only highlight I see is that the BG is trying to make the male lead a bitch to the heartthrob. Everything else is fine.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah"""" it's so well written! I am so lucky to be able to eat such delicious food! I have only watched the first world so far, and I am really looking forward to the extra linkage. "Smartness is the definition of sexy" is clearly demonstrated in the extra part. The heroine is also really cute and lovable, especially the three people who seem to be rational above all else clearly fell into defeat in the end, which is completely personal charm. Sherlock: "You are the only end point in all my logical chains that cannot be reducted, and the only identity that I cannot solve even after exhausting all deductions." Apez: "I was originally scheduled to meet you there for the last time, but she was so strong that she fished me up in one go." Mycroft: "What are you trying to expose? The little flutter I have for her cannot be said to be feelings at all, far from it." Apez: "It's enough to lie to yourself, but you still want to lie to me?" Apez: "We are all trapped here, Mycroft, no one can save us."

Very nice! In the Shenxia fanfics I read before, the protagonist's insertion was very abrupt, and some "protagonists" would treat Watson maliciously, which was disgusting! The writing of this fan is super smooth, the heroine is very good, the three people get along with each other like a trio in the first season of Forensic Qin Ming, the kind that can be CP for each other, I made it myself, the CP of the author is very clear, I am very happy to read it [laughs]

I can't express enough how good this book is. The delicate emotional lines and warm daily life touched my heart very much, and the heroine is very charming. She seduce me just by standing there. The heroine is a person who exudes charm. This book shows an excellent sister. Only excellent people can attract excellent people. If you are unable to comment, please move to the text. Can the author ➕Newt, Percy, Sirius, Remus, and Barty Jr., By the way, go back to the original generation and conquer Harry's parents and then save them [Sending Hearts] (Oh no, author, you have to write a lot of chapters.)

It looks good, and the emotional line is okay. The most important thing is that the description of the heroine is getting better and better. She is not smart but is clever and has her own shining points. She is not completely overshadowed by the male protagonist. The supporting characters are all written very tastefully. There is no female rivalry. The relationship between men and women is very good. She is really developing in the direction of becoming a heartthrob. Therefore, I prefer the growth line of the female protagonist than the emotional line.

The first one really made me cry a lot [crying][crying] The heroine is very smart. In order to be around the hero more often, the heroine said she wanted to be a freelancer in the next world. I was shocked by what the system said. The writing is really good, but why can't they be together until they grow old? It's really painful for your lover to die in front of you [crying] [crying] Watching the first episode of the HP world, Sherlock will time travel to Nana, right? [Crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] The author must write sweet articles, not to be abusive [crying] [crying] I can't stand it [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying]

Like! I have been deeply fascinated by the world of Sherlock since the beginning. Falling in love rationally is so sweet. (Note: The next sentence contains spoilers.) Be's main storyline ended, but I went back to it later. The beginning of the Stark storyline also perfectly ended the first world. The great detective and his lover lived a happy life! ! Hart is so warm! The HP setting is also very novel. It's the first time I've seen the heroine develop in the medical field. Hahaha. Then the world view of the Marvel universe in the present tense is really big and big. I can't wait to see the modern Shura field next. Help... Stock up, stock up, this heartthrob is so cool! ! ! Come on 🥰Thanks for your hard work!

Very pretty. The plot is not procrastinating and the pace is fast. Although I have a premonition that there will be an unclean male protagonist, it is still a pity (ps: I have never seen Iron Man, so I don't know if it is clean or not. I just read a bit of all types of literature)

90% Of the writing is very good. The only possible personal highlight is that although I understand that the heroine's mission is to help some of the protagonists, when she is looked down upon/treats badly to the heroine in various ways by different protagonists in different worlds, the heroine has no grudges at all. Even if she wants to explain, prove or retaliate harmlessly in the future, she does not. She is attacked by Tom Reed with a curse, and the heroine just defends herself. Although I understand that it may be normal for Tom to do such a thing. But it doesn't mean that he has no temper at all; Iron Man started to look down on the heroine and was very contemptuous, but the heroine also... But the heroine's character towards others is not blindly soft. She also has her own temper, but she is very "soft" towards the male protagonists, which is a bit annoying for me personally, but the rest of the content is very well written!

It's really super good-looking. I haven't read the original Sherlock Holmes, but it still reads smoothly. The author's writing style is really mature and the descriptions are delicate. I highly recommend it. It can be said that it is one of the few plot designs that makes me want to stop, including the communication between the characters, which makes people feel very natural. When I saw the Harry Potter volume, when the author arranged for the heroine to get along with Harry, all the reasons and interactions were very logical, and there was no sense of embarrassment. Highly recommended [laugh][laugh]

Omg, the heroine and Locke are really close to each other, and the author's writing is really good. PS: Although it's a good match, I felt weird when I watched it. Maybe it's because I didn't expect Locke to fall in love.

I only watched HP World briefly, and it felt very ordinary, and there was nothing that attracted me, but for Sherlock, I gave it four stars [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] As a long-time fan of British and American derivative themes, I really think the first world is well written. I don't think it is OOC. The heroine's character is also good and quite lovable [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart] Keep up the hard work and come on big

I have finished reading Two Worlds, and I really like the heroine. She has a distinct personality. She is a real heartthrob. Many authors write very superficially. I don't know why but I fell in love with it when I met him [laughing awkwardly]. The author's writing style is also very good. I immediately saw that it was almost 3 o'clock in the morning. It's really one of the few who wrote a book review in my life. Please update it soon. I want to eat more and better meals. Hahahaha. Can you see it?

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I really can't stand it anymore. My writing style is very good, and my writing angle is also very good. I rarely see this kind of angle. [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] It looks good, I love it, I love it, I love it~ Come on, I will give you more!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhh, ahhhhhhhh, ahhhhhhh, ahhhhhhhh, it's really, really, really beautiful. I like Sherlock so much. That's why there is no ending of he anymore. It's so sad, so little, not enough. [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry]

I've already seen it and I don't know what the world is. 😄It's so beautiful. It's really beautiful! Then comes the Shura Field, come, come, come 😃 I'm really looking forward to seeing Curly and then having the Shura Field with others 😊 And then I'm also looking forward to my wife trying out more new roles 😚😚

Very nice! It's the most detailed description I've ever seen in a TV series in the U. S., There's no bloody plot, it's updated quickly, the logic is tight, and it's ranked number one. It's definitely going to be popular, so I'll continue to serialize it! I always felt that the world behind the heroine's appearance gave me a slight sense of sadness and alienation, and I was not happy in the blessing of God. The emotional atmosphere is so subtle!

The emotions are expressed very delicately. I thought that after reading many books and falling in love with many people, the plot would become more cliched later on, but there is no strategy for each different character. They all have unique insights, and each character is flesh and blood. It is not just because the protagonist is going to fall in love with a certain character, and then other characters become the background. It is very unexpected [smirk][snicker][snicker][snicker]

Not bad, great potential.

So pretty! The first world written by my wife was so delicious and shocking. It was so touching that I didn't dare to eat the CP of the next world. Not every world will be so heartwarming! Oh leak! Still looking forward to the time when we meet again

I read the latest chapter in one breath. The author has a good grasp of the rhythm of the article. The growth heroine is really in my heart. She is not so perfect, but she still has her own bottom line morality and kindness, and she is getting better and better. After reading this article now, it deserves a five-star praise.

Surprisingly, the brushstrokes are super delicate. My favorite at the moment is Detective World, it really has a sense of love and the plot is very compact. I hope the next world will be a chatty spider! I really like the innocent boy aspect!

The author Fu Lianxian wrote very well! ! ! Shenxia is also very warm. HP focuses on healing and friendship strategies. There are few popular lines, and Shenxia lines are always interspersed, but everyone survives. The heroine is also growing up all the time, and her strength is worth the leverage! ! ! ! The heroine has a direct personality and is not a soft heroine. When faced with a forced kiss, the other party will understand that the heroine's personal wishes need to be respected. The male protagonists also focus on the female protagonist's feelings. There is no scene where the male protagonist punishes the female protagonist because of jealousy, and the male protagonist will not think that the female protagonist is their property. Overall, it's quite enjoyable. I've read a lot of British and American magazines. This author is not only diligent in updating, but the content is also of high quality. In the early stage, the personality is emotional, but later on the personality will change.

I want to watch Sherlock [cry][cry][cry] I'm afraid of being scolded so I won't say anything anymore.

It's really beautiful, not OOC at all. I look forward to the reunion of Nana and Sherlock.

Very beautiful, very beautiful, very beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Come and see them all! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! It was extremely sweet and extremely sharp (bah, it's not that there is no knife). It made me roll crazily on the bed! ! ! ! ! ! ! Not enough to watch at all! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The writing is good, and Sherlock's psychology and behavior when he is in love are more in line with his personal image, and there is nothing particularly OOC about it. But as a loyal Sherlock Holmes fan, I still don't admit that Sherlock Holmes will develop in love. I more agree with the relationship between love and friendship (only personal opinion)

Super super super awesome!!!! I only watched Sherlock's World and the extra episode, it's really awesome!! Not OOC at all! It's rare that the author doesn't ignore the writing style of everyone in the trio! And the daily life of the trio is really awesome!! I really! Love it so much! Sherlock yyds!

The heroine and Charlotte have a really good rapport with each other.

You must stick to it, it's so beautiful! I don't dare to think about how I will live if you stop updating🙉🥹 It's so beautiful. Go check it out! Xiao Xia is so cute in her great portrayal🥹👍