The Third Book by the Author Who Loves Pork Rice

Before the confession, the heroine can be said to have begun to take shape. She made the hero look like a dog, and nothing she did seemed to fit the personality of the hero. In junior high school, she quarreled with the male protagonist without understanding the cause and effect, and acted arrogantly. Later, she found the male protagonist and pretended to be her boyfriend and fucked him again, and even went to him to confess her love. Even before the heroine was beaten, she still reaped the bonus of modeling. Even he knows whether his decision is a bad idea or not, which means that the male protagonist may have refused and started to act like a human being. When I didn't see that the female protagonist liked the male protagonist, I thought that the female protagonist also regarded the male protagonist as a friend, otherwise she would treat the male protagonist like this. The male protagonist and the female protagonist ended up having an affair after they had a good fight. They also didn't understand how they had so many interactions with each other after starting to neglect the female protagonist in junior high school and even falling out in high school. Is it all about elementary school? Author: Although the heroine's attack is strong, it still requires too much modeling. Can you recommend a simple and low-demand solution? [Eat melon][eat melon]

I can only say that it's really nice to get through the early stage and be sweet in the later stage. However, the male protagonist in the early stage is too weak. It would be better if the author made the boy stronger in the early stage. Then just make the heroine's emotional excess more natural, and don't fall in love all of a sudden. Not toxic, nothing else, updates quickly (mainly) In summary, as long as you have watched the early stage (but there is no bad point in the early stage, it is just that the male protagonist is too weak: it refers to the emotional weakness. Everything else is fine), the later stage is sweet, very sweet, the kind of confrontational couple is too sweet (and watch my duration) Update! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Author, who are you? Guinness records are knocked out every minute. There are 807 letters. If each Chinese character requires six letters, you can type about 134 words per minute. Since you are not a holder, let's calculate it as 100 words per minute. According to WHO standards, a person's healthy sleep time is eight hours, and you spend about two hours eating every day, 20 minutes to go to the toilet, 40 minutes to wash, and one hour. Hours of exercise, two hours for inspiration, and one hour of idle fishing, you should have nine hours to type. Linyi typed 435,780 words. According to 2,000 words per chapter, there should be 36 chapters, but you only put so much content every day. What's going on? To be honest, is it a deduction? The donkeys in the production team didn't dare to take such a rest, and the author quickly got up to type!

Let me tell you my own opinion. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I guessed that the author wanted to write about something that happened between the male and female protagonists and then recommend the plot. But why did the male protagonist have to be involved in something that I don't understand? Can't you just write about other things? Do you have to write a prank on the male protagonist? I know they are mortal enemies, but they won't do it like this. (Only expressing personal views)

It's a good read, and the title of the book is fun. Those who like this kind of subject matter will be interested. However, there are a lot of small points in the early stage. It seems that male readers will feel a little aggrieved. The male protagonist can make a break in some small places, or mention the past of the male protagonist who used to tease the female protagonist. Of course, this does not mean that the female protagonist is bad, but it lacks the so-called "rival" feeling. Then there is the fact that in the early stage, there is no relationship between the male and female protagonists at all! (It is already known that the heroine has a secret crush) It feels like they are trying to tease each other, or to death, I feel that the shortcomings of the heroine are shy and short descriptions, and the inner emotions of the hero are fighting, there is no sense of ambiguity and pull Then the pace when revealing the heroine's relationship was too fast. I felt like I could slow down a bit and write more about daily life. But I still think this book is very interesting. As long as it can survive the early stages, it will be very good! !

The heroine turned the hero into a dog, which is even better than Xiao Ming. You want to write about interesting things between the male and female protagonists, which is fine, but after you finish writing, have you read it yourself? Read the front carefully and revise it.

I don't comment easily, but I can only say that this heroine is invincible, and the author who can write such a plot is also invincible.

If you feel like it's going to be popular, take up a floor first. This subject matter is also quite special. With so many romance novels out there, it's hard to find a replacement for this subject matter.

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Come on, author, you are already better than other authors if you can work hard to update even though your results are not so good.