Harry Potter: The Rose and the Black Hound

The image of the heroine completely matches my view of Sirius cp. Beautiful (I feel that Sirius is a bit preoccupied with looks), pure-blooded but unconventional, rebellious at heart (quite consistent with Sirius, with the same values ​​and consumption views), shrewd (I feel that Sirius is a bit tired of stupidity and unlikely to accept stupid people), elegant and free and easy (it is inevitable that there will be the influence of family, and I feel disgusted with rigidity, not elegance).

There is a bit of a bug in the setting. The wand is so aggressive. Why would you make a special trip to the wand shop when you are not sure whether you will choose the heroine? If it is confirmed, then there will be more people who know the secret of the wand choosing the heroine, and there is no need to buy a wand. It is unnecessary to go to the wand shop; if the heroine is not chosen, the heroine will be drained of blood and die in front of Ollivander, and the family will become a joke () Although I know that Sister Bao will definitely win as the heroine, this setting is a bit strange. According to this logic, the previous family heads should have been selected. In this case, the conditions for selecting people do not seem to be so harsh? Or maybe the wands were put away and the family heads who went ahead didn't try? Wouldn't it be better to change it to cast a spell against your ability if you are selected, or to use the wand forcefully if you are not selected and it will be counterattacked? Of course, it's just my humble opinion. The author's writing is also good. Especially when he fought back against the troll to save Hermione in the first grade, the wand sucked blood and took root in his arm, and a rose grew out of it. The description was spectacular. Some of the little details are very cute, and they will always make you smile after reading them. X Harry always failed to review the potions class before the exam, and finally found out that it was because the weights were rusty. When he met Peeves, he lied to him and Bloody Balor became angry, so that Peeves interfered with Filch. When his mother improved the wolfsbane potion, he needed to make the werewolf energetic but not lose his mind, so he added beagle hair to it, etc. Very cute little settings! In terms of love, Sirius hasn't officially met each other yet, so there's nothing much to say, but it seems more like falling in love at first sight with each other's faces? I'm a little curious about how Harry will call the heroine after they get together www Looking forward to updates from the author

The author's writing style is very good. It is rare to find a Slytherin heroine whose CP is Black. The heroine is smart and skillful. She is not a virgin but is powerful in her own right. She is elegant but not arrogant. She is a born rose princess with the beauty of thorns. The characterization and emotional line description are very delicate. The author updates it steadily. It is a book worth reading [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss]

The innovation of this article lies in the curse of the heroine's family and the rose wand. The shortcoming of this article is that Sirius doesn't make me feel particularly attractive at the moment (maybe it's just because he appeared not long ago, and the interaction with the heroine has just begun. Currently, all I can see is his godson Harry, and I look forward to the follow-up [get it]), except for his handsome face. Suggestions for this article: Please make the old man mature and responsible. Some of his current behaviors are still 🐶🐶's thinking mode [laughing] Sirius currently gives me the feeling of being uninhibited and unrestrained. Although he has this kind of character, the heroine is burdened with a curse. I don't want her to bear it silently. I hope there is a mature and reliable person to accompany her [almost crying] who can put the heroine first. She is too lonely [crying]

So pretty! The heroine is really super charming, and the emotional lines are handled very delicately and not abruptly. And I really like the way the heroine handles her feelings. After confirming her feelings, she does not shy away or be stupid. Even if there are conflicts, she will not cause a lot of unnecessary misunderstandings because of emotional problems. Who knows someone who really loves to open her mouth! ! ! The teacher wrote it very well and the plot logic is very smooth. I don't understand why the ratings and popularity are so low. Come on, teacher, don't be tired and don't take a break, it's not enough to watch [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Cute. Overall, it feels good, the plot develops steadily, and the narrative is always told at the pace of the heroine without forcing a relationship or being seriously OOC, which is very worthy of praise. I can't tell yet, and I wonder if the author will write about the Order of the Phoenix period, which feels very interesting. Occasionally, some sentences and settings are a little awkward. They are not strictly based on the research, but they can be ignored. However, the flaws are not concealed. The author is the kind of person who gets better and better as he writes. Keep up the good work and look forward to it. I just looked through the book reviews and felt that many people were talking about the age difference. I forgot to mention that I am completely fond of this book. I also asked about this book in the Xiaohongshu review (the female protagonist of the descendant generation x the male protagonist of the parent generation). The heroine is very cute and the article is very enjoyable. I just clicked on the author's homepage and found that the author has read many, many books, which is too strong... By the way, I feel that the ratings here are quite high. I will try to see if I can re-rate...

This book is super awesome and beautiful, even though its rating is a bit low. In fact, the writing is very good [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]. In fact, I think this book is quite enjoyable. The heroine is really wise and beautiful in the description, which is very consistent with Slytherin [love][love]. There are some paragraphs that are really interesting [laugh][laugh]

Oh My God! ! ! This is truly the most consistent with the original work among all the fanfics I have read! ! ! The description is particularly perfect, and the emotions between the female protagonist and the male protagonist are also very natural and consistent! ! ! Mom, this is so well written! It really fits Sirius very well, Al is also very good, and the most important thing is that it basically respects the original work and fills in some of the regrets of the original work! I especially post the original work, it's really good. Thank you, the author, for bringing us such a good fan. I will always follow you [crying][crying][crying]

My favorite in HP is Sirius. The heroine is portrayed so well. I really like the character of the heroine. Especially the ambiguous relationship between the heroine and Sirius is so over the top. I hope you will get more [crying][crying][crying][crying]

Super pretty! I like it best when the dog and Bao are having an affair. Although I feel a little bit unhappy because the dog is indeed a bit older and I feel that he is cheap, hahahaha, but the dog is also really handsome!