HP: Rose and Black Dog

The image of the heroine completely matches my view of Sirius cp. Beautiful (I feel that Sirius is a bit preoccupied with looks), pure-blooded but unconventional, rebellious at heart (quite consistent with Sirius, with the same values ​​and consumption views), shrewd (I feel that Sirius is a bit tired of stupidity and unlikely to accept stupid people), elegant and free and easy (it is inevitable that there will be the influence of family, and I feel disgusted with rigidity, not elegance).

There is a bit of a bug in the setting. The wand is so aggressive. Why would you make a special trip to the wand shop when you are not sure whether you will choose the heroine? If it is confirmed, then there will be more people who know the secret of the wand choosing the heroine, and there is no need to buy a wand. It is unnecessary to go to the wand shop; if the heroine is not chosen, the heroine will be drained of blood and die in front of Ollivander, and the family will become a joke () Although I know that Sister Bao will definitely win as the heroine, this setting is a bit strange. According to this logic, the previous family heads should have been selected. In this case, the conditions for selecting people do not seem to be so harsh? Or maybe the wands were put away and the family heads who went ahead didn't try? Wouldn't it be better to change it to cast a spell against your ability if you are selected, or to use the wand forcefully if you are not selected and it will be counterattacked? Of course, it's just my humble opinion. The author's writing is also good. Especially when he fought back against the troll to save Hermione in the first grade, the wand sucked blood and took root in his arm, and a rose grew out of it. The description was spectacular. Some of the little details are very cute, and they will always make you smile after reading them. X Harry always failed to review the potions class before the exam, and finally found out that it was because the weights were rusty. When he met Peeves, he lied to him and Bloody Balor became angry, so that Peeves interfered with Filch. When his mother improved the wolfsbane potion, he needed to make the werewolf energetic but not lose his mind, so he added beagle hair to it, etc. Very cute little settings! In terms of love, Sirius hasn't officially met each other yet, so there's nothing much to say, but it seems more like falling in love at first sight with each other's faces? I'm a little curious about how Harry will call the heroine after they get together www Looking forward to updates from the author

The author's writing style is very good. It is rare to find a Slytherin heroine whose CP is Black. The heroine is smart and skillful. She is not a virgin but is powerful in her own right. She is elegant but not arrogant. She is a born rose princess with the beauty of thorns. The characterization and emotional line description are very delicate. The author updates it steadily. It is a book worth reading [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss]

The innovation of this article lies in the curse of the heroine's family and the rose wand. The shortcoming of this article is that Sirius doesn't make me feel particularly attractive at the moment (maybe it's just because he appeared not long ago, and the interaction with the heroine has just begun. Currently, all I can see is his godson Harry, and I look forward to the follow-up [get it]), except for his handsome face. Suggestions for this article: Please make the old man mature and responsible. Some of his current behaviors are still 🐶🐶's thinking mode [laughing] Sirius currently gives me the feeling of being uninhibited and unrestrained. Although he has this kind of character, the heroine is burdened with a curse. I don't want her to bear it silently. I hope there is a mature and reliable person to accompany her [almost crying] who can put the heroine first. She is too lonely [crying]

So pretty! The heroine is really super charming, and the emotional lines are handled very delicately and not abruptly. And I really like the way the heroine handles her feelings. After confirming her feelings, she does not shy away or be stupid. Even if there are conflicts, she will not cause a lot of unnecessary misunderstandings because of emotional problems. Who knows someone who really loves to open her mouth! ! ! The teacher wrote it very well and the plot logic is very smooth. I don't understand why the ratings and popularity are so low. Come on, teacher, don't be tired and don't take a break, it's not enough to watch [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Cute. Overall, it feels good, the plot develops steadily, and the narrative is always told at the pace of the heroine without forcing a relationship or being seriously OOC, which is very worthy of praise. I can't tell yet, and I wonder if the author will write about the Order of the Phoenix period, which feels very interesting. Occasionally, some sentences and settings are a little awkward. They are not strictly based on the research, but they can be ignored. However, the flaws are not concealed. The author is the kind of person who gets better and better as he writes. Keep up the good work and look forward to it. I just looked through the book reviews and felt that many people were talking about the age difference. I forgot to mention that I am completely fond of this book. I also asked about this book in the Xiaohongshu review (the female protagonist of the descendant generation x the male protagonist of the parent generation). The heroine is very cute and the article is very enjoyable. I just clicked on the author's homepage and found that the author has read many, many books, which is too strong... By the way, I feel that the ratings here are quite high. I will try to see if I can re-rate...

This book is super awesome and beautiful, even though its rating is a bit low. In fact, the writing is very good [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]. In fact, I think this book is quite enjoyable. The heroine is really wise and beautiful in the description, which is very consistent with Slytherin [love][love]. There are some paragraphs that are really interesting [laugh][laugh]

Oh My God! ! ! This is truly the most consistent with the original work among all the fanfics I have read! ! ! The description is particularly perfect, and the emotions between the female protagonist and the male protagonist are also very natural and consistent! ! ! Mom, this is so well written! It really fits Sirius very well, Al is also very good, and the most important thing is that it basically respects the original work and fills in some of the regrets of the original work! I especially post the original work, it's really good. Thank you, the author, for bringing us such a good fan. I will always follow you [crying][crying][crying]

My favorite in HP is Sirius. The heroine is portrayed so well. I really like the character of the heroine. Especially the ambiguous relationship between the heroine and Sirius is so over the top. I hope you will get more [crying][crying][crying][crying]

The heroine is very cute. Sirius is such a dog. Hahahaha, let him feel the sting of love. The heroine just needs to enjoy~

Super pretty! I like it best when the dog and Bao are having an affair. Although I feel a little bit unhappy because the dog is indeed a bit older and I feel that he is cheap, hahahaha, but the dog is also really handsome!

Very good-looking Sirius x original girl. Although there is an age difference, there is no strong discomfort when watching it. The maturity and strength of the heroine make up for this feeling. The characterization and storyline are smooth. The only regret is that it is not finished, I really want to read it in one go!

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Ahhh, it looks so good, it looks so good, I really want to press the author to the keyboard and write three times a day! It describes the shrewd ambition and kindness of the little snake, looking forward to the fierce collision with the fiery lion.

Truly the most perfect Slytherin I could imagine. Hey, my favorite character in the original book is Sirius, he is so charming [crying] This book is written very smoothly, but maybe most of the key nodes in the original work overlap. When you read it, you will feel that a new heroine has been added on the basis of the original Three Musketeers, so the major nodes will feel repetitive. Another shortcoming may be that the emotional line between the heroine and Sirius is not particularly deep, because the heroine is really awesome! ! I think anyone who is with her will be happy [crying] Hey!

The young couple is sweet, and there is no deliberate description in the book. The plot is natural and innovative [Adoration] The early stage preparation is very good, and the image of the heroine Al is very vivid [Sending Hearts] It's he, the sweetness is really reassuring 😌 Babies who like cookies can come in Kangkang [Blowing Kisses] [Blowing Kisses]

The author's writing is really good. This is the most personal to Sirius among all the fanfics I have read. The arrogance and madness in Sirius's bones are really well explained. And our precious heroine Al is really a girl with a very charming personality. I see that Wen is about to join the AI sect, hahaha. The emotional lines of the other two people are really invincible and so exciting! ! ! ! The characters are super big dogs and arrogant cats. The author's writing is so delicious 55555. It's just that Sirius was a little slow to appear. However, the author's great writing and plot in the early stage really made me forget that there is Sirius. Hahahahahaha

Looks good, looks good, looks good. She seems to be the first female protagonist who is the Minister of Magic in a fanfiction that I have seen. She is a careerist and a changer. She is so handsome that I am spinning around in circles! The male protagonist Sirius is also a great addition🌚The female protagonist is so charming that it doesn't matter who the male protagonist is because she will ignore him haha

Nice! Cp is the hp text of cialis. The heroine is ambitious and ambitious. She has made her goals clear from the beginning. She is a reformer. The pure-blood family setting is very consistent with the characteristics of the Snake Yard. She is also a heartthrob. The main plot is also available. The writing is also good. The emotional line with Sirius in the early stage is very good, but I don't like the conflict in the middle. I can understand that because of Sirius's character and that he didn't want the heroine to be harmed, he didn't tell the heroine, and hid it in the name of protection. To me, the emotional line here is a bit off.

Hurry up. It's so beautiful. The reason why the rating didn't go up is simply because the number of words is too few. More would definitely make it popular.

It's so cool, I love watching the girls in the Snake Yard having sex! The male protagonist, Sirius, was the first to watch the female protagonist of Snake Yard and Sirius. I couldn't accept it at first, but after reading more than ten chapters, I fell in love with it! ! (｡>∀<｡)

It's a good fanfic if you lose your mind. The heroine's personal and emotional lines are quite interesting except for a little bit of Mary Sue. The CP in the early and middle stages is delicious. In the following demining, in addition to changing the age, there are also a lot of logic bugs. For example, the heroine is a pure-blood family with Muggle royal blood. For example, Harry has learned Occlumency, which he could not learn. For example, when talking about the queen, Sirius is like a cucumber and egg, and there is very little else...

It's a rare book about the heroine and Sirius in the era. I like the setting. The heroine is sober, independent and strong. The relationship between the heroine and Sirius during the ambiguous period in the early stage is so interesting. The pace of the follow-up is a bit too fast. The plot is driven by emotions, which is a pity, but it does not affect the author's writing style. The logic is clear and beautiful.

Super pretty! ! ! It's really beautiful! ! ! My aunt always laughed, the heroine is very strong, and Sirius is so easy to fight with, and the author's writing is great! ! The descriptions are very vivid and the language is humorous. I saw a fairy tale in Tomato! !

Harry will go shopping for his godmother. Okay, okay, Harry has grown up too.

This feeling is okay, because I prefer to watch young couples get along, so I skipped through it, and I basically didn't read some settings [thinking], but it is still good ^ω^ When I have time, I will start reading from the first chapter

As I watched it, I couldn't help but turn on my computer and rewatch Harry Potter. It's so well written! I've been following it since the beginning of the update, and it's getting better and better, hahahaha [Adoration]

It looks good, but I feel that the ratings and popularity are a bit low. The plot and emotional lines are very reasonable, and the heroine's character is also very good.

It's really, really beautiful, and the author's writing is very good [laughs]

This book is really good. The female protagonist is smart and witty but also very calm. The male protagonist Sirius is the most consistent with the original book I have ever seen. He is really not OOC at all, especially Snape, who is not the kind who can only speak splendens. The whole book has delicate emotions, a smooth plot, and great descriptions. It has the excitement of fighting, political games, and emotional advancement. All in all, it's not a bad sight!