You Are Back from the Ninja World and You Want Me to Play Love Games with You?

Um. . . Give me some suggestions, okay or not, I have the following views 1. The fullness of the characters should not be reflected in the number of words. You have written it as a story. The daily line is too long and too bland. Now I just think your book is good, but because the plot is too bland, I will save 100-200 chapters. Many readers like me will save chapters, and if things go on like this, your book will die. So in other people's novels, Kavin, Kavin is here. When the critical moment comes, please listen to the decomposition next time, and you can read it next time. 2. There must be a battle line, but don't just attack ordinary people. It may be a new book. I will write about it later, but I still want to say that there must be a battle line. 3. Don't show the love line too early, but the length of your article makes me feel like it's what you want to write. That is, just like your title, don't play the love game too early. [Laughing evilly] 4. Don't write too much in the high school line. There are many things you can't write in the high school line. Get to the college line as soon as possible. Don't cover the whole book. Finally, you can learn the writing ideas from Master Shadow [Smile], and become a powerful shadow person. If you haven't read it, you can take a look. You can use it if you change the ideas of this cool article template. The above is just my personal suggestion. I am not teaching the author how to write. I just think it looks better when written this way.

The pace is slow, but it feels like a trap for a rebirth and immortality novel. The main reason is that the author describes too little about Naruto. It's just a good book. It doesn't drag people down and solves problems very efficiently. Summary: This is a good book

I still prefer fantasy quizzes, and this book also has a way to make up for my regrets. Now that I think about it, I really don't have any worries before. I hope the author can work harder ٩(๑^o^๑)۶

The overall look and feel is pretty good. Overall, the writing is very good and the plot flow is good. However, from what I have seen so far, the sense of group portraits is too strong, and the depiction of the protagonist is seriously weakened. Most of it is used for narrative and talking about other characters. Come on.

Give yourself a little sweetness first

Japanese), the plot is unique and interesting, with a little bit of Naruto. It is recommended for book friends who like to read daily campus literature. The author has a more detailed explanation in the private parts. Although there is a suspicion of the word "water" [laughing], overall it is worth reading [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

The protagonist is very strong, but he doesn't come back with such domineering power and then succeed all the way. The writing is very natural and close to life, and each character is very full.

The group portrait is very well written, I love reading it.

The writing is pretty good, but I feel like the protagonist's appearance rate is a bit low.

It looks good, but it's too short, but the author is quite tight [laughing] The theme is related to Naruto, but the plots related to Naruto are becoming less and less later on. But other than this, everything else is okay. It becomes more and more popular later on. It can be read for leisure when there is no book to read.

Let's break it up, don't be silent and touch it

People in the village still need to help each other.

Author, I think your writing is very good and the plot is smooth. Although there are some flaws in some places, keep up the good work👍🏻

One of the most comfortable books in this genre. The plot is not a mindless revenge novel. I hope someone can recommend a book similar to this one [Chigua]

I think it's very good

Writes a taste of life [like]

Looking for something like this

Haokang, Aikang, I'll do better next time

If you don't poke your fat intestines, you will feel faint

If the follow-up quality does not decline, I can give it five stars.

Dodai is quite to my liking. Give it a try.

It's okay, but it feels a little cute.

Very good, very good. I see the shadow of my old friend in this book. I hope I can write it down well. It took almost three years to write the courtyard book. I hope you can write it for as long.

It's a good book, not mindless. It's a bit like Kusuo Saiki but not as light.

Very good daily writing, very relaxing to read

It looks good and feels relaxed. Come on, more updates [eating melon] [like]

The way Naruto writes it is very beautiful in modern campus.

It looks good. There shouldn't be any spiritual energy recovery or anything like that.

Looks good, five stars straight away

Good! I like it, the writing is very good [shy][shy][shy]