[School Life] [Everyday Life] [Naruto] [Supernatural]
A glitch in a Rubik's Cube sends Lin An, the Fifth Hokage, back to his student days.
In 2015, the gears of fate begin to turn.
A ninja slips in among the new students at Nanjiang No. 2 High School.
As someone once wrote: “I wanted to buy osmanthus wine and sail with you, but youth is never quite the same again.”
But remember: “Know that in your youth, you aspired to reach the clouds and vowed to be the finest person in the world.”
Also known as:
"You Rejected My Devotion, Now I Became a Ninja and You Regret It?"
"A Record of the Hokage's Everyday Life"
"Thanks for Asking, I'm in High School and Already Invincible"
(A modern-day slice-of-life story with a large ensemble cast. Readers who haven't seen Naruto can jump right in without worry.)
Um. . . Give me some suggestions, okay or not, I have the following views 1. The fullness of the characters should not be reflected in the number of words. You have written it as a story. The daily line is too long and too bland. Now I just think your book is good, but because the plot is too bland, I will save 100-200 chapters. Many readers like me will save chapters, and if things go on like this, your book will die. So in other people's novels, Kavin, Kavin is here. When the critical moment comes, please listen to the decomposition next time, and you can read it next time. 2. There must be a battle line, but don't just attack ordinary people. It may be a new book. I will write about it later, but I still want to say that there must be a battle line. 3. Don't show the love line too early, but the length of your article makes me feel like it's what you want to write. That is, just like your title, don't play the love game too early. 😏 4. Don't write too much in the high school line. There are many things you can't write in the high school line. Get to the college line as soon as possible. Don't cover the whole book. Finally, you can learn the writing ideas from Master Shadow [Smile], and become a powerful shadow person. If you haven't read it, you can take a look. You can use it if you change the ideas of this cool article template. The above is just my personal suggestion. I am not teaching the author how to write. I just think it looks better when written this way.
The pace is slow, but it feels like a trap for a rebirth and immortality novel. The main reason is that the author describes too little about Naruto. It's just a good book. It doesn't drag people down and solves problems very efficiently. Summary: This is a good book
The overall look and feel is pretty good. Overall, the writing is very good and the plot flow is good. However, from what I have seen so far, the sense of group portraits is too strong, and the depiction of the protagonist is seriously weakened. Most of it is used for narrative and talking about other characters. Come on.
I still prefer fantasy quizzes, and this book also has a way to make up for my regrets. Now that I think about it, I really don't have any worries before. I hope the author can work harder ٩(๑^o^๑)۶
Give yourself a little sweetness first
Japanese), the plot is unique and interesting, with a little bit of Naruto. It is recommended for book friends who like to read daily campus literature. The author has a more detailed explanation in the private parts. Although there is a suspicion of the word "water" [laughing], overall it is worth reading [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]
The protagonist is very strong, but he doesn't come back with such domineering power and then succeed all the way. The writing is very natural and close to life, and each character is very full.
The writing is pretty good, but I feel like the protagonist's appearance rate is a bit low.
The group portrait is very well written, I love reading it.
It looks good, but it's too short, but the author is quite tight🤭 The theme is related to Naruto, but the plots related to Naruto are becoming less and less later on. But other than this, everything else is okay. It becomes more and more popular later on. It can be read for leisure when there is no book to read.