I Developed Holy Grail War and the Whole World Went Crazy.

To be honest, it's better than I expected. The originally serious Holy Grail War was made into a game with a few entertainment anchors, which actually caused a wonderful chemical reaction. In addition, the author also has his own understanding. The heroic spirits are not limited to Dongmu's fixed characters, but FGO's All the servants are included, and the Holy Grail War is both funny and serious at the same time. My evaluation is that the future is promising. My suggestion is that the barrage comments can be streamlined, there can be more barrage at the climax of the story, and there can be less barrage during normal plots, etc.

The writing is great... But please give Jason a highlight! ! ! ! Obviously the setting of the Noble Phantasm is very NB, but it has not been used in FGO. Once it was the enemy position, maybe even the Noble Phantasm was not designed, and once it was the friendly position, but the Noble Phantasm was targeted and could not be used [laughing]

Very good, except that the protagonist is a bit redundant [face covering] There could be less chapters with the protagonist Generally speaking, the main focus of this book is the battle. Since the book is set for a game, it can bring together characters in the game who cannot fight in the animation, and the author's writing style can describe the scene without making the characters OOC. The occasional barrage can also adjust the atmosphere. I think it is worth reading [smile]

It's a very good Fate fanfic that makes me give it a five-star rating. The plot of different authors meeting and colliding through the game of chicken is not bad. Although it is obvious that other Holy Grail War venues will be opened later in the book, I don't know how the author made a difference from the current model. In short, the author continues to write Different servants will be on the stage with the players, and the barrage will be enough to make crazy comments. By the way, it is a pity that the narration of the melee archer comment instead of the barrage response will be given. The rest is that I hope the author will continue to write about the servants in detail. It is a pity that Achilles' dueling gun did not work. To avoid misunderstanding, let me say it again. The detailed description of servants refers to the same as the host's first round of the game. It not only reflects the combat power of the servants, but also has explanations about the noble phantoms, and also reflects the character design, and the fact that everyone has to lick their wives together. I hope that the author of the current round of games can write about Nero and Bartoli, the two wife servants. There are too many female servants waiting.

Xinadia is my belief, Xinadia is my answer! 😫 No! ... Xinadia is different... Only Xinadia is different——! 😡 Xinadia... Is different from anyone else. 😌 Because Xinadia's name... Is very nice. Just thinking about it makes me feel safe. That's the most holy melody in the world... I don't want to omit it. 🤗 Xinadia is the true god of Luoxing. He chose this star, ignited the fire buried deep in the ground, and the barren planet had a dancing heart. 🥰 He guards life and civilization. He loves us with all his heart, and truly rejoices in all that He protects. 🥵 He is the most beautiful god in the vast universe. Time can never wither Him. You must remember His existence with me and never forget His name. 😄 Xinadia is the true god of Luoxing. He inscribes truth and humility into the soul, and the ignorant life emerges from confusion.

I feel like it's not that I can't accept the reality line at all. The main reason is that it's love at the beginning. The battle in our game is in full swing. As soon as the perspective changes, it goes back to the love that you pull me away from. There is no intense battle phase in reality, which means that the tension is broken. Moreover, the previous content may not have fully grasped the audience's idea of ​​reading. Everyone's expectations for this novel are not that slow-burning. I can't accept the slow rhythm of the emotional line, and if you have two lines, the slow update speed will make the rhythm look bad. The Zhenhun Street animation was originally a two-line animation. Although both lines are very exciting, and the foreshadowing of the two sides is eliminated together, it is really uncomfortable to watch in the middle. Ah, I want to watch this and that, and I feel like watching two animations that are updated every two weeks. It is really annoying. I regret it. I won't watch it now. The anime about password and Fsf hasn't come out yet. It spoiled me a lot. I'll watch it after I finish watching the anime.

Watching the real-life plot, I always feel that the protagonist wants to be the real-life cave king [face covering]

I have to say that in the template article of copying games, movies and animations for various competitions, the writing is very good. Or even if it is expanded to a game article, it is still well written. Especially in the online mode, there is no hard copying, but my own adaptation. I read it again. The shortcoming is that the writing was a bit green at the beginning, when Lao Ma first meets Du Mao Wang, and the situation is slightly ambiguous. I feel that the author has never been in love. The advantage is that most of the subsequent characters, the interactions between players and heroic spirits are written very well. Speaking of which, this is the first time I have seen such an interesting author write the second part. There are many good books that do not violate the world background. However, in modern cities where everyone is playing games, the second part of this book is not awkward but interesting. I have not seen that often. I feel that if I have the opportunity to run a group with the author or play a board game as a teammate, it will be very immersive.

I have already reviewed @Charybutis. I won't say much more. I just suggest that the author writes more stories about knowing how to participate in the war. The plot is memorized and the settings are clear. There are more inner dramas that appear to understand the world view. I feel that the viewing experience will be good. Tomato has seen such a novel that has the temperament of the Holy Grail Group [Like]

Very nice to look at. But I was wondering if I could add one. And a heroic spirit. There is a great understanding or a very amazing moment. Or the kind with heavy emotions. When calling him again. It will add a momentary memory. But it shouldn't be possible [exploration]

In fact, if there is such a game, there is a high probability that many people will randomly summon heroic spirits at the beginning, and then directly commit suicide and restart if the class of the heroic spirit is wrong or the strength of the heroic spirit is not good, or if the form is wrong, they will surrender or commit suicide and restart. This is the fastest way to farm holy relics. There are also those who directly add command spells and black mud to engage in Avengers at the beginning, and directly kill teammates in 7V7 team matches, which really ruins other people's gaming experience. Normal ranked matches should be restricted, otherwise the game time of this ranked match will be so long, and the frustration will be filled directly when encountering this kind of thing. Although we all know that this is a feature of the Holy Grail War, we still hope that the protagonist can really optimize the gaming experience for ordinary players as if such a game is actually operating. Moreover, the probabilities of winning games for different Heroic Spirits vary greatly, so why not increase the rewards that weak Heroic Spirits receive when they win.

It's pretty good. I thought of this kind of subject matter at first sight as a variety comic. I didn't expect the author to write something very interesting. The various settings are very flexible and tolerant. The author has simply opened up a new track for fate stories (at least I haven't heard of it). I hope the author will work hard [like]

I want to see something like the heroic dormitory or the dimensional dormitory. A group of students take the dormitory to open up the dimension, fight with their childhood heroes, and change some bad endings. The roommate's buddy turns into a woman (don't change and marry). Merlin likes to knock other people's sap with his clairvoyance. Merlin's clairvoyance seems to be able to see things. Go, now in the future, Solomon's seems to only be able to see the future, Merlin and Mellie become real brother and sister, Solomon is a top student, Arash wants to play every day, Sad Brother is tone-deaf, he wants Nero and Oda Nobunaga's guitar, and holds a concert, because it is too powerful, it may trigger the salvation seal of the old sword (I used to have a roommate whose singing was difficult to listen to. I know it myself, but he would use his weird tunes to make others laugh. He would also be happy when he saw others happy. I don't know what he was thinking. I respect him.) Gawain wanted to use homemade mashed potatoes to fill the king's stomach, Emiya's unlimited kitchen utensils, use the sky garden to elbow the boss, everyone crashed, learned the charged flash (there is a magic in Mo Yi that I forgot), and some people successfully transformed from a plain to a mountain. I regret it. Sooner or later, I will cut this thing off and chop it into fine pieces. A group of roommates will put the First Emperor on the altar and worship him on the spot. The Heroic Spirit Dormitory in 2019. Unfortunately, it was really uncomfortable to cut it off.

This is a bunch of Fate articles that I have read, and one of the standout ones is probably not a traditional Fate fan novel, but made into a game. It mainly talks about things that happen in the game. The author's writing style is very good, and the plot is also very good. However, if the conditions are feasible, I would like to read serious fan fiction, mainly to see the corresponding reactions of players, but this does not mean that the author's original works are not good.

When will we have some unconventional masters [laughing evilly] and let players see the values ​​​​of ur master Gudazi or 2 SSR + master Zabizi [laughing evilly]

Very interesting [Like] (This is my first time watching Fate. The most I have seen before is Fate anime or adapted into a live-action version)

It's pretty good. I suggest you write less plots related to love.

Holy Grail War is fun! I want to see rivers of blood flowing. It's really exciting to watch the progress of the game so far.

Awesomely written fate fanfic The descriptions of heroic spirits and battle scenes are both well written. What impressed me most was the battle between Nero and Drake with their high-burning treasure phantoms, and the fact that Shining and Xiao En still fell in love and killed each other. Because it is combined with reality, for the content, players play the role of masters and participate in several different modes of the Holy Grail War. In the secondary setting of the game, players control Holy Grail War characters. Special attack props such as being able to participate in the battle as a director and origin bombs are quite good. The linkage with real people, like Lao Ma's abstract live broadcast, is quite interesting. The friendship between the heroic spirits and the characters is also very touching. I show my sincerity to my king and fight Rome again with my god. I combined the author's experience to write something different, which is very well received! (There was a break in the reading time and I couldn't connect) Alas, the writing is quite good, but it's a pity that the author had to finish it quickly for some reasons. It leaves me with a lot of things that I still want to read, and there are still a lot of things and content that can be written. I can only say that I wish the author to continue working hard [face covering]

It's rare to write about the Holy Grail War so well. However, some of the realistic scenes in the early stage and the viewing part in the middle are not very good, but I just skipped it (I just skipped it), so it is still a five-star review [Blow kiss][Blow kiss]

One thing to say, this is really beautiful. The author also listened to the advice, saying that he didn't like reality and only wanted to watch games, so he basically only updated games.

The first part is pretty good, but the author obviously brings himself into the later part. Once the protagonist appears, everyone is a stepping stone.

When I saw the chapter about fighting Shuten, I couldn't stand it. After all, I still like Shuten, although I understand that this is a fight and you can't hold back. Alas... Forget it, the author's big words are still good-looking, so please give me a gift to support it.

Highlights: The Holy Grail War between players, the interaction between different players and heroic spirits, it feels like the Holy Grail War, there are joys and touching moments. Advantages: The author is very good at listening to suggestions, so humble. The writing and plot are basically harmless Disadvantages: The realistic plot routines are boring, but the author has deleted most of them and marked the realistic chapters, which can be skipped without affecting reading.

The author is great. I read this book when you first started writing it. Have you ever thought about a track? This track is definitely not available on Tomato at the moment. It plays the moon on the sky screen and then projects it to ancient times for the ancients to see. Then it introduces some settings, characters, etc. When will the author's book be released?

Will Chaldea appear later? I want to see the Chaldean succubus enchant everyone! ! !

It's very nice to watch and very interesting. I think the settings are very well borrowed and the overall story is very smooth. If possible, I hope the author can release a DLC for Pinoconi to fight the Holy Grail War in a different place and try new map settings. For example, how can we win the Holy Grail War without dying? [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile]

The subject matter is very old but the writing is very fresh. In particular, it does not have a good reputation as a "TV plot". The only drawback is that it is not very friendly to newcomers. Only Holy Grail fans can understand the whole story!

It is said that even Lu Bu from Zhenhun Street has appeared, so let's add another one. In the ranking promotion competition, there will be a certain chance of randomly randomly entering the body of one of the Thunder Emperor, Ice Boy, and Fire General [cool]. You can advance by winning or surviving to the end [smile]

Okay, I support the author. If you don't run away, I will continue reading.