Super God: Beginning of the Dark Universe Legend

Don't mess around, pretend you can, but try not to insult the Man of Light, and judging from what the Man of Light is like, even if he may die, he can't be persuaded to transform.

The writing is good and makes people feel comfortable, especially the part that introduces the Kingdom of Light. However, due to the system writing, the Ultra spirit is lost. I think it can pave the way for the protagonist to have a true Ultra spirit later.

What a hearty stone-eating experience😋

A perfect Ultra fan, the protagonist is the same as Babar

The theme is quite novel. I haven't seen Ultraman from the Super Seminary very often. The character of Mebius played by the protagonist is okay, at least it is not broken, but there is one thing that makes me feel uncomfortable. The author writes that the world of Ultraman merges with the world of Super God, which leads to the arrival of monsters. It is okay to let the protagonist draw a lottery and summon monsters to appear. It is a bit against the spirit of Ultraman, but overall it is still good.

The writing is very good. Tomato also had a book about Ultra+Super God before, with a rating of 9.5 Or above. Unfortunately, it was discontinued for more than a year. The one without system was a time travel by Brother Quasi. The level of this book can be said to be only lower than that one. Returning to this book, the protagonist has a certain Ultra spirit, the battle strength and plot are reasonable, and the emotional line develops normally. If you can persist, you will definitely become a god.

It's well written. I hope you won't mess with it. You can edit it slowly, just like leveling up and fighting monsters. I've also read the same type of script, and it flew into the sky after only a few dozen chapters. I have no desire to continue reading.

… How should I put it, it feels a bit weird. It is better to use Mebius than Zeta or Orb. There are many holsters that can borrow power. You can also introduce the background of the situation when you get the power of the seniors. An immature newcomer gradually grows into a reliable hero. You can also start as a pure human plus Heir of Light. Use the Zeta Sublimator as a transformer. You can insert other Ultraman cards, such as Orb and Geed. Scenario: Pick up the sublimator, take out Ultraman Zeta's card with your right hand, and insert it. Li Lin - Access allowed! Ultraman Zeta! Put in three Ultra Medals. Tiga! Take it! Gaia! "Ultraman Zeta - Gamma Future!" Raise your left hand high! A beam of light shot up into the sky, surrounded by three golden rays of light. The golden giant appeared, accompanied by a floating golden light.

The writing is very good. It is undeniable that this does have some small flaws. The front part may be a little flawed, but the back part is good. Those who want to see pure Ultra spirit may be disappointed. But if you don't pursue the pure spirit of Austria, you can give it a try. (Recommended by old bookworms)

I really like Ultraman. If you want to watch Ultraman, you can leave after reading the first three chapters. After three chapters, there will be Shi [eating melon]

It's so delicious. Let's eat together😛😛

The girl sings beautiful songs She is singing the eagle of the prairie She is singing about her beloved She also hides her lover's letters She is singing about her beloved She also hides her lover's letters Ah, this singing girl's singing voice Follow the bright sun and fly away Soldiers heading to distant frontiers Convey Katyusha's greetings

Good-looking (●—●) Overall, it's quite good-looking, although there are some shortcomings. But if you write more, refine your writing, and listen to opinions, it will definitely be good. Also, it's too little and not enough to read and update. After all, this kind of subject matter is a bit rare. I've only read a few of Ultra and Super God's books on Tomato at the moment.

I think we can design a mastermind behind the scenes, how about a little golden man? Anyway, this guy is a veteran of time and space travel [you take a closer look]

I give it four stars. Overall, it's a good Ultra fanfic. The main character is Mebius. This is the first time I've seen an Ultra fanfic with Mebius as the main character. Overall, it looks pretty good. There are just a few common problems that you can't avoid if you're a super god fan. You love angels and you hate super god schools. Moreover, in this book, it's not the protagonist licking the angel, but the angel standing on the protagonist's side and trusting the protagonist too much. The overall strength is okay. No big cuts. There must be some, after all, the Ultra's combat power is a bit outrageous. My idea is that the Kingdom of Light has gone to other universes instead of perishing. This is easier to explain. Because it is difficult to completely destroy the Kingdom of Light with its size. Even if it does die, the data will remain, unless it disappears silently. Ultraman has only one mechanical Saivin, and the next chapter should be the real Ultraman. After all, in this situation, the real Ultraman will most likely come to the rescue. Overall, it looks pretty good. It's very nice. This is the first time I've seen such an article.

[Shocked] No, it was recommended to me. I clicked in and watched it for so long. I don't know. [Thinking] Broken! It must have been Huang Fan's doing. He hypnotized me, it must have been. [Punch hard]

So pretty, kids. I am the Akaashi hero.

I thought there were more than a dozen chapters to read. It is my duty to recast the legend of the Kingdom of Light, the author.

At present, the number of updated chapters in this book is still too few, so I can't see much. But for now, this book is a very good book with great potential. Although there are some inevitable common problems in Super Seminary fan fiction, these small flaws cannot cover up the excellence of this entire book. I personally have not read Super Seminary, but I have also read many Super Seminary fan fiction. As for Ultraman, I am an old Ultraman fan. Although I want to write more reviews, the number of updated chapters in this book is still too few, so if I really want to evaluate it, there is actually nothing to say. The subject matter is not new, but the problem is not big. The overall storyline is also acceptable. The character creation can only be said to be average. After all, it is just reusing the character creation of the original work, and at most adding some of my own understanding or adaptation. The above are purely personal opinions, please don't criticize if you don't like them. If you have different opinions, please discuss them in a friendly manner. If there are any mistakes, please point them out.

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How should I put it, the way the plot can be connected and the story behind it is very novel, but it feels inconsistent no matter how you look at it. Especially the front feels weird. But I can feel the plot's perfection later on… I can watch it!

The writing is okay. Some people have been saying that the protagonist has problems. First, he was on the original planet and he really helped others. Secondly, when the Earth summoned the Kirialodians, they also gave instructions to the Kirielodians not to harm humans. His ideas may be bad, but what he did is indeed in line with the spirit of Ultra

It's very interesting, but I also hope that the protagonist will gradually have the spirit of Ultra in the future.

I think the Deturaiga gun, which I think can be used to write a memory-type dream, was sent to Xiao Meng using meteor technology.

There is nothing poisonous at the moment. I hope the author can reveal more about the Kingdom of Light and give a little shock to the world of super gods.

Finally found the article I wanted to read

I hope the protagonist can grow from an actor to a real Ultra Warrior

Come on, come on! I also work hard to make money so that I can give you rewards, come on! Very well written.

Excellent, excellent, excellent, you have to put together five words to pronounce it

It's pretty good-looking. If you're used to it, you'll think it's beautiful. If you're not used to it, you'll think it's shit. It varies from person to person. [Covering face] Looks like he got high