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Recommended, Fangzheng feels cuter now that he has a brain
A very good continuation, although there are some flaws, but overall it is still very good.
You may think that accepting a girl is inappropriate and the character will be ruined, but is this really the case? I just briefly talk about my opinions.
First, Fang Yuan has just been reborn, and her strength is too low. To put it bluntly, killing you is like crushing an ant, and she has no power to resist. Second, he has no feelings for these women. If he had the choice, he would definitely not take this path. Third, Fang Yuan herself doesn't care about these things. Like her clone Li Xiaobai, she and his wife also have sex with each other many times. Li Xiaobai has no choice, but in the final analysis, the clone is still the main body. To achieve the goal, he must use any means and choose the path with the greatest benefit. Fourth, the biggest reason why Fang Yuan's rebirth in the original work is not like this is that without this condition, he can easily obtain so many benefits. If you let him just take a wife or something and get so many benefits, he may be happier than Leshan Leshui.
Everyone feels that the contradiction is great because they really have not seen through the true demonic nature of Fang Yuan. I was the same before. After watching the early stage of Gu, I felt that he killed for profit. Later, when he touched the little girl's head, he became even more hypocritical and stopped killing after he became an immortal. Only then did he realize that this was the real immortal (devil) [laughter]
Some minor issues, such as Gu Zun still felt that the third level was strong and exciting, which was really embarrassing. However, when there are few Gu articles and the quality is low, Fang Zheng is still the protagonist. More encouragement should be given. Come on, author! [Laugh]
I didn't expect that I could read the Daai Xianzun fanfic on Tomato. I wanted to imitate the real person, so I might as well forget it, as long as I don't be too brainless.
The author writes about Fang Zheng's rebirth and Fang Yuan's third episode. I just hope the author can write more about Fang Zheng. After all, he still has a lot of room to grow.
I hope to see Fang Zheng become the Blood Immortal Lord in the following content.
A fan who has been ganked by Shenhe all the time and has a really good source of content.
It's rare to see such high-quality fan fiction, but the original text is very different from here, and this is my 1000th comment, so I leave it to you [laughing evilly]
Chapter 1 is still under review, I haven't read Chapter 1 yet
But I have some questions, which is why Fang Yuan accepted Fang Zheng's changes calmly? According to the original text, shouldn't he be more vigilant or something? Why did you accept it so calmly? Is it what the first chapter said? Also, Fang Zheng was reborn. After all, he has lived for many years. However, he still feels a little nervous when something happens. Shouldn't everyone be more sensible?
If anyone can answer my doubts, please speak freely. Please, please.
Everything else is okay. If you don't care about the first point, the plot is pretty good. That's okay.
Come on, come on, come on✊
Why are you reviewing the first section? [Sinister smile]
As soon as I clicked on Chapter 1, it was reviewed and I gave it five stars.
Very well written in the fanfic
Very good, made by a fan
Support, must support
Got beaten by tomatoes
Why don't you write it? What's behind
Good! But it's just good.
It's pretty good, very good.
The writing style is similar to the original, and the squareness is also very cute.
Recommended, Fangzheng feels cuter now that he has a brain
A very good continuation, although there are some flaws, but overall it is still very good. You may think that accepting a girl is inappropriate and the character will be ruined, but is this really the case? I just briefly talk about my opinions. First, Fang Yuan has just been reborn, and her strength is too low. To put it bluntly, killing you is like crushing an ant, and she has no power to resist. Second, he has no feelings for these women. If he had the choice, he would definitely not take this path. Third, Fang Yuan herself doesn't care about these things. Like her clone Li Xiaobai, she and his wife also have sex with each other many times. Li Xiaobai has no choice, but in the final analysis, the clone is still the main body. To achieve the goal, he must use any means and choose the path with the greatest benefit. Fourth, the biggest reason why Fang Yuan's rebirth in the original work is not like this is that without this condition, he can easily obtain so many benefits. If you let him just take a wife or something and get so many benefits, he may be happier than Leshan Leshui. Everyone feels that the contradiction is great because they really have not seen through the true demonic nature of Fang Yuan. I was the same before. After watching the early stage of Gu, I felt that he killed for profit. Later, when he touched the little girl's head, he became even more hypocritical and stopped killing after he became an immortal. Only then did he realize that this was the real immortal (devil) [laughter] Some minor issues, such as Gu Zun still felt that the third level was strong and exciting, which was really embarrassing. However, when there are few Gu articles and the quality is low, Fang Zheng is still the protagonist. More encouragement should be given. Come on, author! [Laugh]
I didn't expect that I could read the Daai Xianzun fanfic on Tomato. I wanted to imitate the real person, so I might as well forget it, as long as I don't be too brainless. The author writes about Fang Zheng's rebirth and Fang Yuan's third episode. I just hope the author can write more about Fang Zheng. After all, he still has a lot of room to grow. I hope to see Fang Zheng become the Blood Immortal Lord in the following content.
A fan who has been ganked by Shenhe all the time and has a really good source of content.
It's rare to see such high-quality fan fiction, but the original text is very different from here, and this is my 1000th comment, so I leave it to you [laughing evilly]
Chapter 1 is still under review, I haven't read Chapter 1 yet But I have some questions, which is why Fang Yuan accepted Fang Zheng's changes calmly? According to the original text, shouldn't he be more vigilant or something? Why did you accept it so calmly? Is it what the first chapter said? Also, Fang Zheng was reborn. After all, he has lived for many years. However, he still feels a little nervous when something happens. Shouldn't everyone be more sensible? If anyone can answer my doubts, please speak freely. Please, please. Everything else is okay. If you don't care about the first point, the plot is pretty good. That's okay.
Come on, come on, come on✊
Why are you reviewing the first section? [Sinister smile]
As soon as I clicked on Chapter 1, it was reviewed and I gave it five stars.
Very well written in the fanfic
Very good, made by a fan
Support, must support
Got beaten by tomatoes
Why don't you write it? What's behind
Good! But it's just good.
It's pretty good, very good.
The writing style is similar to the original, and the squareness is also very cute.